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Ekahriz

@Ekahriz

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Posted: 1 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Mehersudha
he created naira and made badi ak villain a not understanding mom for family and audience. Its cleared only after a big leap and recreation of similar scenes. Naira caused an accident and saved krishna a road side girl but Manish stayed in that accident as victim. We know the next history how a lead is involved in deaths and blames. Its his writing style as choti si galati . Other sideys enjoy everything in golden platter in story.

Zama was not even part of season 2 writing. It was all Bhavna and Garima. And in season 3 he started writing only after the leap. Bhavna and Garima loves making villains out of the male lead. It was them who butchered Kartik like anything.

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Mehersudha

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Posted: 1 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Ekahriz
Zama was not even part of season 2 writing. It was all Bhavna and Garima. And in season 3 he started writing only after the leap. Bhavna and Garima loves making villains out of the male lead. It was them who butchered Kartik like anything.

he is there from Bidai time for RS. I checked credits in hina time . Bhavna is screenplay writer and garima is creative. First credit name is Zama habib in any season from these many years. Any show of dkp is designed by him. I read one of his interviews that he designed naira and introduction in rishikesh. Ruhi is given matasree same way like naira used to call badi ak in South africa.

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Noor

@Firefly_shines

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Posted: 1 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Mehersudha
he created naira and made badi ak villain a not understanding mom for family and audience. Its cleared only after a big leap and recreation of similar scenes. Naira caused an accident and saved krishna a road side girl but Manish stayed in that accident as victim. We know the next history how a lead is involved in deaths and blames. Its his writing style as choti si galati . Other sideys enjoy everything in golden platter in story.

true!!! Being absolutely careless which costs someone their life is a choti se galti as long as she is a FL… iss mamle mein pl are better… and what’s your impression of new Ar and ru.. dono se mujhe bohat villain vampish vibes aa aate hai… Pratiksha wasn’t a good actress but she had innocence which reminded me of baby Ruhi… yeh wali sirf manipulative looks de rahi hai.. I mean eventually they have to whitewash Ruhi so hope she acts the innocence part well….

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Mehersudha

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Posted: 1 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Firefly_shines
true!!! Being absolutely careless which costs someone their life is a choti se galti as long as she is a FL… iss mamle mein pl are better… and what’s your impression of new Ar and ru.. dono se mujhe bohat villain vampish vibes aa aate hai… Pratiksha wasn’t a good actress but she had innocence which reminded me of baby Ruhi… yeh wali sirf manipulative looks de rahi hai.. I mean eventually they have to whitewash Ruhi so hope she acts the innocence part well….

we will miss softer arman and calm prats i feel. As for the dkp promo of ruhi and ar both will suit in roles. Ar softness was till him overpowering that fear of losing poddars tag or not a family member. Once he gets that confidence a strong stern ml will come. His eyes and one smile is enough to show his intentions. Same for ruhi this girl looked perfect for new ar. In sarees prats looked older to sheh . Their soft chemistry was their plus before but she looked a bhabhi to him in looks. Here uhuhuuhu both matched. She was vamp in other show not necessarily she will be vamp here. If they retain ruhi as its she will be acting proper and we can understand her expressions. We have to wait and see till they open their mouths and convey us ruhi and arman. Change is always acceptable as show has to go on. Its like a revamp bringing freshness as we are struck there where it started. Atleast if it moves ahead or aside we can get slight movement in story. I didn't watch these both anytime so will watch as new audience. Why arman touched ruhis feet in mock shoot 🤣i cant get.

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Noor

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Posted: 1 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Mehersudha
we will miss softer arman and calm prats i feel. As for the dkp promo of ruhi and ar both will suit in roles. Ar softness was till him overpowering that fear of losing poddars tag or not a family member. Once he gets that confidence a strong stern ml will come. His eyes and one smile is enough to show his intentions. Same for ruhi this girl looked perfect for new ar. In sarees prats looked older to sheh . Their soft chemistry was their plus before but she looked a bhabhi to him in looks. Here uhuhuuhu both matched. She was vamp in other show not necessarily she will be vamp here. If they retain ruhi as its she will be acting proper and we can understand her expressions. We have to wait and see till they open their mouths and convey us ruhi and arman. Change is always acceptable as show has to go on. Its like a revamp bringing freshness as we are struck there where it started. Atleast if it moves ahead or aside we can get slight movement in story. I didn't watch these both anytime so will watch as new audience. Why arman touched ruhis feet in mock shoot 🤣i cant get.

