General one shots

Ohh you are unbelievable

That was one hell of a suicide note.

"Fateechar Yuvika", " I am not a great writer like my wife" , "Yuvika is responsible for my plight".& cherry on the cake was the disclaimer at the end.

But one thing is you understand DJ & perfectly captured his plight. You are a emphathetic person I must say..

But Apne DJ Ko maar hi diya, Kamaal ho

I want Ruhi to be as strong as she is in your story.

In second part: Ohh you actually made Yuvika smart, I liked it. You write really well. Vocabs, subject all are well organised.

Also Yuvika observing Mahajans' weakness & exploiting them is something I always wanted. But show mein toh woh sirf khatron ka Samna Karti, khud se koi action to leti nahin.

So you have made Yuvika self-sufficient.

Good job for that.

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Ohh you are unbelievable

That was one hell of a suicide note.

"Fateechar Yuvika", " I am not a great writer like my wife" , "Yuvika is responsible for my plight".& cherry on the cake was the disclaimer at the end.

But one thing is you understand DJ & perfectly captured his plight. You are a emphathetic person I must say..

But Apne DJ Ko maar hi diya, Kamaal ho

I want Ruhi to be as strong as she is in your story.

In second part: Ohh you actually made Yuvika smart, I liked it. You write really well. Vocabs, subject all are well organised.

Yeah I've been planning this one for so long

Thank you for your review

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Also Yuvika observing Mahajans' weakness & exploiting them is something I always wanted. But show mein toh woh sirf khatron ka Samna Karti, khud se koi action to leti nahin.

So you have made Yuvika self-sufficient.

Good job for that.

Yep I've added some more lines to the second post do check it

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Originally posted by: MochaQueen

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Do read and post your reviews soon

Oh this was so good!

DJ being jealous of Yuvika's achievements and so done with life, him acknowledging his wife's writing skills and at last, the disclaimer at last

The second fic was exactly how I imagined the scene to go when you first mentioned the draft idea. Gargi's face must have been so good to see in the show