AbhiMaan OS | Aftermath | Angst | Rejection

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Posted: 1 years ago
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This scene takes place a week after Abhira sees Armaan and Ruhi hugging. She does not see Ruhi's face and Armaan doesn't hug her back. He pushes Ruhi and tells her to say within the boundaries of their relationship. Abhira distances herself from Armaan and limits her conversations with him because she realises that once this year is up, she has to part ways with Armaan and he will get together with his girlfriend.


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Abhira had been acting weird for past one week and Armaan had no clue why she was acting this way. He thought things were good after he had helped her resubmit the assignment. He was starting to get frustrated with her sudden change in behaviour. He had tried everything to get her to talk to him; brought her favourite food and cupcakes, tried to help her with her assignment, tried to sing with helium infused mouth, but she didn't budge. She seemed distant and not like her usual cheerful self that he was used to. He knew something was off about her behaviour but couldn't point out what. He got out of the shower and realised he forgot his clothes outside. He wrapped a towel around his waist and closed the bedroom door. He was rummaging through his closet when suddenly the bedroom door opened. He looked back and saw Abhira standing at the door with an expression he couldn't decipher. Both stood there for 2 mins looking at each other when suddenly Abhira turned back.


Abhira - So...sorry. Mujhe nahi pata tha tum change kar rahe ho.


She was about to leave when she felt his hand on her wrist and suddenly she was pinned against the wall.

She was shocked as her heart started beating fast. She tried to break free but Armaan held both her hands and pinned them above her head. With another hand he held her chin and turned her face towards him and looked straight into her eyes. His gaze intensified and Abhira couldn't breathe. He was too close.

He moved closer and there was not an inch left between them. She could feel the wetness from his chest soaking her clothes and she was feeling things she had never felt before. The more she struggled, the closer he got.

Armaan - Abhira...kya ho gaya hai tumhe? Tum mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho? Maine kuchh kiya? Ghar mein kisi ne tumse kuchh kaha? College ya office mein kisi ne kuchh bola? Please batao mujhe.

Abhira - Pl...please leave me Armaan. Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni. And no, kisi ne mujhse kuchh nahi kaha.

Armaan was getting frustrated. He moved his hand to her waist and pulled her to him .

Abhira - K...kya kar rahe ho tum? Chhodo mujhe Armaan.

Armaan - Main tumhe tab tak nahi chhodoonga jab tak tum mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi deti Abhira.

He was searching her eyes for an answer, any answer he could get that could bring his frustration down. Abhira , realising what his intense gaze was doing to her, closed her eyes.

Armaan came closer and whispered in her left ear - Please Abhira. Batao mujhse kya galti hui hai. I cannot take your silence anymore.

Abhira felt a jolt of electricity run through her back. She was getting frustrated with her emotions and his closeness. She didn't understand why his closeness with that chit girl was making her so uncomfortable. She opened her eyes and looked him straight in his eyes.

Abhira - Leave me alone Armaan. Tum kis haq se mujhse itne questions poochh rahe ho? Lagte kya to tum mere? Do not forget ki main yahaan sirf 9 mahino ke liye hoon aur humara rishta sirf ek samjhota hai. Uske baad tum apne raste aur main apne raste. Isliye agle 9 mahino ke liye mera peechha chhod do.

Armaan tightened his grip on her hands and waist. She could feel anger radiating from his body , a side of him she had never seen before. But she had to get him to stop.

Abhira - Tumhare paas self respect naam ki koi cheez hai ya nahi? Main tumhe 100 baar bol chuki hoon ki mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni. Tumhe samajh kyun nahi aata hai? Tum har raah chalti ladki se itna close ho jaate ho kya? Leave me and do not interfere in my life ever again Mr. Armaan Poddar. Apne kaam se kaam rakho.

Armaan was shocked listening to her. He thought they were friends. He loosened his grip on her hand and waist and took a step back. He was not able to decipher what just happened. Why was she behaving like this suddenly. Her words pierced through his heart and he felt unimaginable pain. He couldn't understand what was happening to him. The thought of losing her in 9 months nearly killed him. He was lost in his thoughts and as if on cue, Abhira ran from the room. She couldn't believe either that she spoke to him like that. She didn't know why she spoke to him so rudely and why that affected her so much. She knew something was changing and she needed to prevent those feelings from seeping right into her heart because she wouldn't be able to deal with the aftermath of that impending heartbreak. She needed to be strong, she needed to build a wall around her heart, she had to let go of Armaan's thoughts.






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Posted: 1 years ago
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You put the feelings into words in this os😍

Something like that should happen

Abhira maintaining distance

While Armaan going crazy over why she is not talking to me

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ria23


You put the feelings into words in this os😍

Something like that should happen

Abhira maintaining distance

While Armaan going crazy over why she is not talking to me


Haina? Their scenes should be angsty and passionate from now on smiley42

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Exactly the reaction that was being discussed in the EDT.

Abhira ignoring him and trying her best to not let attachment get to her.

Armaan feeling a void of losing someone he unknowingly started considering as his only family.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Nice.. this is what I want in serial ... Abhira distance herself from armaan ...smiley20

Posted: 1 years ago
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This was terrific 🥹🥹 I’d love for Abhira to hurt him with words.. repeatedly ! Only then I’ll feel good!

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Posted: 1 years ago
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@Sreejita and @ Bluech - Yes this is how the creatives should proceed. Enough of Abhira taking shit from this family. Need her to make Armaan mad for her now 🥵😂


@Jhanak - Thanks. Yes hopefully.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Love it. ❤️❤️❤️

I want Abhira to distance herself for good.

She should pay rent for being a PG in Poddar house and keep divorce papers ready too. 👍

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Beautifully written

Please do write more on abhimaan

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Wow! Wow! Wow! The intensity! The chemistry! The angst!! Uff uff!


I loved itsmiley27Please write moresmiley31

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