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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: naaheean

Ye kya tha, haan? Haar baar, haar baar Sameer ko isse pehle wale stories se bhi zyada bura bana na hota hai na tumhe? I was eagerly waiting for his entry, but this type of creepy, psycho, badass Sameer maine nahi expect ki thi.............😭😭😭😡😡😡. Aur toh aur, Roshni ne Arjun jaisa ek Heerey ko chod ke kisi aur ko chuna bhi toh chuna kisse, ek aur psycho ko? Badi hi dangerous & torturous matchmaking combination ho gayi hai yaha toh - Sameer-Roshni bhi psycho, Sameer ke behen ke Ex bhi psycho hi hai, toh phir toh Sameer ki behen ko bhi equally psycho honi chahiye, nahi?

1 creepy psycho Sameer, the disgusting stalker of Riya + 1 psycho Roshni, the ex-wife & tormentor of Arjun = Bloomie special Ariya story, jaha Sameer-Roshni milkar sirf Ariya aur ETF ko hi nahi, saath saath Ariya readers ko bhi jaam ke torture karne aa gaye hai.

Toh kya isska matlab yeh hai ki Arjun ki beti, Ragini, itne wakt se inhi dono ke custody mein hai?

Nevertheless, I loved the first part more, maine last time predict ki thi na ki, Riya library mein hi milegi, toh wahi mil gayi, although woh jaagi hui hi mili Arjun ko aur hume. Also, loved the flashback part, particularly jab jab Arjun Riya ko with utmost care assurance de raha tha, ki woh usske stalker ko handle kar lega & all.

I have two questions for you -

1. Flashback pe, jab Arjun ne Sameer ko punch mara, phir Sameer ne Arjun ko taunt maara, mujhe tab aisa feel hua ki Sameer-Arjun Riya ke ghar pe uss tarah achanak milne se bhi pehle se ek dusre ko bohot achhi tarah se jaante the, hai na?

2. Because of the difference in the surname I understood that, Mr. Harshvardhan Singhaniya (pardon me if the spelling is wrong) Sameer Rathor ke maternal grandfather hai, toh kya jis poti ki security ka case unhone ETF ko diya, woh kya Sameer ke sagi behen hai ya cousin?


Tnx for pm. Keep writing. Hope you are doing well in your life.


A.1 wait for the next update... patience is virtue you see😂

A.2 cousin hai

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Posted: 1 years ago

Are aise kaise.... if your pm inbox is not full I think you should take it up with a moderator. Maybe some other people are also unable to pm you

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Posted: 1 years ago

This story finally I got time to read it

On 21st chapter and I am glued to it

Bloomie your writing is so freaking amazing

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Posted: 1 years ago

Hmm interesting!!!

Shayad Arjun ko Riya ke liye pehle se thodi si feelings thi, I mean everything is not black & white!!! But he is a good man so he didn't take any steps and literally he didn't even understand those feelings I guess.

I don't think so he has brought Riya for work. Bechaari yunhi got false hope lol thoda aur books lekar jaati madam toh time bhi kat jata lol

Well, Sam ko mein as a stalker imagine hi nahi kar sakti😂

But anyways finally some past things are getting cleared so I am eager to know how it unfolds.

Thanx for PM

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Posted: 1 years ago

Oh my my!

One of my theories were right.... I have a myriad of feelings right now....


Lemme tell you about the first half of your chapter. I had this silent small smile, because first I got an update and second because the first person Arjun went to see was Riya (cue squirmy giggle) if that's a thing. I adore how he's becoming more expressive now.


Awweeiii our Riya is a book-goblin. I can't say I don't understand her because I have done the same thing so many times. Though, I was Arjun-less or else I'd be tempted to one of his offer. Obviously after I'm done with the book.


I love how Arjun gives them time to gossip when he must knows he'll be the topic mostly. Or he might just be hiding from Ayesha because that woman can even make the cold ACP blush if she gets a chance. And it's obvious why Arjun is taking Riya. He'd miss her too much otherwise. His sweet trouble needs to be beside him always. I love how Riya gets all cute and nervous in front of him, only if she knew how she has him wrapped around her finger. I forgot, has he confessed yet? If he hasn't then I'll be waiting for this stubborn man to confess. He'd better be on his knees. It'll be fun because in the start, he was reserved because of his past and cautious too. Riya would faint if he suddenly gets all mushy suddenly. (I hope I'm not confusing storylines)


Now coming to the second half.

So, let me get this straight (point out if I'm wrong) Sameer and Roshni are married and they are from the Singhania family, who's granddaughter is getting married but now missing. That said granddaughter needs security. The team was oblivious of this. Sameer wants revenge and he thinks Riya is the key? Harshvardan knows nothing too. So the victim is Sameer's sister or cousin wanting protection again a psycho ex when Sameer himself is one? Ironic much....


