•Iss Rishte Ko Kya Naam Doon?• NeiVika SS✅ - Page 3

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Part 3

"Sir, yeh lijiye file. Bohot mehnat karna pada-", constable gets shuts up by Neil's glare. "Tumhare paise bank account pe transfer kiya hai. Ab yaha se kisi ke nazar aaye bina chale jao", says Neil coldly. Constable goes from there. Neil knew that it was risky for him to get the file in Mahajan property hence he decided to meet constable at outskirts of the city.

He puts file in his car's passenger seat & was about to sit in the car but stops seeing Yuvika come down from a police jeep. He frowns thinking what is she doing here with police. Also she was talking with a police officer smiling. "Yeh sab kabse chal raha hai?!", mutters Neil while gritting his teeth.

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Yuvika was shocked when she got know about her father's secret actions. He used to send handful money in a bank account for last 20 years. After his death,the transaction stopped. She told officer Vivek about it & he tried to help her. In a twisted way, she got to know about Avni D'Souza who was romantically involved with Dhanraj Mahajan but at the end Dhanraj betrayed her. Now she understood the whole matter. Suddenly she remembers about Neil's outburst in Mahajan house. He was accusing Dhanraj for his father's second arrest case. She curses herself for not understanding clues. Then why Devyani Verma accused Shobana Mahajan for scandal issues?!. She should blame Dhanraj right?!. Also who killed her father?!. Now she needs the answer of those questions.

Avni D'Souza along with her daughter is now on police protection secretly which kind of give her peace. Also police have Avni's recorded statement without her being involved. Means She'll not be blamed when Avni's statement will be shown. "Ms. Mahajan, Thank you. Apne police ko bohot tarike se madad kiya. Ab baki investigation hum dekh lenge", says Officer Vivek. Yuvika nods at him with smile while saying "Good luck". She gets down from the police jeep. Police jeep goes from there.

"Mujhe nahi pata ke aaj kal tumhe police protection lekar ghumna padta hai?!", Yuvika hears a familiar voice. She turns around & sees Neil. She feels happy seeing Neil after a long time. She thinks to play along with Neil. "Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tumhe isse bhi problem hai?!", says Yuvika. "Waise bohot smile kar rahi thi tum uss officer ka saath jaise bohot yaarana hai uske saath", says Neil. Yuvika understands that Neil is getting jealous so decides to tease him further. "Agar yaarana hai bhi toh?!",asks Yuvika. "Jab mujhse Delhi mein mile tab toh aise behave nahi karti thi tum?!", says Neil. "Iske saath iss situation ka kya similarities hai?!",teases Yuvika further. Neil just couldn't control his inner feelings & says "Similarities hai". Yuvika stares at him with a knowing face. "Mujhse hazam nahi hota jab tum mere alawa kisi aur ke saath-", Neil gets cut off by Yuvika."Main bas uss officer ke help le rahi thi. Isiliye out of town jana pada aur unhone itni help kiya toh maine socha unko good luck wish kar deti hoon", says Yuvika. Although she knows why Neil behaving like that. She just wants to hear it. "Waise toh hum dono ke bich ab friendship bhi nahi raha phir itna chid kyu rahe ho?. Ya phir tum yeh kehna chahte ho ki hum dono ke bich kuch hai?", asks Yuvika. Neil looks at her shocked.

Like someone poured cold water on him. Why he is behaving like a hormonal teenager who can't bear any male around his girlfriend?!. Whereas Yuvika isn't his girlfriend neither he is her boyfriend. Neil composes himself and says "Actually, I'm sorry Ms.Mahajan". Yuvika understands something shifts between them. Looks like she again made a blunder. "Neil, woh mein-",she gets cut off by Neil saying "Ms. Mahajan, aayiye main apko lift de deta hoon. Manzil toh ek hi hai. Mrs Mahajan pareshan ho rahe honge apke liye". Yuvika understands that she again pressed wrong nerve of Neil. She curses herself. Neil was about to open passenger seat for her but remembers about file. "Please ek min dijiye. Mere kuch kaam ki chiz hai jisse mujhe back seat pe rakhna hai", says Neil & Yuvika nods at him.

