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hi guys i'm new here. my name is Soumya n i'm a die hard fan of DMG. this is my first attempt at an FF pls 4give me if u find faults with my FF or u don not like it. i'm ready 2 follow all your suggestions as u r more xpirienced in me in writing FFs. here goes... 😊
part A
A girl is shown sleeping on a round big bed with pink sheets n pillows. after that her room is shown, a very large room it is. beside the round bed is a bedside table made of mahogany wood, there is a lamp on top of it and beside the lamp is a landline phone the rest of the table is scaterred with papers of all sizes n a lts of rubber bandsn an alarm clock. on the other side of the bed aslo is a mahogany table but a smaller one on it were photographs in their frames, one shows a close up of a boy (who was the girl's best friend Nakul) n a sweet girl on a beach nother shows the same sweet girl with two boys who r her two older bros Ranvir n Abhimanyu another photograph with her sweet older sister Anjali n one more was the same girl with 3 other girls: KJ short 4 Kajol Jain, Malini n Bikki,beside her n all were tank tops on which was printed PINK band n another of the girl with her gang in which were Nakul her best friend, she herself n her other friends Peter,Mallah,Akriti,Purvi,Vidya n Ali. the last photograph is of the girl with her parents: her mom who was a major in army: Major Vaibhavi Rai Singh n her dad a home minister n india's biggest business tycoon:Mr Shashank Rai Singh.there is a drum set n a cool guitar a the end of the room a big sliding door which led to the girl's huge closet which was filled with fashionabl clothes nshoes n sandals in hundreds. a dressing table is on the opposite side of her bed the dressing table is quite big n is scattered with combs,hair brushes, make up stuff n other things.a large window takes up one wall n on the wndow huge pretty light curtains are shown being blown by air.the other wall is plastered with photographs of the girl n her close ones. another door leads to the spacious bathroom, a study table is shown with a laptop on it n many books n a pen stand. beside it is a shelf full of many things: decorative items, photos,books a pink color stylish school bag type bag but not a school bag.on an empty wall is a plasma TV with a dvd set n huge music systems attached to it. then the focus goes on an alarm clock ringing n the girl taking out a hand out of her blanket to put off the alarm clock, she goes off to sleep again. 10 mins later a girl opens the door of the room n comes inside the room. her hair is tied in a ponytail n she's wearing a jogging suit.'aaj to main Ridz ko dara deti hoon' she says in her mom's voice" Ridi beta tayaar hui ya nahi ?" " the girl says in her sleep "haan mom, tum nashta laga do main aa rahi hoon" Anjal ithen giggles n says" Hmph! ABHI TAK SORAHI HO, JALDI UTHO!" the girl in the bed says "5 mins aur sis" "Ridi kab sudhrogi tum haan? bacche uth jao aaj tumhe hospital bhi to join karna hai. pata subah mujhe mom se tumhari vajah se daant pad gayi ki tum tayaar ho gayi ho aur main nahi, jab ki tum so rahi thi" to this she gets the reply tht" meri vajah se daant khane ki tumhe aadat honi chahiye,after all wat r big sisters 4?" "OK little sister chalo ready ho jao nahi to Dr Mehra tumhare saath saath mujhe bhi maar dalengi, humare first din par bhi late ho gaye" n kisses the girl in bed on her cheeks. on hearing this the girl's eyes quickly open n she hurriedly gets up." Di agar aaj hum late ho gaye to sab tumhari galti hai" Anjali says " meri galti late se to tum uthti ho har din" " aur nahi to kya, jab tumhe pata hai ki main late se uthti hoon to mujhe jaldi uthana chahiye tha na!" the girl says the focus is on her face now,sweet features, pretty face n good body but in her eyes was pride,anger,style,sweetness n innocence. her face showed that she was a very proud n thought nothing of ppl other than herself n her good friends n family but also there was a sweetness n care 4 ppl she knew n confidence to do something great so tht everyone knew her n praised n thank her.she also had faith on herself. this was our one n only Riddhima but a bit different one. Ridz snatched the towel from her closet n a set of clothes. she thn disappeared in the bathroom n anjali also went to get ready. whn Ridz came out he was luking gr8 as usual, she was wearing a dark blue jeans with a thin stripe white tank top. he hurriedly came out dried her hair wid hair dryer, took a white small hand bag n put on pencil heel white sandals. she did light makeup brushed her hair so tht it luked perfect n silky n shiny. thn she picked up her car keys, her goggles n left her room. whn she came downstars her family was at breakfast, anjali joined her at the foot of the staircase wearing cream pants n black full sleeve shirt with black handbag n slippers. "ma hum chalein?"
