MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 25 & Rule Breaker 6 Pg 89 - Page 61

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Hello Anu, hope you had a wonderful weekend

thanks for the pm and update


Chapter 10

Agonising update…majestically written

Thank God Geet gained her consciousness

Geet's fears were reasonable

after all Maan sowed this fear in her

sad seeing her plead to Maan not take her Advay away

Gosh she fainted again

Maan's concerned for Geet was justified

oh no she needed to be admitted to hospital

well her condition is serious

at least Arjun and dadima were with Maan

SD's thoughts were justified

of cos Maan thinks about what Geet said before she fainted

great that Maan realised that he is responsible for Geet's condition

so Maan berated himself

hate that he hurt Geet so much

now he understood Geet's fears

Past.....

angry how Maan behaved with Geet

he was so harsh with her

oh she knew he fell in love with her

as expected he denied

just to hide his feelings, he hurt Geet

upset that he insulted her

admire that Geet was determined to win his love

but Maan did not want Geet to win

he then broke her by saying that he going to spend the night with Sameera

Geet was naturally shattered

sad that he assumed that Geet tricked him to marry him

disgusting Sameera

she had no right to taunt Geet

pleased that Maan put Sameera in her place

at least Maan did not touch her

Maan's behavior with Geet was horrendous

feeling for Geet

not surprised that despite Dev's protests, Geet went to take care of Maan

hmm Geet tried to make Maan understand to no avail

truly hate Maan for what he did to Geet

he broke Geet to such an extent

Present

liked that Maan told Advay to meet Geet

he knows Geet's fears will again surface

ahh Advay feels safe with Maan

finally Geet and dadima meet

emotional moments

hmm dadima apologised to Geet

appreciate that Geet will not keep Maan away from Advay

cannot blame for her thoughts

her confusion was understandable

she does know that Maan has changed and is repenting for his deeds

loved Maan's care for Geet

pleased that Maan knows that he the cause for Geet's condition

oh he will not come in front of Geet

it will be hard

however Maan needs to earn Geet's love and trust

he needs to erase every pain he caused her

aww Advay is so cute

adore Maan and Advay's bond

nice that Maan asked Advay to seek his mom's permission to be with his ice clean uncle

alas she agreed


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

great part

Geet is so afraid if Maan will take Advay

hope family is able to make her see the changes in Maan even if Maan has long way to make himself clear to Geet

Geet’s love for Maan is still there somewhere in corner of her heart Maan just needs to go there and make his place again

cont soon

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Great update wonderful wonderful 💯 💯 💯

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Wonderful wonderful update love to see maaneet together but geet have d fear of maan taking away his son and due to that she fainted it was all a shock for .aan and he decided not to come between them waiting for next

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Chapter 10. Painful part. Misty again fainted seeing Maan. She is afraid Maan will take her son. The way Maan has behaved in past is the reason why misty is still so scared of him. Maan is worried seeing her fainting. At least they all sought doctor. In past Maan has been terrible. He slept with her at his will and demanded child from her

Geet thinks Maan is falling for her. She finds day and night time Maan different. Her definition of love is very twisted. At best Maan is habituated with her/Sexually attracted. He could not take her tease and decided to see his mistress Sam. Not just terrible decisions but nothing justifies Maan's acts. No matter whatever penance he has he doesn't deserve Geet. Sameera is disgusting. Feel very sad for Geet. Maan accusing something so strong without even knowing an incident properly. He has no other excuse. Like a sadist he enjoyed torturing Geet. He can't see beyond that stupid thing that Geet married him by trick. He could have said no. She did not put him on gunpoint. Or he could have divorced her instead of torturing her ans sexually abusing her.

Present he told doctor that she fainted seeing him. Doctor explained her bp can be abnormal again seeing him so he needs to stay away. Maan still is selfishly thinking about his remorse. By keeping himself away from Geet he is not doing a favor on her. How he treated her in past and called her as a nanny of the child was disgusting. Geet still was kind enough to say she is none to allow or disallow to meet with his son. Advay has no idea what is going on. He is the one who is suffering the most here without even understanding. Overall awesome painful update. Eagerly waiting for next part

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Nice update

Maan presence cause geet to fight ,she has been living with fear all this time seeing maan carrying her son her condition became worse ...good thing maan called his family with dadima there she will handle geet while he stays away from her ,I just hope she will not take too long to see the changes in maan coz of her past and fear so they can work on their r/ship and be a family again.

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