Since the team came packing, they're gonna stay in their house for long enough to create maximum tension and maybe occasional evil plans and sarcastic insults. And Sameer is evil and so is Roshni. (That'll be fun, the show did find an innocent looking actress for that character and I find it hard to imagine her as evil).


° Sameer and Roshni are married. So did she cheat on Arjun or was it after their divorce.

° Sameer was Riya's stalker who actually managed to scare her enough to ask for help. I don't believe this. She's hiding something or maybe I'm overthinking. But c'mon Riya doesn't just get scared of any random guy that easily.


° That first punch was personal, it seemed Arjun already knew him and then the last lines kind of confirmed their enmity.


My question. How come the team didn't research on the family before coming? How come Arjun never investigated where Roshni went with their child ?(if she's alive, which I assumed she was)

Was Raghini even his daughter? I feel there's so much to know but I'm waiting for things to unfold. And lastly, how come Riya hasn't noticed Arjun's changed demeanor. How he has started voicing out his thoughts. Would the Arjun from earlier chapters tell her he'd carry her himself to their bed if she's missing from their bedroom again?


Thank you for the PM!


Ps. Kudos for the story, concept and how you write it. I just came from a dragged out story line so let me just say I love your writing. İyi ki varsin! Keep writing ❤️❤️

Edited by RiyaA123 - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Finally my 7 year old exams over yesterday and piled up work also

Yaar so sam some old rivalry with Arjun and then due to him.stalking right even chotu and shree dislike him ...

How come rosh is with him Arjun ex wife na

So much complications

Now that sam.knows Arjun has some soft corner for ri why did he do long back and what now

Super interesting yaar

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 1 years ago

Yeh kounsa naya wala Sameer hai? We toh already have Rathore smiley18

Edited by SarafWasima - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

Oh my my!

One of my theories were right.... I have a myriad of feelings right now....


Lemme tell you about the first half of your chapter. I had this silent small smile, because first I got an update and second because the first person Arjun went to see was Riya (cue squirmy giggle) if that's a thing. I adore how he's becoming more expressive now.


Awweeiii our Riya is a book-goblin. I can't say I don't understand her because I have done the same thing so many times. Though, I was Arjun-less or else I'd be tempted to one of his offer. Obviously after I'm done with the book.


I love how Arjun gives them time to gossip when he must knows he'll be the topic mostly. Or he might just be hiding from Ayesha because that woman can even make the cold ACP blush if she gets a chance. And it's obvious why Arjun is taking Riya. He'd miss her too much otherwise. His sweet trouble needs to be beside him always. I love how Riya gets all cute and nervous in front of him, only if she knew how she has him wrapped around her finger. I forgot, has he confessed yet? If he hasn't then I'll be waiting for this stubborn man to confess. He'd better be on his knees. It'll be fun because in the start, he was reserved because of his past and cautious too. Riya would faint if he suddenly gets all mushy suddenly. (I hope I'm not confusing storylines)


Now coming to the second half.

So, let me get this straight (point out if I'm wrong) Sameer and Roshni are married and they are from the Singhania family, who's granddaughter is getting married but now missing. That said granddaughter needs security. The team was oblivious of this. Sameer wants revenge and he thinks Riya is the key? Harshvardan knows nothing too. So the victim is Sameer's sister or cousin wanting protection again a psycho ex when Sameer himself is one? Ironic much....


Since the team came packing, they're gonna stay in their house for long enough to create maximum tension and maybe occasional evil plans and sarcastic insults. And Sameer is evil and so is Roshni. (That'll be fun, the show did find an innocent looking actress for that character and I find it hard to imagine her as evil).


° Sameer and Roshni are married. So did she cheat on Arjun or was it after their divorce.

° Sameer was Riya's stalker who actually managed to scare her enough to ask for help. I don't believe this. She's hiding something or maybe I'm overthinking. But c'mon Riya doesn't just get scared of any random guy that easily.


° That first punch was personal, it seemed Arjun already knew him and then the last lines kind of confirmed their enmity.


My question. How come the team didn't research on the family before coming? How come Arjun never investigated where Roshni went with their child ?(if she's alive, which I assumed she was)

Was Raghini even his daughter? I feel there's so much to know but I'm waiting for things to unfold. And lastly, how come Riya hasn't noticed Arjun's changed demeanor. How he has started voicing out his thoughts. Would the Arjun from earlier chapters tell her he'd carry her himself to their bed if she's missing from their bedroom again?


Thank you for the PM!


Ps. Kudos for the story, concept and how you write it. I just came from a dragged out story line so let me just say I love your writing. İyi ki varsin! Keep writing ❤️❤️


Nah... he hasn't confessed yet. And the granddaughter isnt missing. She just needs security.

What is the meaning of the phrase you used at the end?

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