mom: beta nashta to kar lo tum dono.
R: nahi maa time nahi hai, waqt milega to kha lenge hospital mein hi.
Ranvir: kya baat hai sis sab kuch itna matching, matching earrings,matching get up,matcching watch,cool yaar tum dono to kamaal ki lag rahi ho.
R: thx bhaiyya.
A: yes thx bhaiyya.
Abhimanyu: main chod dun tum dono ko.
R: no thx Bro, hum chale jaayenge.
dad: best of luck tum dono ko.
AR:thx dad.
both of them rush outide n Ridz gets in the driver's seat
R: di jaldi karo, late ho raha hai.
A: ya i'm coming.
both of them reach sanjeevani hospital n get out of the car.
A: humara pehla din hope sab theek jaye
R: (checking herself in the car's mirror) take a chill bill sis sab accha jayega dekh lena.
btoh of them enter the hospital n ask a nurse where's the locker room the nurse ells them n both sisters get to the locker room.4 interns were there n all turn to see the sisters. Anjali went inside but Ridzy's handbag dropped 2 d floor suddenly. she bent down to pick it n showed her back as her top was a short top. a boy comes from behind n sees her.
guy: (wow, kya model type ki body hai main bhi to jaanu kaun hai ye sexy) then he comes upto Ridz n bends down n says xcuse, may i help u?
R: sure.
both of them get all of Ridz's dropped items then get up.
guy: hi, i'm Armaan n u?
R: i'm RJ.
A:is it really your name?
R: no it's my nick name my friends call me RJ only.
A:oh ok.
then they enter the locker room.
Anjie: Ridzy tum theek ho na?
R: haan sis i'm fine.
the other interns whisper among themselves (lagat hai behne hain)
a guy comes up n says: hi i'm Rahul.
and main Atul hoon says another.
a punjabi girl who was standing on a bench hops down n says aur main Muskaan, a girl who was wearing suit says main mrs Sapna Shah.
Armaan : main Armaan hoon.
all except Anjie n Ridz: aur tum dono?
A: main Anjali hoon aur ye meri choti behen hai says pointing towards Ridz.
R: main RJ hoon aka Riddhima.
all: nice 2 meet u, kya hum bas itne hain, nahi ek aur female doctor hai woh baad mein ayegi says rahul.
atul: cool chalo ab hum Dr.er..haan yaad aaya Dr Keerti Mehra ko report karte hain.
all go to Dr Keerti's room.
sapna knocks on the door.
k: come in.
they go inside.
K: to aap sab hain naye interns, aap bhi yahaan hain Riddhima, bade surprise ki baat hai ki aap apni life mein pehli baar kahin par to time par aayi hain. aaj roz ki tarah late se nahi uthi kya?
Anjali giggles n interns luk confused tht keerti knows the sisters n feel like laughing to hear dr keerti reveal part of Riddhima's character.
R: (blushes) no auntie i mean mam.
ok now i'll call your names to see if all r present here or not.
K: dr Rahul Grewal
Rahul: yes mam.
K: dr muskaan chadda
M:yes mam.
K: dr atul joshi
atul: present teacher, oops! mam.
interns giggle.
K: dr Sapna Shah
s: here mam.
K: dr armaan mallik
A: here doc
K:dr Anjali Rai Singh
Anjie: yes mam
K: n last of all Dr Riddhima Jannat Rai Singh.
