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Posted: 1 years ago

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(Part 16)

We are again starting our Star commenter Awards with this story. As i say, your comments are my fuel. More the comments utni hi jaldi energy I get to post the next update.

Congratulations to the following winners!

Early Bird Award- jaanu2006

Star Commenter Winner- Taahir004

Special Mention- Gold. Abrol



Part 17

Everyone looks at Maan coming downstairs. An unknown woman accompanying him.

Everyone immediately stop what they were doing and start observing the new couple.

Geet feels the collective gaze and works to maintain her composure.

She is somewhat used to people's stares, so it isn’t much difficult.

Maan also seemed pretty unaffected by everyone's gossiping gaze.

He fills his plate with few pieces of toast, Butter, jam, milk and cornflakes.

While Geet looks around happily and picks fruits and other freshly prepared dishes.

Once they turn towards the table; Geet is unsure where to sit and looks at Maan.

Maan walks to the head of the table, looks at the person sitting on the right side and says " move."

He gestures Geet to come and sit on his right side.

Everyone looks astonished at this turn of events.

But they quietly shift one seat to make space for the new person at the table.

More people came down during this time and join in with curious looks.

Some people start talking in whispers contemplating who is the woman... what is she doing here... what's their relationship...

Some of them recognized her from her recent fame and soon her name and identity were spread around the table but her relationship with Maan was still under scrutiny.

Everyone was surprised at the ease with which she sat next to Maan and casually conversed with him.

There was even a muted gasp when they see Maan considerately pouring her a glass of water…

The hushed whispers keep getting louder and louder creating a loud buzzing Humm.

Maan puts down his utensils and loudly clapps his hands once.

M- Can I have everyone's attention! Thank you. As you all have noticed there is a new member in our family. Everyone please be nice to her this is my wife- Geetanjali. As some of you may have already recognized her from the tv shows and advertisement and for those who haven't. My wife is a celebrity and is currently working as a reality show host. Everyone can introduce yourselves afterwards.

Geet gives a generic nod in everyone's direction during this intro.

Maan picks up his utensils again but halts.

Puts it down.

Slowly gets up and places both his hands on the table and looks at everyone seriously exerting strong pressure that demands everyones total attention and obedience.

M- As you all know for a celebrity their reputation is everything. So, I don't expect there will be ANY candid photos, rumors, gossip, personal details leak. If there is anything traced back to any one of you. Don't bother calling yourself a member of this family anymore. Am I clear?

Everyone nods in unison…even Geet nods unconsciously under the pressure.

This was the first time she saw such a harsh, domineering side of Maan.

As if his every word is a word in stone. Undeniable and unrefutable.

She suppresses an involuntary shiver and tries to act as before.

This man right now was so scary. She couldn't imagine him to be the same person who fooled her into paying the room rent.

Maan sits down losing the serious expression from his face and with a casual smile starts eating and talking to people around him.

His sudden change in demeanor is what scare the people most.

They couldn't decide which was the real him and which one was the mask.

Was he the serious guy with a smiling mask?

Or a easy to get along person with a serious mask?

Whatever his true self maybe nobody dared to disobey him and anyone who had thoughts of leaking juicy details about Geet to the paparazzi stopped their fanciful thoughts right then and there.

+++

After the breakfast people slowly gather in the living area and start introducing themselves to Geet.

She finds the whole situation truly bizarre…

Shouldn't she be the one introducing herself to everyone one by one?

As people introduced themselves, she greeted them cordially and respectfully while Maan sat by her side quietly working on his iPad. Not disturbing their interactions... but his presence also deterred any invasive questions or rude comments.

Whenever some one of younger generation greeted her, she would give out the gifts she had prepared for them (bracelets and tie pins)

The family members thought that they looked well matched sitting together and Maan's aura didn't suppress Geet's presence at all.

But still some of the Geet's fans silently shook their heads and felt angry forher... their uncle really snatched up such a wonderful & cool girl.

Geet’s celebrity image was that of a young cute vivacious girl and Maan forever portrayed a mature cunning CEO... the image gap was too much.

But if you ignore the image their temperaments were very well matched and made them seem much closer than actual. Geet was stable and mature than her age and Maan acted like a prankster often.

Of course, there was a good number of people who thought she was a gold digger... but they just couldn't believe it fully... they knew Maan cannot be fooled... so he wouldn't marry a gold digger. But this woman's background... profession... looks everything made her an ideal gold digger.

