Love the banter!!
Maan finally gets a point back
Rom-Com FF
Love the banter!!
Maan finally gets a point back
Yess!!! I knew it. Maan is not so unaffected as he was acting like before… he is soooooo affected even with all the non chalant attitude he showed…. Slowly burning for her Loved how he missed her, kept tnkng abt her gifts. Finally happy he got something!
Will be waiting for updates 👍
Star Commenter Awards
(Part 23)
We are again starting our Star commenter Awards with this story. As i say, your comments are my fuel. More the comments utni hi jaldi energy I get to post the next update.
Congratulations to the following winners!
Early Bird Award- Gold.Abrol
Star Commenter Winner- Gold.Abrol
Special Mention- Khwaishfan, Crazymaneetian
Part 24
M- I can't get hold of her.
Maan spoke evenly. His voice didn't sound distressed, but it also lacked any inflections.
Assistant - Her assistant! I have her number. She is-
M- Send it to me.
Maan receives the contact and very next moment initiates a video call.
But the call is not answered.
Not only it isn't answered, but it was also disconnected and next time he tries calling he gets to know that his number is blocked.
M-Her assistant blocked me.
The Assistant is shocked himself.
Assistant - ... maybe...it's unknown number... so...
The assistant tries to start a video call from his own phone, and it is instantly answered by Geet’s Lady Assistant.
He doesn't know what to say to save this lady's job... did she know who she had rejected?!
Assistant - Our boss wants to talk!
He quickly gave his phone to Maan.
M- Where is she? How badly is she hurt? Let me talk to her!
Lady A was quite surprised by the handsome face that took over the entire screen, almost dropping the phone. It must have been her military honed quick reflexes which made her fumble and securely catch the phone again.
Lady A - Ahem….Hello sir. Good evening! Madam is fine. Let me hand over the phone to her.
In the background Geet's voice could be heard asking ‘who is on the call?’ and hushed reply telling her ‘Some handsome guy'
Maan gently taps the table with his other phone in wait.
Geet finally takes the phone and surprisingly sees it is Maan's handsome face gracing the entire screen.
G- Hi
Maan observes her face for signs of distress.
Seeing she looks okay and even gave him a perfunctory smile implied that situation wasn't anything serious.
M- What happened?
G- Oh nothing... nothing really! I just slipped and fell and twisted my ankle. How do you even know something happened?
M- Gossip news. There was picture of you lying on ground looking injured.
G - pshhh... seriously! You don't read those stupid things. I am fine nothing happened.
M- Hmm. Which hospital are you admitted into?
G- Oh…I didn't get admitted. I just had the x-ray and consultation done. Just buying some prescription medicines and leaving now.
M- You need to stay at the hospital. Get admitted and properly rest. Let the doctors observ-
G- What? Why? No. No way. I am already leaving…. leaving right now. See! I am on a wheelchair.
She turns the phone’s camera around and shows the wheelchair she is sitting on and the wheels turning and lady A pushing the wheelchair.
M-You are even on a wheelchair. Where are you not hurt? Listen for once and stay there! I'll come.
G- Not staying. I can hop fine on one foot... but I don't look good doing it. So, the wheelchair. You don't have to come.
Maan realizes that sitting here, he couldn't make her obey and arguing was not affective either.
The mobile tapping against the table gets faster and faster.
M- What did the doctor say?
G- He said it's just a sprain... I just need to apply some cold compress today and give my leg proper rest tomorrow.
M- Quack Doctor!!
G- Huh?!
M- Mail me your x-ray. And don't use your leg. Where are you going now?
G- Sure. Sure. Some hotel… I missed my return flight today and crew has left.
M - I'll send you address. Stay there.
Geet is surprised hearing Maan
M- I have a property there. It's cleaned regularly and stocked with basic necessities.
G- How many properties do you have? Wait no. Don't answer. I don't want to know. But...
M- What?
G- Me going there…won't it inconvenience the person already staying there?
M- Who do you think is already staying there?
G- ... I don't know... your... umm... how would I know...
M - Since you don't know then don't overuse your little brain. Concentrate on taking care of yourself.
G- What's up with you huh? So naggy today? Sure, I'll take care and treat myself well.
Geet disconnects the call, not in mood to hear any more insults or reprimands.
The phone tapping against the table also stops mid-air.
Maan looks at the black phone screen.
He slowly comes back to himself and returns the phone to the Assistant.
M - Tell her assistant to unblock me. Share with her my number and the property details. Get the x-ray and send it to my doctor. Tell the Doctor to call me once he gets it.
The Assistant quietly nods and leaves the office completing the tasks at record speed.
Although the boss talked normally and looked unruffled. The atmosphere was really disturbing.