R: yup i'm here mam.
kal thodi der mein aapko apni ek aur intern friend mil jayegi n Ridi n Anju aap unhe jaanti hain.
AR: kaun mam?
K: ye aapko pata chal jayega, par Ridi tum use zyada acche se jaanti ho. now 4 ure duties she tells them their duties n says ek hafte tak aap pairs mein honge kaam karne ke liye aur aapka accha kaam aapko points dilaega n intern of the month banvayega. apke pairs hain.Dr Rahul aap apni fiance Dr Muskaan ke saath hain,
(other interns r surprised 2 hear this)
K: dr atul n dr anjali, dr sapna aap humari nayi intern ke saath hain aur dr Riddhima aur dr Armaan aap dono saath hain.
all: yes mam.
K: now go.
all go out n Armaan says to Riddhima: so partener tum dono india ke itne bade business tycoon aur home minister ki betiyaan ho aur tumhari mom army mein major hai right?
AR: tumhe kaise pata?
atul: arre tumhari family ke bare mein kaun nahi jaanta tumhari family itni rich or famous jo hai.
rahul: haan aur tumhare do bhai hain Ranvir jo ek superstar hai aur Abhimanyu jo ek ace pilot hai.
muskaan: tum hum to tumhare samne chote class ke ho gaye, tu mdono to nawaabzaadiyan hongi.
Ridz: laughs: arre hum koi nwaabzaadiyan nahi hain aur dosti mein ye sab nahi dekha jaata silly.
sapna: yes sach kaha tumne.
Armaan: waise main bhi Subhash Mallik ka beta hoon yaar, i'm even quite rich.
rahul: cool iss bar sare rich famous log humare sath hain.
all the interns had been walking while talking n Ridz suddenly bumped into someone n the other girl's papers fell down.
R: oh sorry lemme help u (she bent down n helped the girl) when both stood up to face each other -
both cry out in anger on seeing the other one n say loudly at the same time: TUM! YAHAAN! OH Hell!!!
guess this part of suspense now. guess who it is n why both girls were surprised 2 see the other n why did they look n spoke so full of hatred at each other ?
pls pls comment n i'll continue.should i continue or not? forgive me 4 the mistakes. 😳
part A
A girl is shown sleeping on a round big bed with pink sheets n pillows. after that her room is shown, a very large room it is. beside the round bed is a bedside table made of mahogany wood, there is a lamp on top of it and beside the lamp is a landline phone the rest of the table is scaterred with papers of all sizes n a lts of rubber bandsn an alarm clock. on the other side of the bed aslo is a mahogany table but a smaller one on it were photographs in their frames, one shows a close up of a boy (who was the girl's best friend Nakul) n a sweet girl on a beach nother shows the same sweet girl with two boys who r her two older bros Ranvir n Abhimanyu another photograph with her sweet older sister Anjali n one more was the same girl with 3 other girls: KJ short 4 Kajol Jain, Malini n Bikki,beside her n all were tank tops on which was printed PINK band n another of the girl with her gang in which were Nakul her best friend, she herself n her other friends Peter,Mallah,Akriti,Purvi,Vidya n Ali. the last photograph is of the girl with her parents: her mom who was a major in army: Major Vaibhavi Rai Singh n her dad a home minister n india's biggest business tycoon:Mr Shashank Rai Singh.there is a drum set n a cool guitar a the end of the room a big sliding door which led to the girl's huge closet which was filled with fashionabl clothes nshoes n sandals in hundreds. a dressing table is on the opposite side of her bed the dressing table is quite big n is scattered with combs,hair brushes, make up stuff n other things.a large window takes up one wall n on the wndow huge pretty light curtains are shown being blown by air.the other wall is plastered with photographs of the girl n her close ones. another door leads to the spacious bathroom, a study table is shown with a laptop on it n many books n a pen stand. beside it is a shelf full of many things: decorative items, photos,books a pink color stylish school bag type bag but not a school bag.on an empty wall is a plasma TV with a dvd set n huge music systems attached to it. then the focus goes on an alarm clock ringing n the girl taking out a hand out of her blanket to put off the alarm clock, she goes off to sleep again. 