!Hostage! part 2 pg 2 29/5

im not really a very good writer but i just had this idea of writing and just want to give it a go.It might be a short story. so here it goes.....

!Hostage!

part 1

life has been going great. i had made lots of friends and school was good until mom and dad told me that we were moving houses AGAIN. i was terrified. i always hated moving houses and because of dad's job we had to move often. we had just moved and setteled down, i thought this was it but dad got a job somewhere else. After saying goodbye to friends and neighbours we drove off to our new home. The car had stoped in front of a big house which looked bigger then our old one. But looking on the bright side it wasnt that bad, the shops and the park was near. ''see vanessa it isnt bad is it'' mom looked at me. i could see that she wanted a good reply. '' yes mom its great'' i replyed back smilling slightly. We entered the house. It was very dusty. After a lot of coughs and moans the house was all cleaned up. After having lunch i went up to my bedroom. I moved the curtains and looked out to see the sun shinning. I ould see the garden and a little shed. There was another house behind ours which looked old and scary. It looked as if noone had been living in that house for many years.

i hope this part isn't so boring. plzz do comment and let me know if i should continue.

maha😳

wow this is nice 😳 i can tell this will be a very interesting story 😉 😃 plz keep writing 👏 👏

thnx nishi i will try to make it interesting.

^^^ its already interesting !! 😆 😆 plz write more 😃 😃 😃

wow maha this is a rly good start! i love the name vanessa! 😊 plz continue soon!

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

^^^ its already interesting !! 😆 😆 plz write more 😃 😃 😃

aww thnx. i will😊

Originally posted by: indigal07

wow maha this is a rly good start! i love the name vanessa! 😊 plz continue soon!

thnx. i will try to continue soon

😊 thnx hun. will continue sson

part 2

Days went past quickly. The neighberhood was very nice. school wasnt so bad either, i loved it and the best part was that we were not going to move again. it was night time. i opened my curtains to let the moonlight in and was just about to turn back to get in my bed when some flashes of light in the some house i had seen before. after few seconds i saw a shadow which wasnt clear. i had only blinked and only looked to see that the shadow had dissapeard but there were still flashes of light. Thinking it as my illusion i went back to sleep. the next day i woke up . it was holidays so i went out with my new friends to the park. which was in front of the creepy house. as i went past i stared. i wanted to look inside from the windows but it was covered with red paint. i asked my friends if they knew anything about the house and all they said was they didnt know. after having a nice time in the park i was coming back from home alone. it was kind of dark. i walked past that house again and this time i saw a car parked in front of it which wasnt there before. a big and black kind of car. you know...the ones they use on a funeral. i just continued walking but then a heard big footsteps and someone was breathing right on my neck. i looked back but the street was empty. noone was there. now this time i got really scared so i started walking faster.

closing the door behind my i went into the living room and sat down on the couch trying to relaxe. i switched on the tv new was on. the breaking news was about a missing 5 year old kid. ''vanessa'' ''yes mom'' ''me and your dad are going out to a party'' ''really can i come please?'' this was the perfect chance to get away from the house and just enjoy.''sorry hun but you cant this is party where only adult will be there and you will get bored'' dad interepted.well its better if i stay at home than go to a party filled with bunch of adults. ''thats ok mom i will stay at home''. ''okay bye take care of your self we will be back bye 10pm''. the door shut behind them. there was silence in the house. i decided to watch movies and go on the computer.

10pm

the phone rang. ''hello''i answered. ''hi sweety its mom sorry but we wont be back till 12pm ok go to bed early and if there is any problem call me asap. ok.bye'' ''ok bye''

12 pm sharp

i was sleeping when the phone rang. i woke up to answer it. i picked it up ''hello'' there was no answer . but then i could hear someone's heavy breathing.

plzz plzz do comment as they are very important to me. hope u guys liked this part.

maha😳

😲 i didnt know it was u !!! lil dreamer 😆 this is awesome !! to be honest i've something like dat happen to me before 😕 except it was typing coming from another room 😆 anyway plz plz continue !!! its getting good 😳