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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

Ek full compilation bhi kar hi do.


Lemme know if you're taking next. I'll be able to write tonight post 8-9 pm.

Na, likho.

I'll compile in a bit. I was actually thinking 15 ke baad karungi, but will do that in evening

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

It's a good one. Trisha ko hurt karna zaruri nahi tha but I like it. šŸ‘šŸ¼good(?) move.

Zaroori toh Gaurav ko maarna bhi nahi tha par kar diya, na, tumne qatal? 😔 Aur maine isliye kara kyunki Ayesha ko kaha gaya tha- family bhi. Ayesha is apparently, obedient. šŸ˜†

Nanha munna T-Rex made good use of her lil hands šŸ˜† get us a gut-wrenching (literally) segue. 😭

Tumhaare pun par hasoon ya apne kaand par muh chhupaoon? šŸ˜†

Edited by NoeticLife - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Full compilation Kiya kya?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Segment #14



Darshan rushed to the hospital. Ishaan was talking to the doctor.


"There are multiple stabs, piercing vital organs and there's been a lot of blood loss. She won't be with us for long. I'm sorry, we tried everything possible."


Ishaan's heart sank. The duo went into the ICU.


"Do you recognise the person who…" Darshan asked, hoping for some lead.


"A woman, quite tall, fair. Masked face." Trisha answered.


"Ayesha?" Darshan looked at her and then at Ishaan, who had his fists clenched so tight that the knuckles turned white.


"I will get to be with my Gaurav now. It's alright. Take care of each other." Trisha looked at them and closed her eyes.


—


"You have been missing for two days, Mr. PA." Aarav snidely remarked.


"I had a family medical emergency." Ishaan answered.


Manohar looked at the two boys, "Aarav, learn how to talk to your employees properly."


"But he-"


"Leave."


Aarav rolled his eyes and left. Manohar sighed. "I am sorry for his behaviour. I should have been a better father. Anyway, what happened?"


"My mother has a cardiac arrest."


"How is she doing now?" Manohar picked his cheque book.


"Stable and slightly better. Doctor said they will be putting some stents in."


Manohar wrote 5 lakhs in the cheque, signed and gave it to Ishaan. "Yeh lo, Prateek. Apni maa ka ilaaj achhe se karwa lo."


Ishaan looked at the cheque and him. "Thank you sir. But I can't accept this."


"You don't have a choice." Manohar looked at him intently. "In tomorrow's party, I want you to be the shadow of Aarav."


"As you say, sir." Ishaan nodded.


—


The Jinx Club


Ishaan, donned as a college student, was following Aarav. He hated this brat with all his heart.


Ayesha walked in, hand in hand with another woman. She was somewhat shorter, maybe 5'6.


Ishaan felt his heart beat faster. The murderers. He wanted to rip their heads off with his bare hands.


Aarav and Ramya were busy dancing with their friends.


Darshan was in a corner, keeping an eye on every movement while pretending to be high. Bissa's man friday showed up with another man. The two exchanged glances with Ayesha and her partner and nodded in acknowledgement.


Soon, almost every tween had had some sort of drug. Most of them seemed regular. The party was in full swing when there was commotion on the dance floor.


Ishaan and Aarav had gotten into a fight. Aarav tried to punch Ishaan, which he easily dodged, Aarav pushed him on the floor and jumped on him. Ishaan tried to dodge the punch but it landed on his abdomen.


Darshan stood up to help Ishaan but stopped as Ramya stepped in and screamed at Aarav. He slapped her in retaliation and everyone stood stupefied. Ramya tried to hit back but her bodyguard picked her up and dragged her out of the dance floor.


Aarav turned his attention to the floor, Prateek, his Mr. PA, was gone.



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Sorry for the delay. Hope you like it. If it wasn't clear, Trisha also died.

Edited by Satrangi_Curls - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Awesome updateā¤ļø check the summary and the character list if I missed anything

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Posted: 2 years ago
  • Friday: Bissa's man

šŸ™ˆ It's man friday a phrase which means right hand man. He is unnamed as of now. 😳

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Posted: 2 years ago

Aur mujhe keh rahi thi ki Trisha ko hurt karne ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. 😔 Dono Gaurav aur Trisha ko tumne hi maara hai. Bacha sakti thi Trisha ko tum! 😭 Maine raita philaaya tha, tumne saaf karne ki jagah uske around police ki 'do not enter- crime scene' waali tape laga di. Aisa koi karta hai?


But Trisha's death was done good. Her grief was shown to her last moment. Bichaara Ishu.


Aur yeh PA waala poora mujhe koi samjhao. Main lost hoon iss chakkar mein.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

  • Friday: Bissa's man

šŸ™ˆ It's man friday a phrase which means right hand man. He is unnamed as of now. 😳

I was why is everyone in Simba's gang except Ayesha with such names that give away the fact that they are into shady stuff

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Aur mujhe keh rahi thi ki Trisha ko hurt karne ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. 😔 Dono Gaurav aur Trisha ko tumne hi maara hai. Bacha sakti thi Trisha ko tum! 😭 Maine raita philaaya tha, tumne saaf karne ki jagah uske around police ki 'do not enter- crime scene' waali tape laga di. Aisa koi karta hai?


But Trisha's death was done good. Her grief was shown to her last moment. Bichaara Ishu.


Aur yeh PA waala poora mujhe koi samjhao. Main lost hoon iss chakkar mein.

Well, Ishaan promised Ayesha to give her clients who are rich and powerful. If he was just a smuggler, it would have made no sense, plus, Ishaan aa a cop has more sophistication to be a smuggler, so I made his cover that of a PA. We can explore political impact that way, if you guys want

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Aur mujhe keh rahi thi ki Trisha ko hurt karne ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. 😔 Dono Gaurav aur Trisha ko tumne hi maara hai. Bacha sakti thi Trisha ko tum! 😭 Maine raita philaaya tha, tumne saaf karne ki jagah uske around police ki 'do not enter- crime scene' waali tape laga di. Aisa koi karta hai?


But Trisha's death was done good. Her grief was shown to her last moment. Bichaara Ishu.


Aur yeh PA waala poora mujhe koi samjhao. Main lost hoon iss chakkar mein.

Logically speaking, if you're stabbed in intestine/stomach, there's too much that gets teared and repair ka chance minimal rehta hai.


PA is Ishaan ka cover cover.

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