I don’t know who writes daily dialogues. Doesn’t seem to be Zama as he may just give overall guideline. But it’s crystal clear that Akshara and Abhimanyu’s dialogue writers are different. They should have kept lead’s dialogue writers as same and shouldn’t have brought in so called love angle for Akshara. Maintaining same dialogue writer for leads would’ve made sure we viewers don’t disconnect totally. Initially even I was very angry on Abhimanyu - in fact his self pity speech in front strangers in bonfire irritated me as I felt he should own up where he went wrong. But I was confident and I was proven right that he’d get a beautiful redemption arc - but Akshara never got one and was made even worse. She didn’t deserve this treatment.
Sometimes I really wonder, how on earth Abhimanyu Birla's character is saved from "Habib's extra creativity"? Habib has destroyed every single character to look his " laadla" God like but AB is consistent throughout. Is it bc it's HC n Habib can't do anything?









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