Ariya Crawling To Love - Page 56

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: naaheean

Tnx for the pm. So it's the time of some real action, which was really praiseworthy.......all the team-mates were working on sync, Riya n Arjun as officers were working together superbly as usual. I loved all of it until I came to the last part of the chapter. By the way, can you please explain what does the "green corridor" mean in the chapter?

Also, I want to request earnestly for an extra update of the story as soon as possible but before next Sunday please, since I can't handle the same dreadful trauma through a whole week, which was brought by the makers in the show. I think most of the readers of your story will agree with my request.

ha ha so basically a green corridor is when the authorities with the help of the traffic police make a clean way. Us raaste se traffic aur signals dono hata diye jaate hai to facilitate a speedy travel. Kabhi-kabhi VVIP's ke liye hota hai aur saath-saath emergency situations mein jaise organ transplant karna ho jaha par time value is important. For example, heart ko nikaalne ke baad there is a very short window within jab use dusre ke shareer mein daala jaa sakta and agar woh dusra body dusri hospital mein ho ya paas ke shehar mein ho jaha par road travel kiya jaa sake toh unke liye green corridor banaya jaata hai.



and... jaldi update? hmm, mera iraada toh kuch aur hi hai smiley15

Edited by bloomie - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

NOOOOOOOO

DAMN IT

I hated that episode so much....

You portrayed the scene in such a way that I saw it flashing before my eyes.... It was so vivid that it literally pricked My heart.

While I read other chapters, I fell in love with the characters again. This Arjun seemed shy about his feelings but at the same time some of his emotions flow out in the guise of harmless flirting or unreasonable sarcasm.

Then came this trope you started. The whole xora scene and I hoped it would be different.... I read fast.... I scrolled through hard and then...... I read the word "swallow"...

I'm still sure that you won't do this to us because you're a hardcore fan of happy Ariya Endings but darn it😭😭😭


Next time why don't you do a teensy tiny favor to readers like me and put a "Trigger Warning ⚠️"

You can also add a disclaimer, something Ike "this chapter will bring back old but buried bad memories of this show"

I could've left the last 2 para and read them on Wednesday right after I got your PM for next chap🤧 but alas.... You broke me 💔


Now tell me how am I supposed to survive this week?🥺 I'mma read the "accidental date" now. See you if I survived


Ps. Thanks for these PM..... Still love your writing with the "now" broken pieces of my book heart 💔

Pss. I know stories are pre-planned but at least give me a little spoiler like how you'll be adding a cute adorable funny but totally Ariya moment to ease this pain you gave us....

trigger warning dene mein woh maza kaha jo aap sabko shock dene mein aata hai? smiley36

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome update didu

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

ha ha so basically a green corridor is when the authorities with the help of the traffic police make a clean way. Us raaste se traffic aur signals dono hata diye jaate hai to facilitate a speedy travel. Kabhi-kabhi VVIP's ke liye hota hai aur saath-saath emergency situations mein jaise organ transplant karna ho jaha par time value is important. For example, heart ko nikaalne ke baad there is a very short window within jab use dusre ke shareer mein daala jaa sakta and agar woh dusra body dusri hospital mein ho ya paas ke shehar mein ho jaha par road travel kiya jaa sake toh unke liye green corridor banaya jaata hai.



and... jaldi update? hmm, mera iraada toh kuch aur hi hai smiley15

Thanks for the info....❤️❤️❤️

Tum hamarey dimag ka dahi ya bharta nahi banaogi aur bohot maze le kar woh nahi khaogi aisa kabhi ho sakta hai bhala??? I'm guessing that you're not going to give us the next update of this story on next Wednesday, rather we will get the due update of "An Accidental Date", right?

P.S. - Waise, meri guess sahi thi ya nahi at least yeh bata dena, baki kisi bhi aur sawalo ka jawab toh tumse milne se rahi...😢😢😢

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

trigger warning dene mein woh maza kaha jo aap sabko shock dene mein aata hai? smiley36

Mere khayal se, tum apni stories ke chapters mein koi trigger warning na hi do toh hi achha hai hamare liye, tumhari cliffhangers ke quality hi aisi hoti hai ki almost every time hum logo ko 440 Volt ka jhatka laagta hi hai ya phir jaan galey tak aake atak jata hai, agar trigger warning ya phir next chapter ka spoiler dene laag jaogi toh hum sab toh woh chapter padhke every week heart-failure ya brain-stroke ka victims banne laag jayenge.....

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: naaheean

Mere khayal se, tum apni stories ke chapters mein koi trigger warning na hi do toh hi achha hai hamare liye, tumhari cliffhangers ke quality hi aisi hoti hai ki almost every time hum logo ko 440 Volt ka jhatka laagta hi hai ya phir jaan galey tak aake atak jata hai, agar trigger warning ya phir next chapter ka spoiler dene laag jaogi toh hum sab toh woh chapter padhke every week heart-failure ya brain-stroke ka victims banne laag jayenge.....

Wahi toooohhhh!!!!!!

Socho main kitni achi bachi hun

Edited by bloomie - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 1 years ago

This is a bad dream right . please don't make it a sad ending please

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome updt

Again exorasmiley44I hope Riya didnt swallowed it this time

Cont soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Update day has come finally...smiley41smiley41smiley41Waiting for the chapter eagerly... smiley42smiley42smiley42

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