A Tale As Old As Time [COMPLETED]- Page 5

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

Interesting development.

The others aren't aware that Ansh isn't their Ansh, but his counterpart from the future. His head must be reeling from all the info dump on him because everything is different here. It just adds to his responsibilities and how he'll do it differently this time. Even then, he has his own weaknesses, his love and his hopes, and his inability to part from Piya, which he won't do in any of the lifetimes. I'm glad he's at least thinking this instead of cutting the ties completely.

How will Piya from the future timeline affect the story and their lives here? And how will Ansh manage to do what he's wanted to do? I'm so looking forward to this.

Your writing makes me go back to my own fic writing, which I apparently write in my head instead of Google doc where I should. 🥲🥲

Thanks dear! ☺️

Well, this Ansh isn't really a counterpart. He is the original. 🤭 Trouble is, unknowingly he has conjured an entirely different world where everyone has a different memory than his. And since he remembers everything, he is aware that something must have gone wrong. What he hasn't realized yet is that he himself has cast the spell.

As for his determination, rewatching the show made me realize that Piya isn't just a very important second priority for Ansh. The idiot writers did him dirty post the leap. Otherwise when you see it from a completely neutral point of view, at times it feels like Ansh loved Piya more in the beginning while Piya's love deepened post their marriage and specially after the leap.

That being said, it'll require something extraordinary for Ansh to give up on Piya and vice versa. So he'll keep trying his best until he finds a solution.

As for Piya, now she has an idea of the world Ansh is in. So definitely she'll come up with a plan. Rest, be patient and keep reading. 😜

And yes, I can totally relate with the writing in my mind syndrome. 🙈🙈🙈

Ansh has been struck down and he can't help the family avoid Mohana. But then, the past should not be altered too much. There will be other consequences.

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Oh, man, I am so excited to see what happens next. I was thinking Piya would go alone to the past, but it's great she has a company now, her friends who are hopefully as capable as her.

The chapter had all that's the crux of this story. Piya and her bonds and their willingness to go to extremes for her sake. Their fears are valid and I'm counting on you to bring them back all safe.

The 'every spell has its limitations' reminded me of Itachi's 'every jutsu has a weakness and this jutsu's weakness is simply my existence'. *swoons*

Now, is the past storyline going to be the "improved" version of the main story from the show? That is, the mistakes they made in the series and here it'll be how they could have acted differently? But it's Piya with the knowledge of what's happened.

Please update soon.

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

Oh, man, I am so excited to see what happens next. I was thinking Piya would go alone to the past, but it's great she has a company now, her friends who are hopefully as capable as her.

The chapter had all that's the crux of this story. Piya and her bonds and their willingness to go to extremes for her sake. Their fears are valid and I'm counting on you to bring them back all safe.

The 'every spell has its limitations' reminded me of Itachi's 'every jutsu has a weakness and this jutsu's weakness is simply my existence'. *swoons*

Now, is the past storyline going to be the "improved" version of the main story from the show? That is, the mistakes they made in the series and here it'll be how they could have acted differently? But it's Piya with the knowledge of what's happened.

Please update soon.

Thank you dear! ☺️

You know how much I love characters with proper arcs. Be it Nishant, Saavi or Naman, they deserve much appreciation and this time I'm gonna focus on that along with giving them some closure. Don't worry, no matter how difficult the situation gets, they'll always be together. 🤗

Coming to the that particular dialogue about spells and their limitations, even I was thinking about Itachi. 🤭 🤭 🤭

As for the past, I don't intend to create a better version of Nazar because that would require me to write 50+ chapters considering how long the show was. It'll be more about introspection and the characters' individual journey. I just hope you and the other readers enjoy reading it as much as I'm enjoying writing it. ☺️

Piya is thinking Ansh is not really stuck in the past. He is stuck in a dream. That theory does make sense. Hard to say which is better.

Pia will not be alone in this quest. She will be aided by two people she can trust.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Piya is thinking Ansh is not really stuck in the past. He is stuck in a dream. That theory does make sense. Hard to say which is better.

Well, she is right in her suspicion. Unlike Ansh, she has full knowledge of what exactly happened, and she is also aware of Ansh's mental state at that moment. So it is obvious that with her experience and all, she'll be able to connect all the dots. However, the journey is not going to be smooth. But she'll have Saavi and Naman by her side and together they'll face all the challenges head on.

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Its not easy for Ansh to play nice with Mohana and pretend that nothing is wrong.