DhruvTara - I WILL FIND YOU fs Completed - Page 4

I am confused about few things regarding my story. Stuck at editing. I need insights.

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

I am confused about few things regarding my story. Stuck at editing. I need insights.

I am here to help 😆i can give ideas!

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

I am here to help 😆i can give ideas!

Check your dm!

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Check your dm!

Okies! I didn't get a notification yet tho!

U r such a amazing writer dear I thought I am not just reading but the scenes were playing in front of me... 😊😊 tara grief is so heart breaking but today u give a relief that dhruv is alive😊 .... Aur ya machchar mera man kar raha ha ki isse all out mara du...😠

Originally posted by: CutieShona20

U r such a amazing writer dear I thought I am not just reading but the scenes were playing in front of me... 😊😊 tara grief is so heart breaking but today u give a relief that dhruv is alive😊 .... Aur ya machchar mera man kar raha ha ki isse all out mara du...😠

Mera Roz hi Maan karta hai isko all out marne ka. Chal saath me marke ate hai 😆.

Bold- Thank you🤗.

Red- Tara ke liye mujhe show me utna bura nhi laga jitna apni story me lag raha hai 😆

Or apne Dhruv Babu ko zinda rakhna hi tha.

Thank you for reading the chapter❤️

👏👏 Thanks A lot for keeping it logical 👏👏

Glad to know Dhruv is alive🥳 🤗

& Ravi Papa is Rescued ❤️

There is few things im loving in your story ,

one of them is Tara's reaction/action her condition after Dhruv's death & Dhruv's love for her .. her Dream ❤️..DT in your Story is 💞..👏

Even I'm liking Others as well.. u didn't forget any character or connection with DT whether it's Anusya , Sukanya or Rajvaidya ..

for A change I liked this overconfident Senapati 😆..

waiting for Next ..🤗

tumne to Dhruv ko logical way me recover hote hue dikhaya hai good 👍🏼

All sukku scenes❤️

Ravi baba free ho gaye finally

Nice written up dear 🤗

Originally posted by: ErUm.J

👏👏 Thanks A lot for keeping it logical 👏👏

I have to keep it logical otherwise i couldn't live with it.

Glad to know Dhruv is alive🥳 🤗

He is 😆.

& Ravi Papa is Rescued ❤️

Yes.

There is few things im loving in your story ,

one of them is Tara's reaction/action her condition after Dhruv's death & Dhruv's love for her .. her Dream ❤️..DT in your Story is 💞..👏

Thank you!

Even I'm liking Others as well.. u didn't forget any character or connection with DT whether it's Anusya , Sukanya or Rajvaidya ..

I think I have used most of characters related to the DT in the best ways possible.

for A change I liked this overconfident Senapati 😆..

Abhi agar apna chirkut overconfident nhi hoga toh usse punishment kese milegi. 🤣

waiting for Next ..🤗

Will try to update soon 😳

You finally commented after whole three chapters. I can't tell you how excited I got reading your comment last night 😆.