Neil shifts files to backseat & Yuvika sits in passenger seat. Neil starts driving his car. It's been a while in a car but still remains some tension between them. Yuvika was about to say something but Neil's phone starts ringing. He was about to take the phone but gets slip from his hand & falls into Yuvika's feet. "It's okay. Main utha deti hoon", saying this Yuvika picks up his phone from ground but frowns seeing caller's name 'Miraya'. Still she gives him his phone. Neil takes the call. "Ha, bolo chotu", says Neil while smiling & Yuvika's ears perked up hearing it. Neil has a nickname for Miraya!?. Since when?!. "Kaha ho tum?. Tumne kaha tha ki training doge. Tumhare ghar aau?", says Miraya. "Thik hai, aa jao but mujhe thoda time lagega aane mein. Drive kar raha hoon", says Neil. "Ohh phir main rakhti hoon phone. Jab aaoge bata dena. Main aa jaungi. Fhilhaal safely drive karo", says Miraya & cuts the call.

Yuvika feeling frustrated. She wants to ask Neil about his & Miraya's this kind of closeness but how can she ask anything to him. She doesn't have any right on him. Also she doesn't want to sound creep & weird infront of him. Whereas Neil was at peace thanking God that Yuvika didn't got to know about Miraya or anything. If she gets to know about that she'll again create a mess which he clearly wants to avoid. They reaches Mahajan property & Yuvika thanks him for giving her lift. He hums at her. Yuvika feels kind of disappointment but thinks she'll try to mend things between them. Yuvika gets out from the car.

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Yuvika comes out from washroom taking a long relaxing shower. Isha comes at her room hurriedly. "Di, apko jo karna hai issi hafte mein karna hai warna baat bighad jayegi", exclaims Isha. "Kya hua?. Kya bol rahi hai?",asks Yuvika. "Di, Miraya Neil ko pasand karti hai I know. Aap Neil ko pasand karte ho yeh bhi main janti hoon aur Neil apko pasand karta hai woh bhi main janta hoon. Isiliye jaldi se aap dono ke bich sab kuch thik karo warna woh Gargi Mahajan aur DJ apko hurt karne ke liye Miraya ke shaadi Neil se kara degi", says Isha.

"Isha tu kuch bhi maat bol. Neil kyu karega Miraya se shaadi?. Neil toh tauji ko pasand nahi karte toh Miraya ko kaise accept kar lega woh?!", says Yuvika. Isha slaps her forehead frustratedly. "Di, dhakkan wali baat maat karo", says Isha. Yuvika glares at her. "Tu ky-",she gets cut off by Isha. "Apko pata bhi hai aaj woh dono cafe pe ek dusre ke haath pakadke baithe the. Bishwaas nahi ho raha toh Bhai se puch lena", says Isha. Yuvika looks at her in a reflex. "Kya kaha tu ne?!. Haath pakadke?!",asks Yuvika suddenly feeling possessive. "Ha. Haath pakadke. Agar abhi bhi kuch nahi kiya na apne toh wohi dono haath pakadke phere bhi lenge aur aap khade hoke tamasha dekhte rahenge baas", says Isha dramatically. So that's the news.

Suddenly she remembers that Miraya was about to go Neil's house. "Isha, main abhi aayi", saying this Yuvika goes from there quickly. "Chalo unke dimaag ke batti jali", mutters Isha.

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Neil was teaching Miraya about some pros & cons about working with a client as a fashion designer. Also how she needs to understand the project first then start to working on it. "Chotu,bohot bhuk lagi hai. Papa ko aane mein der hogi toh main abhi kuch banake dinner kha lunga. Tumne dinner kiya?",asks Neil. Miraya nods at him negatively. "Thik hai. Pasta aur noodles banata hoon", saying this Neil gets up from sofa & was about to go kitchen but doorbell rings. "Lagta hai uncle aa gaye", says Miraya. "Lekin papa ne kaha tha ki unhe der hogi", says Neil while frowning.

He opens the door & gets shocked seeing Yuvika. "Aap yaha?",asks Neil. "Woh mummy ne bheja kuch sweets Vidhur uncle ke liye toh...", says Yuvika. "Ms. Mahajan, please aayiye", says Neil. Yuvika enters & sees Miraya. "Yuvika di, aap yaha?!",asks Miraya. "Ha woh mithai dene aayi thi", says Yuvika giving her fake smile. "Koi baat nahi Neil baas dinner ready kar raha hai toh aaj hum teeno saath mein dinner kar lenge. Hai na Neil?!",asks Miraya excitedly. "Mujhe lagta hai ke-", Neil gets cut off by Yuvika saying " Ha. Kyun nahi. Aaj hum teeno saath mein dinner kar sakte hai. Infact main Neil ko help bhi kar sakta hoon". Neil says " Samaj mein nahi aa raha hai ki yeh mera ghar hai ya phir aap logo ka?!". Hearing that both Yuvika & Miraya shuts their mouth. "Well, welcome Ms.Mahajan. I hope meri hospitality mein koi kaami nahi rahegi", says Neil staring at Yuvika. Yuvika nods at him thinking how to mend things between them & to make Neil realize about his feelings towards her which she started to feel.