Within few minutes Maan receives the call from his doctor who confirms the diagnosis and treatment. The foot was indeed lightly strained some proper rest was enough.
He thanks the doctor and stares into the space.
His hand slowly tightening around his phone until the nerves and tendons stood out.
He could recall the Geet's carefree face he saw just now. He could detect hints of pain and tiredness on her face. She wasn't worried, the doctor wasn't worried, the crew also left her alone worry free. Seems like everything was fine and everyone was fine.
But why was he feeling out of breath? Why was his hand shaky? Why was he feeling cold sweat on his back?
Maan focusses his attention back on the documents on his table and sees the soothing image on his computer's lock screen.
He enters his password into login screen and gets incorrect password error.
He tries several times without success.
Finally, he gets up, picks up the monitor screen and throws it across the office. And then throws the keyboard and then the documents.
The monitor crashes against the wall with a loud bang.
The assistant rushes in hearing the noise.
Looking at the messy office, he gulps.
M- Get this cleaned up. It was malfunctioning.
The assistant nods.
M- Cancel my meetings for tomorrow.
The Assistant nods again.
He starts packing up important stuff for his boss.
Assistant - Shall I call the driver, Sir? I have pulled up the optimum navigation route to-
M- Send to me. I am driving.
The Assistant nods along and soon sees his boss accelerate away.
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Geet was shooting in a city in next state. It was some 4 hours away by road.
By the time Maan reaches the property.
Geet had already taken a shower. She Marveled at the more than adequate, over stocked with necessities apartment. Changed into comfortable clothes and settled in the bedroom.
Her assistant adept in all things, unfortunately didn't know to cook.
So, she was going out for dinner and would bring back takeout for Geet.
The two were discussing the dinner options when they hear the doorbell.
Both look at each other all tensed up... Who could it be? Did they get followed? No one knew anyone was living here!!
The lady A gestures for Geet to be quite while the doorbell rings again and again.
Lady A picks up a vase and approaches the door ready for combat.
She silently looks through the peephole and upon seeing recognizes the person.
She immediately opens the door.
Hearing the door open, Geet asks loudly from inside the room.
G- Who is it?
Lady A- It's the handsome g... boss. Boss is here!!!
Maan glances at the face of lady A in without a word and rushes to the bedroom
G- What are you doing here??!!
Geet is shocked seeing Maan in front of her
Hi, nice update dear, geet fell down, have strain in ankle, Maan is worry about her, travel by his vehicle to saw her.
Very interesting update dear Neelu ☺️
Just amazing 🤩
Poor Maan could not handle the news of Geet getting hurt & finally he arranged everything there to make her rest & for proper treatment
I loved how Geet reacted when she received call from Maan to check on what exactly happened & how bad it was. ... Thankfully nothing much happened & Geet was safe & recovering
Maan literally lost his peace even after knowing the everything is fine he drives himself & reached the location where Geet was & she was shocked seeing Maan there
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM ☺️
Continue soon 🤗
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maan not understanding his feeling as love for geet which make him restless knowing she was injurer .
geet distancing from maan with his cold behavior at relative meet.
also surprise seeing maan's concern n care for her
hope geet dint react which irritate or give wrong message
Fab update superb
Part 24
Magnificent update… grandly written
was Maan blocking Maan's number deliberate?
great that Maan's assistant handled the situation
aww Maan and his fan club!
another one added to the list lol
liked Maan's concern for Geet
finally Maan was able to speak to Geet
Maan was indeed relieved seeing her
well Geet assured Maan that she was fine
of cos Maan wanted her to seek treatment
but she denied
Maan was clearly restless
pleased that he wanted to go to Geet
hmm Maan has already fallen for Geet
glad that he told her to stay in one of his properties
sad that Geet assumed that Maan had a lady friend staying there
good that Maan cleared this
Geet's irritation was reasonable
not surprised with Maan's instructions to his assistant
at least Maan got her prognosis
she will be fine
Maan's thoughts well portrayed
oh Maan was really frustrated
Gosh he took his temper out in his office equipment
as expected Maan went to meet Geet
Geet's reaction was justified
update soon
Maan so upset that geets assistant blocked his number. Hilarious. Good that means she is doing her job well. look at him being so authoritative with geet ordering her to send the reports and take care and telling her where she should go and stay
So protective worried and caring
will geet understand that part though? Or will she just think he is being high and mighty
Maan ofcourae not realizing why he is so upset and worried even though his doctor too confirmed that she is okay. Not ready to realise this love after all. He has fallen for her
geet shocked seeing him in front of her.
i treating how well his assistant understands Maan. Maan did not even ask and assistant talked about the fastest way to go to geet
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