All in all, this couple left people confused and talking.

++++

Yahi sab mein subah nikal jaati hai.

Lunch time tak more or less people have come out of the shock and accepted the fact that this woman is going to be the young madam of their household.

During lunch time people explained to her itinerary for the next few days and discussed general topics.

Geet interacted naturally with everyone and was quickly able to fit in.

During the lunch she again notices that the Maan took and ate little food.

He only took some rice and curry from the communal dishes and refused anything the servers brought.

She is a bit confused by this family’s dynamics but is clear about over one thing. She can offend anyone, but not Maan

++++

Its evening

Geet goes into the kitchen and asks if she can cook a dish.

Traditionally on her side of the family the new bride will cook a meal for everyone.

Since that is not doable looking at the large number of family members, she thought she would cook a dessert dish.

The cooking staff is very well managed, and they help her out with whatever she needs.

++++

At the dinner table, she brings out a big casserole with dessert and places it on the table.

M- Did you cook?

Maan asks.

She nods.

G- In our side it's tradition for the newly wed to make a meal or a dish for the husband's family.

Maan nods and smiles.

He gets up and goes to personally serve himself a big helping of the dessert she made.

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear Neelu ☺️

Awesome update 😃

I am enjoying the reactions of the family members seeing Geet there as Maans wife & I really felt like laughing when Maan ordered the family members not to make paparazzi out of this

Geet was really perplexed by Maan behaviour as she hasn't seen this side of him but it was really a relief that no one will intervene now

🤔 Hmm this is really going to be fun as Geet has cooked desert for everyone ... I hope this will bring another interesting twist

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago

Hi,

loving this story. As, Maan and Geet relationship unfold, i can see new Maan. waiting for next part.

Hope, they start as a real wife and husband relation. waiting!

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Posted: 1 years ago

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geet can see different side of dominating which is scary

some are jealous of geet but accept her as madam of household as everyone is on mercy of maan

geet saw how little maan eat but he took big portion of desert made by her

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Posted: 1 years ago

Lovely part

Cont soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 17


Wow !!! This Update indeed was Shock after Shock

I just loved it !!!!


Wow Both Maan and Geet looked well together

and he truly gives her respect and I loved how he so easily smiles at Geet

and have that smiling face .

nice of Geet to present the younger generation with gifts

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 17

Outstanding update…intensely written

Maan's family were indeed astonished and curious regarding Geet's identity

at least some recognised Geet from her fame

great that Maan got everyone's attention

finally Maan dropped the bombshell

now his family meet Mrs Maan Singh Khurana

liked that he told everyone to introduce themselves to Gee

of cos he cautioned about gossip etc

well Geet was shocked seeing this side of Maan

Maan is indeed an enigma

but no one can disobey Maan

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

glad that Maan was there

his presence clearly deterred rude comments or invasive comments

loved that his family thought that Maan and Geet were well matched

sad that some feel she maybe a gold digger

pleased that she noticed Maan's eating habits

Geet's confusion was justified

good that she cooked her first dish

not surprised that Maan ate it


update soon


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Posted: 1 years ago

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(Part 17)

We are again starting our Star commenter Awards with this story. As i say, your comments are my fuel. More the comments utni hi jaldi energy I get to post the next update.

Congratulations to the following winners!

Early Bird Award- Gold.Abrol

Star Commenter Winner- Aparna3011

Special Mention- Crazyover123

(Thanks for reading & liking the story. Hope you keep reading & commenting)




Part 18

At the dinner table, she brings out a big casserole with dessert and places it on the table.

M- Did you cook?

Maan asks.

She nods.

G- In our side it's tradition for the newly wed to make a meal or a dish for the husband's family.

Maan nods and smiles.

He gets up and goes to personally serve himself a big helping of the dessert she made.

The others are a bit disdainful.

Who cooks personally?!

So low class!

Just instructing the staff a few times is enough.

They thought but kept it to themselves.

Few others weren't sure how dish would taste.

Considering she is a celebrity and figure conscious what would she know about dessert...

After the meal starts, Maan notices that no one else took the dessert Geet prepared.

He already didn't like her toiling behind a stove for others and now these people just don't appreciate her efforts.

