DhruvTara - I WILL FIND YOU fs Completed - Page 8

Extremely sooo sorry for late commenting mansi di😆
Maafi de dena plz , gusse me aakr koi dand mt de dena mujhe , me sautan hu tumhari yaad haina🤣😛

As for the story ,
Maharani ne samrat ko thappad maara.... waah dil chu gaya mera

Tara ne as usual "ji pitashree" waala phrase nhi gaaya and actually apna anger portray kiya apna father k saamne , and realise krwaaya apne dumb pitashree ko wo bhi glt ho skte hai , and with his one wrong decsion her life has turned out to be hell , 😭

And as usual Mahaveer is love ( bt sirf tumhari story me )

Dhruv ka uncounsiously Tara bolna🤗

Tumhari story me kisiko dumbness ki bimaari nhi hai 🤪🤪

Waiting for an Epilogue , wo waala pkka pehle pdh luaungii🤣

Dhruv & Tara's Connection..❤️

Even his unconscious state he is calling Tara ❤️

Maharani 👏 loved her

Tara with MahaRaj scene was nice 👏

In Ur Story Characters normal they do mistakes & realize it and try their best to rectify and I loved it..👏 Keep writing🤗

Waiting for Epilogue

Sorry for late..

Sorry Mansi Di , kuchh jyada hi time laga diya comment Dene mein . Ab maaf kr dena apni chutki ko 😔

Yippee, finally Maharaj ne chirkut ko senapati ka band baj Gaya . 🥳🥳

Vaise ye to hona hi tha , after yaha koi murkh nahi h na .😉

Tara ab tak maharaj se naaraz h , good unhone Jo Kiya tha , itni aasani se maafi nahi milni chahiye unhe👍🏼

Dhruv recover ho raha , matlab epilogue mein DT mil hi jaenge

Aur mahaveer ko iss Raj Purohit ke baare mein yaad h , Jr. Dumbraj ki tarah bhula nahi

And Aapki Tara , she is actually perfect for our Dhruv .Calm , composed , samjhdaar and most importantly apne liye stand leti h ,sirf roti nahi rehti .👏👏

I will find you, Dhruv. If not in this century, in this birth. I will find you in my rebirth

Best line.❤️❤️

Ab epilogue ke liye I am excited . Dhruv Tara ko milte dekhne ke liye wait nahi ho paa raha mujhse .😆

Please update soon🤗

Originally posted by: CutieShona20

Ahhh👏 it's so amazing dear I can't describe it in words it's so outstanding written u pin point each emotions so well that I am so speechless 😊 hats off to your writing skill......👏

Thank you!

U describe story " I will find you " very well with its of emotions .... & That tara yearning lines were so good with of love & emotions I loved it & have written it on my diary also ....😊 Waiting for the epilogue

The epilogue will be updated today 😆

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Tara ka character tumse hi likhwana chahiye tumhari story ki Tara muze badi pasand hai woh exactly waisi hi hai jaisi Dhruv ki Tara ko hona chahiye 👍🏼

Aur meri Tara hamesha vesi hi rahe gi vo Dhruv jise Dhruv ko pyaar hua tha 😊

Dumbraj ko easily mafi nahi mili Tara abhi bhi khafa hai unse good😆

He literally ordered to kill Dhruv whom Tara loved do you think she will forgive him easily. Nope not happening in my story😆

Dhruv babu half dead situation me bhi Tara ka nam le rahe hai ❤️

Kyu nhi bhai akhir pyaar ho karta hai Tara se, aur vese bhi mene bhot socha ke mai iska naam bhul vao from a sleeping Dhruv. So i thought logically and went with the last person he saw before he closed his eyes 👍🏼.