10 mins later a girl opens the door of the room n comes inside the room. her hair is tied in a ponytail n she's wearing a jogging suit.'aaj to main Ridz ko dara deti hoon' she says in her mom's voice" Ridi beta tayaar hui ya nahi ?" " the girl says in her sleep "haan mom, tum nashta laga do main aa rahi hoon" Anjal ithen giggles n says" Hmph! ABHI TAK SORAHI HO, JALDI UTHO!" the girl in the bed says "5 mins aur sis" "Ridi kab sudhrogi tum haan? bacche uth jao aaj tumhe hospital bhi to join karna hai. pata subah mujhe mom se tumhari vajah se daant pad gayi ki tum tayaar ho gayi ho aur main nahi, jab ki tum so rahi thi" to this she gets the reply tht" meri vajah se daant khane ki tumhe aadat honi chahiye,after all wat r big sisters 4?" "OK little sister chalo ready ho jao nahi to Dr Mehra tumhare saath saath mujhe bhi maar dalengi, humare first din par bhi late ho gaye" n kisses the girl in bed on her cheeks. on hearing this the girl's eyes quickly open n she hurriedly gets up." Di agar aaj hum late ho gaye to sab tumhari galti hai" Anjali says " meri galti late se to tum uthti ho har din" " aur nahi to kya, jab tumhe pata hai ki main late se uthti hoon to mujhe jaldi uthana chahiye tha na!" the girl says the focus is on her face now,sweet features, pretty face n good body but in her eyes was pride,anger,style,sweetness n innocence. her face showed that she was a very proud n thought nothing of ppl other than herself n her good friends n family but also there was a sweetness n care 4 ppl she knew n confidence to do something great so tht everyone knew her n praised n thank her.she also had faith on herself. this was our one n only Riddhima but a bit different one. Ridz snatched the towel from her closet n a set of clothes. she thn disappeared in the bathroom n anjali also went to get ready. whn Ridz came out he was luking gr8 as usual, she was wearing a dark blue jeans with a thin stripe white tank top. he hurriedly came out dried her hair wid hair dryer, took a white small hand bag n put on pencil heel white sandals. she did light makeup brushed her hair so tht it luked perfect n silky n shiny. thn she picked up her car keys, her goggles n left her room. whn she came downstars her family was at breakfast, anjali joined her at the foot of the staircase wearing cream pants n black full sleeve shirt with black handbag n slippers. "ma hum chalein?"
mom: beta nashta to kar lo tum dono.
R: nahi maa time nahi hai, waqt milega to kha lenge hospital mein hi.
Ranvir: kya baat hai sis sab kuch itna matching, matching earrings,matching get up,matcching watch,cool yaar tum dono to kamaal ki lag rahi ho.
R: thx bhaiyya.
A: yes thx bhaiyya.
Abhimanyu: main chod dun tum dono ko.
R: no thx Bro, hum chale jaayenge.
dad: best of luck tum dono ko.
AR:thx dad.
both of them rush outide n Ridz gets in the driver's seat
R: di jaldi karo, late ho raha hai.
A: ya i'm coming.
both of them reach sanjeevani hospital n get out of the car.
A: humara pehla din hope sab theek jaye
R: (checking herself in the car's mirror) take a chill bill sis sab accha jayega dekh lena.
btoh of them enter the hospital n ask a nurse where's the locker room the nurse ells them n both sisters get to the locker room.4 interns were there n all turn to see the sisters. Anjali went inside but Ridzy's handbag dropped 2 d floor suddenly. she bent down to pick it n showed her back as her top was a short top. a boy comes from behind n sees her.
guy: (wow, kya model type ki body hai main bhi to jaanu kaun hai ye sexy) then he comes upto Ridz n bends down n says xcuse, may i help u?
R: sure.
both of them get all of Ridz's dropped items then get up.
guy: hi, i'm Armaan n u?
R: i'm RJ.
A:is it really your name?
R: no it's my nick name my friends call me RJ only.