it’s actually a famous scene from padmavat, where shahid touches dp’s feet… they copied scene by scene… but what’s beyond me is why to do a mock shoot on such a romantic scene which was between a husband and wife on ml and pl… for me it was when Ar gave a peck on Ruhi’s cheek 🤣🤣… I almost threw up my coffee… dkp literally threw sense ethics and morality out of the window, I was like kuch toh maryada ka khayal rakho… jeth bhabhi hai dono

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Mehersudha

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Posted: 1 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Firefly_shines
it’s actually a famous scene from padmavat, where shahid touches dp’s feet… they copied scene by scene… but what’s beyond me is why to do a mock shoot on such a romantic scene which was between a husband and wife on ml and pl… for me it was when Ar gave a peck on Ruhi’s cheek 🤣🤣… I almost threw up my coffee… dkp literally threw sense ethics and morality out of the window, I was like kuch toh maryada ka khayal rakho… jeth bhabhi hai dono

that cheek rubbing i felt as colour applying scene and got spin on head what are they going to show karke. Before promo they released photos that itself shows scintillating hot chemistry in between them with calm eyes. They rocked in that scene. How to attract viewers in first impression they got successful. Imagine same scene with old ruhaan on holi. Ar will give constipated looks with tears in one eye , ruhi will tell either basss arman loudly or slowly. They cant get much varied expressions there. Let them act better and give what the producer wants . Its an investment for RS and many survive on it so he wont stop he will try his best to retain it . Actors are just part of show. I always said its incest relationship for us not for the writers or makers they take them as man and woman that's why they show guts. Their morals are nit giving them profit so they need to take a different business route which was applied in other channel. Sitara is changing the style these days. Everywhere 2 girls and one man ogling whether to hold this one or that one. Its just a hot intro of new ruhi and ar. What comes in episode 🙏 but their guts to touch cringe and not bending is going on high.

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Indira

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Posted: 1 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Firefly_shines
true!!! Being absolutely careless which costs someone their life is a choti se galti as long as she is a FL… iss mamle mein pl are better… and what’s your impression of new Ar and ru.. dono se mujhe bohat villain vampish vibes aa aate hai… Pratiksha wasn’t a good actress but she had innocence which reminded me of baby Ruhi… yeh wali sirf manipulative looks de rahi hai.. I mean eventually they have to whitewash Ruhi so hope she acts the innocence part well….

new ruhi,looks full on vamp..she was a cunning vamp in Batein kuch ankhahee.. and she looks much older than pratiksha..pratiksha looked bechaari ..but not cunning..I like how she’d be angry but then somehow the blood rishta will make her worry about abhira..and I could see ruhi and abhira having a close bond after revelation..this new Armaan matches the new ruhi well..don’t know how he’ll look with abhira..who,looks very young..Shehzada and samriddi were so well matched..in age and looks..and their chemistry was so great and they got such a big fan following of abhimaan jodi so,quickly.. I don’t know what RS has planned..he’s not released any photos of new Armaan with abhira…he took,a lot of time to finalise Shehzada and samriddi for Armaan and abhira and they were the most well matched lead couple of yrkkh..I felt they even looked better than mohsin and shivangi. But now it’s all destroyed. Maybe RS has decided to change the storyline..and we will get Armaan and ruhi, unite and then exit the show and it will continue with abhira ..her career and her love story.so,a new male lead will be brought in for her..who’ll match her in age and looks. The montage of yrkkh is only Abhira now..so it’s her story and she’s the main character…so maybe they’ve decided to change the storyline after sheh and prat’s were dismissed.’also that mock shoot of the new Armaan and ruhi showed intense romantic scenes..so why shoot that..if that’s not going to happen in the show. Anyway I’ll be happy if ruhi and Armaan unite and then exit..because I don’t think,the new Armaan will look good romancing young abhira …she deserves male actor who’ll complement her in age and looks..

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Adhya

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Posted: 1 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Ekahriz
Zama was not even part of season 2 writing. It was all Bhavna and Garima. And in season 3 he started writing only after the leap. Bhavna and Garima loves making villains out of the male lead. It was them who butchered Kartik like anything.

Zama did write gen 2 up until the Kaira Wedding. The entire Rishikesh track was his idea

Latter Bhavna took over and butchered Kartik

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Adhya

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Posted: 1 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Mehersudha
he created naira and made badi ak villain a not understanding mom for family and audience. Its cleared only after a big leap and recreation of similar scenes. Naira caused an accident and saved krishna a road side girl but Manish stayed in that accident as victim. We know the next history how a lead is involved in deaths and blames. Its his writing style as choti si galati . Other sideys enjoy everything in golden platter in story.

Neither Akshara Majeshwari nor Naira was ever shown as a villain. But to know that you have to watch the show. smiley36