You know mujhe hamesha se lagta hai ki the makers didn't do justice to her love realisation phase...

Mujhe aur dekhna tha ., Lighthearted jealousy, funny banter,push & pull,sexual tension dekhna tha..

You are fulfilling that ..

Thank you.

Mai ek taraf dekhta hu Ap logo ko aur dusri taraf dekhta hu vanshaj writers ko aur thik then i remember i shouldn't compare those brainless to our born writers

You are genuinely joining the blank space - isi Isha ko to dekhna hai hume

+ And fulfilling everyones wish ye to app log pehle sehi karte aye ho so same goes for here like you are giving Jealous Neil and Jealous Yuvika together

Also you are perfectly portraying Yuvika's love realisation period jo hume show mai nehi dikha bus ek din Neil use propose Kara aur use tabhi realise hua and here we are getting efforts from Yuvika which we love as We aren't Vanshaj fan at the end anymore we all have become Neil fans

You are doing a great job + again sorry for late review ❤️

Writers where are you people? Take notes and use this in your show

Thank You for this

Writers ko bolna bekar hai to take notes as they won't

Possessive Neil aaahaaaaan

NeiVika doing dinner together in Bharadawaj House, obviously Neil k haatoon ka khana and Yuvika gonna helping him actually gonna learn from him how to cook delicious items

LOVED It

Sorry for late comment Raat ko aadhi neend mein I posted comment on NeiVika AT itself instead of clicking on link and posting here

Other half of comment is on AT wohi se padh le

Part 4

"Neil main aa jaati hoon help ke liye. Yuvika di toh nayi nayi aayi hai yaha toh unhe hum dono serve kar denge", says Miraya. "Actually yehi thik rahega", says Neil not giving any chance to Yuvika to say something. "Actually tum dono kaam karo main tum logo ko disturb nahi karungi lekin please mujhe living room mein akela maat choro", says Yuvika. Miraya laughs & says "Yuvika Di, aaj aap Neil ke banaya hua khaana khayoge toh humesha yaad rakhoge".

In kitchen Neil starts cutting vegetables while Miraya starts boiling noodles & pasta. Yuvika keeps staring Neil while thinking for sure he has charming face with personality which attracts anyone towards him. Yuvika stands near them but in a distance. Neil feels Yuvika's gaze on him which kind of makes him nervous. What if Yuvika again creates a scene in house telling everyone about Miraya coming here?!. He already faced burnt because of Mahajans nature. He doesn't want to repeat it. "Ms. Mahajan",calls Neil & Yuvika's trance gets break. "I hope apko noodles aur pasta se koi problem nahi hai", says Neil. "Nahi. Mujhe koi problem nahi hai. Infact yeh toh tumhe bhi pata hai", says Yuvika deliberately. Neil looks at her shocked thinking what the hell she is doing while Miraya frowns. "Matlab?!",asks Miraya. "M...matlab kuch nahi chotu. Mujhe noodles aur pasta pass karo", says Neil while Miraya shruggs nonchalantly.

Yuvika smirks thinking she hit the right nerve of Neil which made him nervous. "Waise ek baat puchu?",asks Yuvika. "Puchiye", replies Neil while adding mayonnaise on pasta. "Tumne Miraya ko aise nickname kyu diya....I mean aisa nickname toh ek friend dusre friend ko nahi deta right?!",asks Yuvika deliberately while giving a knowing look at Miraya. Miraya looks at Neil with dreamy eyes while Neil thinks Yuvika again trying to create scene which will land him in trouble. "Ms. Mahajan, jaruri nahi ke ek friend dusre friend ko nickname denge. Ek bhai bhi pyaar se apne behen ko nickname de sakta hai jaise ke maine Miraya ko diya", says Neil calmly. Miraya feels someone poured cold water on her to burst her bubble about Neil having tiny bit feelings for her romantically. She feels embarrassed.