Maan gets up again, picks up the whole casserole and places it in front of himself and tells everyone in a casual tone.

M - You guys really don't know what a great cook she is…. tch tch tch...

He takes a second serving, and it looks like that is all he is going to have for dinner tonight.

Geet didn’t care if those people didn't eat the dish she made, she only felt bad that food would be wasted.

But looks like this fellow has taken upon himself to challenge cavities and finish this dish.

She can’t help but smile.

Geet nudges him secretly and whispers.

G - Don't eat so much sweet

M - But I hardly get to eat it

G- I’ll cook more next time.

Maan looks at her reluctantly and then slowly concedes.

M – I’ll hold you to it... and no need to cook for this ungrateful bunch

The ungrateful bunch which was observing them was speechless.

++++

In some time, a kid walks up and asks Maan if he could taste aunt's dessert.

Maan nods with a smile and serves the kid smallest portion of the dessert.

The kid looks at his cool magnanimous uncle who has suddenly turned stingy.

The kid treasures the serving closer to him and eats in small bites... it really did taste so good.... why didn't he get some at the beginning

Looking at their companion enjoying it so much other kids are also itched to try some and finally lined up to Maan to ask for some.

While the elders and parents felt the hunger but couldn't put down their ego and only greedily observe others enjoying the dish.

What was so good about it? They have eaten at so many 5 start restaurants...

But how could they know? How can they compare? They didn't even get a bite.

They think.

One the dinner is over everyone retires to their rooms.

Maan and Geet also bid each other goodnight.

+++++

Next day-

Geet wakes up early and prepares some easy breakfast for Maan.

Jab sab log breakfast ke liye baithte hain toh she puts the small casserole in front of him.

G- I made xxx dish. Will you have some?

Maan nods and extends his plate.

Geet serves him food.

She also serves herself a little bit and both start eating ignoring the looks of the rest of the people.

This sort of special treatment Maan is happily showing off and loudly compliments that the food is very tasty.

Geet takes it easy. Not caring much for his praises.

G - As long as you don’t hate it (fake smile)

Maan’s parents sitting 3-4 seats down the line look over.

Yesterday they didn’t get any dessert.

Mother - Oh what tasty food has our daughter in law cooked today? Let me have some to try!

M- Oh I finished it all (pouring rest of the food into his plate). None left for you.

The mother throws dagger at Maan through her eyes.

Maan smiles slyly.

Seeing Maan's action Geet lowers her face and works hard to suppress the laugh bubbling up inside her.

She also realized that it isn’t just herself whom he had tormented... his poor family members probably all of them have been at the receiving end of his tricks... no doubt... no doubt how everyone treats him...

+++++

After breakfast everyone goes to get ready for the Havan pooja in the afternoon.

Geet wears an elegant white handloom saree.

She looks simple yet elegant and divine.

Maan knocks on her door to go downstairs together.

She walks out looking ethereal.

He stops and takes a proper look at her.

M- You look very beautiful.

Geet was not at all expecting such a straightforward compliment from him.

It took her a few moments to process a response.

G - Thank you... I hope this is not too much.

She says and points at his usual white shirt- dark pant attire.

M - Not at all. Very appropriate. Come. Let’s go.

He offers his hand to her, and she gently puts her hand on his warm palm.

He holds her hand and helps her walk down the stairs.

Watching them descend in such a grand manner draws everyone's attention.

Geet had been dressing simply till now without much makeup, looking like pretty young girl next door.

But the current look of her left everyone a little breathless.

No wonder Maan married her. Gold digger or not…who wouldn't want to be with such a beautiful woman.

Her fans in the family felt that she looked like a goddess and really wanted to take selfies with her and show it to their friends.

But alas! Their uncle has already strictly prohibited them from such things on the first day.

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear Neelu ☺️

Awesome update 😃

Maan is treating his family members in an apt way who didn't care to appreciate the efforts she made from her side 🙂

Loo poora dish Maan ne kha liya ... Kids ko chod ke kisi ko nahi mila 😃 rest just ogle at the food good going Maan

Well next day drama at the table made me laugh 😂 Maan didn't let anyone have that breakfast ... I am really happy at the grand entry it's really good

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago

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maan shows his family members their place as they disrespect food prepare by geet thinking her low class

it is hard for geet to control her smile seeing expressions of family members

everyone is spell bound with geet's beauty

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