Aur Tara ka ye monologue heartbreaking yet heart touching 👏

Tara wrapped her arms around herself, seeking solace in the chilly night air. The words whispered in her mind, carrying the weight of determination and devotion. "I will find you, Dhruv. If not in this century, in this birth. I will find you in my rebirth. Dhruv's Tara will find him, in every century, in every birth, in all 7 births that were meant to be. Dhruv's Tara will find him no matter what

Mujhe toh yeh average hi laga tha 😆but chalo tum sabko pasand aageya utna hi kafi hai mere liye

Originally posted by: BUSH146

Extremely sooo sorry for late commenting mansi di😆
Maafi de dena plz , gusse me aakr koi dand mt de dena mujhe , me sautan hu tumhari yaad haina🤣😛

Maafi ka toh pata nhi Dand jrur mile ga 🤣

As for the story ,
Maharani ne samrat ko thappad maara.... waah dil chu gaya mera
Haan toh marna hi tha. Side pe khde hoke bas Rona thodi tha 🤣
Tara ne as usual "ji pitashree" waala phrase nhi gaaya and actually apna anger portray kiya apna father k saamne , and realise krwaaya apne dumb pitashree ko wo bhi glt ho skte hai , and with his one wrong decsion her life has turned out to be hell , 😭
Show me toh pata nhi kya bakwas dikha rahe the. Tara aur maharaj ka scene toh planned bhi nhi tha 🤣 But Add kardiya because why not.. Tara ko apne pitashree pe ache gussa karna tha 🤪
And as usual Mahaveer is love ( bt sirf tumhari story me )

Haan sirf yahi show me toh pura budhu bana phir raha hai 🤣

Dhruv ka uncounsiously Tara bolna🤗
❤️
Tumhari story me kisiko dumbness ki bimaari nhi hai 🤪🤪

Aur hogi bhi nhi. Jis din ho gayi mene story delete kar deni hai 🤣

Waiting for an Epilogue , wo waala pkka pehle pdh luaungii🤣
Coming today, tu nhi pdh rahi pehle 😆 janti hu tujhe

Originally posted by: ErUm.J

Dhruv & Tara's Connection..❤️

Even his unconscious state he is calling Tara ❤️

I Know right❤️

Maharani 👏 loved her

Tara with MahaRaj scene was nice 👏

Tara and maharaj didn't have conversation through out the story so added them here 😆

In Ur Story Characters normal they do mistakes & realize it and try their best to rectify and I loved it..👏 Keep writing🤗

Waiting for Epilogue

Characters have to be Normal otherwise I will go insane epilogue coming today 😆

Sorry for late..

It's okay!

Originally posted by: Tia-life

Sorry Mansi Di , kuchh jyada hi time laga diya comment Dene mein . Ab maaf kr dena apni chutki ko 😔

chal thik hai karti hu maaf ajj Jada time mat Li Varna ache se daant pade gi 😆

Yippee, finally Maharaj ne chirkut ko senapati ka band baj Gaya . 🥳🥳

Vaise ye to hona hi tha , after yaha koi murkh nahi h na .😉

Hehehe I Know right 😆

Tara ab tak maharaj se naaraz h , good unhone Jo Kiya tha , itni aasani se maafi nahi milni chahiye unhe👍🏼

Tara ko naaraz hona bhi chahiye😆

Dhruv recover ho raha , matlab epilogue mein DT mil hi jaenge

Haan ji

Aur mahaveer ko iss Raj Purohit ke baare mein yaad h , Jr. Dumbraj ki tarah bhula nahi

Mera vala mahaveer intelligent hai 😆

And Aapki Tara , she is actually perfect for our Dhruv .Calm , composed , samjhdaar and most importantly apne liye stand leti h ,sirf roti nahi rehti .👏👏

Yeh vali Tara Dhruv ke liye best hai😆 show vali toh😆

I will find you, Dhruv. If not in this century, in this birth. I will find you in my rebirth

Best line.❤️❤️

❤️

Ab epilogue ke liye I am excited . Dhruv Tara ko milte dekhne ke liye wait nahi ho paa raha mujhse .😆

I will update today(hopefully)

Please update soon🤗

Pdh li maine pehle
Ab to dand ni dogi na didi😭

Dhruv tara milan🤗
Wow..!!!!
Senapati ko kahi ka nhi chhodha , bhikaari banaa diya🤣
Tara ka dhruv ko dekhte hi unconsiouss ho jaana reliable tha , jo tara k state of mind ko define kr rha tha , which i love the most ,

Dhruv and bhaiji ❤️❤️

DT bedroom and garden scenes , conveys their pure love for EO ,
Story ended😭
Loved the whole story , aesa ek bhi part nhi tha jisne disappoint kiya ho
Well done Mansi di👏

I know u will gonna soon be back wid bang on story
Shayera saxena on the way🤣
Waiting....❤️