Yuvika smiles at him saying "I see. Kitne pyaara bond hai yeh". Neil looks at her confused. He thought Yuvika will create a scene about this statement also but she's looking calm. What if it's calm before the storm?!. "Chotu, chalo dinner karte hai. Please aayiye Ms Mahajan", saying this Neil starts serving themselves with dinner. Miraya silently eats it. While Yuvika's mind dances thinking she successfully bursted the bubble of Miraya without doing anything. Now she needs to make Neil understand about the feeling which they feel for each other. Neil finally gets the meaning of Yuvika's question. She was indirectly pushing him from Miraya. Of course in her eyes like a typical Mahajan, He is just a servant nothing else. But he feels sad thinking Miraya's silent behavior. He should stay away from every Mahajan for his own betterment it seems.

Interesting...

You have written it in such a interesting manner ...

So now YUVIKA & Neil are busy playing with each other....ye dono nahin sudhrege...

But it is such a NeiVika like thing, they are like that..only as I have said before..I wanted to see this phase in YUVIKA-Neil relationship...push & pull... intensity..a bit jealousy.. insecurities...You have shown it perfectly...

Beautiful ..

& Maine msg type karke bhejna bhul gayi thi kal,I thought Maine snd Kiya tha...

Sorry for late review...

Originally posted by: samIHA04

Part 4

"Neil main aa jaati hoon help ke liye. Yuvika di toh nayi nayi aayi hai yaha toh unhe hum dono serve kar denge", says Miraya. "Actually yehi thik rahega", says Neil not giving any chance to Yuvika to say something. "Actually tum dono kaam karo main tum logo ko disturb nahi karungi lekin please mujhe living room mein akela maat choro", says Yuvika. Miraya laughs & says "Yuvika Di, aaj aap Neil ke banaya hua khaana khayoge toh humesha yaad rakhoge".

In kitchen Neil starts cutting vegetables while Miraya starts boiling noodles & pasta. Yuvika keeps staring Neil while thinking for sure he has charming face with personality which attracts anyone towards him. Yuvika stands near them but in a distance. Neil feels Yuvika's gaze on him which kind of makes him nervous. What if Yuvika again creates a scene in house telling everyone about Miraya coming here?!. He already faced burnt because of Mahajans nature. He doesn't want to repeat it. "Ms. Mahajan",calls Neil & Yuvika's trance gets break. "I hope apko noodles aur pasta se koi problem nahi hai", says Neil. "Nahi. Mujhe koi problem nahi hai. Infact yeh toh tumhe bhi pata hai", says Yuvika deliberately. Neil looks at her shocked thinking what the hell she is doing while Miraya frowns. "Matlab?!",asks Miraya. "M...matlab kuch nahi chotu. Mujhe noodles aur pasta pass karo", says Neil while Miraya shruggs nonchalantly.

Yuvika smirks thinking she hit the right nerve of Neil which made him nervous. "Waise ek baat puchu?",asks Yuvika. "Puchiye", replies Neil while adding mayonnaise on pasta. "Tumne Miraya ko aise nickname kyu diya....I mean aisa nickname toh ek friend dusre friend ko nahi deta right?!",asks Yuvika deliberately while giving a knowing look at Miraya. Miraya looks at Neil with dreamy eyes while Neil thinks Yuvika again trying to create scene which will land him in trouble. "Ms. Mahajan, jaruri nahi ke ek friend dusre friend ko nickname denge. Ek bhai bhi pyaar se apne behen ko nickname de sakta hai jaise ke maine Miraya ko diya", says Neil calmly. Miraya feels someone poured cold water on her to burst her bubble about Neil having tiny bit feelings for her romantically. She feels embarrassed.

Yuvika smiles at him saying "I see. Kitne pyaara bond hai yeh". Neil looks at her confused. He thought Yuvika will create a scene about this statement also but she's looking calm. What if it's calm before the storm?!. "Chotu, chalo dinner karte hai. Please aayiye Ms Mahajan", saying this Neil starts serving themselves with dinner. Miraya silently eats it. While Yuvika's mind dances thinking she successfully bursted the bubble of Miraya without doing anything. Now she needs to make Neil understand about the feeling which they feel for each other. Neil finally gets the meaning of Yuvika's question. She was indirectly pushing him from Miraya. Of course in her eyes like a typical Mahajan, He is just a servant nothing else. But he feels sad thinking Miraya's silent behavior. He should stay away from every Mahajan for his own betterment it seems.

wow , great , I am impressed, spandan was right this forum has lots of born writer give your number to Spandan , I wanna connect with you, you will be the writer of my next project