A:oh ok.
then they enter the locker room.
Anjie: Ridzy tum theek ho na?
R: haan sis i'm fine.
the other interns whisper among themselves (lagat hai behne hain)
a guy comes up n says: hi i'm Rahul.
and main Atul hoon says another.
a punjabi girl who was standing on a bench hops down n says aur main Muskaan, a girl who was wearing suit says main mrs Sapna Shah.
Armaan : main Armaan hoon.
all except Anjie n Ridz: aur tum dono?
A: main Anjali hoon aur ye meri choti behen hai says pointing towards Ridz.
R: main RJ hoon aka Riddhima.
all: nice 2 meet u, kya hum bas itne hain, nahi ek aur female doctor hai woh baad mein ayegi says rahul.
atul: cool chalo ab hum Dr.er..haan yaad aaya Dr Keerti Mehra ko report karte hain.
all go to Dr Keerti's room.
sapna knocks on the door.
k: come in.
they go inside.
K: to aap sab hain naye interns, aap bhi yahaan hain Riddhima, bade surprise ki baat hai ki aap apni life mein pehli baar kahin par to time par aayi hain. aaj roz ki tarah late se nahi uthi kya?
Anjali giggles n interns luk confused tht keerti knows the sisters n feel like laughing to hear dr keerti reveal part of Riddhima's character.
R: (blushes) no auntie i mean mam.
ok now i'll call your names to see if all r present here or not.
K: dr Rahul Grewal
Rahul: yes mam.
K: dr muskaan chadda
M:yes mam.
K: dr atul joshi
atul: present teacher, oops! mam.
interns giggle.
K: dr Sapna Shah
s: here mam.
K: dr armaan mallik
A: here doc
K:dr Anjali Rai Singh
Anjie: yes mam
K: n last of all Dr Riddhima Jannat Rai Singh.
R: yup i'm here mam.
kal thodi der mein aapko apni ek aur intern friend mil jayegi n Ridi n Anju aap unhe jaanti hain.
AR: kaun mam?
K: ye aapko pata chal jayega, par Ridi tum use zyada acche se jaanti ho. now 4 ure duties she tells them their duties n says ek hafte tak aap pairs mein honge kaam karne ke liye aur aapka accha kaam aapko points dilaega n intern of the month banvayega. apke pairs hain.Dr Rahul aap apni fiance Dr Muskaan ke saath hain,
(other interns r surprised 2 hear this)
K: dr atul n dr anjali, dr sapna aap humari nayi intern ke saath hain aur dr Riddhima aur dr Armaan aap dono saath hain.
all: yes mam.
K: now go.
all go out n Armaan says to Riddhima: so partener tum dono india ke itne bade business tycoon aur home minister ki betiyaan ho aur tumhari mom army mein major hai right?
AR: tumhe kaise pata?
atul: arre tumhari family ke bare mein kaun nahi jaanta tumhari family itni rich or famous jo hai.
rahul: haan aur tumhare do bhai hain Ranvir jo ek superstar hai aur Abhimanyu jo ek ace pilot hai.
muskaan: tum hum to tumhare samne chote class ke ho gaye, tu mdono to nawaabzaadiyan hongi.
Ridz: laughs: arre hum koi nwaabzaadiyan nahi hain aur dosti mein ye sab nahi dekha jaata silly.
sapna: yes sach kaha tumne.
Armaan: waise main bhi Subhash Mallik ka beta hoon yaar, i'm even quite rich.
rahul: cool iss bar sare rich famous log humare sath hain.
all the interns had been walking while talking n Ridz suddenly bumped into someone n the other girl's papers fell down.
R: oh sorry lemme help u (she bent down n helped the girl) when both stood up to face each other -
both cry out in anger on seeing the other one n say loudly at the same time: TUM! YAHAAN! OH Hell!!!
guess this part of suspense now. guess who it is n why both girls were surprised 2 see the other n why did they look n spoke so full of hatred at each other ?
pls pls comment n i'll continue.should i continue or not? forgive me 4 the mistakes. 😳
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