Fichain #3: Start Date 19 June (World building, Segment #10: pg - 16) - Page 8

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Posted: 2 years ago
#71

Mumma, why don't you try your hands on this one?

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Posted: 2 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

I'd love to, but abhi todha complex hua 🙈

Edit: nvm, thought of something, taking the next one

I agree, the concept turned complex too quickly 🙈 Hopefully they get resolved as the segments progress.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

Mumma, why don't you try your hands on this one?

Mumma? You are my Mumma! So, she must be my... Nani! 😳

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Posted: 2 years ago
#74

Haven’t read the updates yet but I’ll give it a go. Put me down for the next one. 🐷

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Posted: 2 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Mumma? You are my Mumma! So, she must be my... Nani! 😳

Ye kab hua? When did you acquire a child? 😲

M not ready to be a Nani yet 🤢- mom aur saas tak theek hai 😔

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Posted: 2 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ye kab hua? When did you acquire a child? 😲

M not ready to be a Nani yet 🤢- mom aur saas tak theek hai 😔

that one's a joke 😆


Kya re paglua?

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Posted: 2 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

that one's a joke 😆


Kya re paglua?

Sorry, I was just messing around. I couldn't resist. My (not so) sincere apologies.🤣

Edited by NoeticLife - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#78

If Shibz is doing the next one, I’ll withdraw. I wanna see where the story goes first before I claim a segment 😳

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Posted: 2 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

If Shibz is doing the next one, I’ll withdraw. I wanna see where the story goes first before I claim a segment 😳

No problem, take your time 😳

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Posted: 2 years ago
#80

Segment #7

Karan looked at the worn-down house, it reminded him of the Portuguese houses he had seen in Goa, though even in Puducherry, his city, the houses looked the same. But something about this house reminded him of the stories he read about witches and magicians.

Karan's body was giving up, and Gustave insisted on going to his grandfather's house, he claimed that maybe they could find an answer there. Though Karam had his own set of questions to ask him, he knew right now, fixing the switch was more important, and if Gustave said he could find a fix, then maybe he could.


Gustave went into a room and locked himself while the old, house help offered Karan some tea. Karan was surprised at how ok the house help was to see a random stranger search through his owner's house while the owner of the house was enjoying tea. Did he know about the switch, Karan wondered.

The tea was the strangest kind of tea, it made him feel so warm and happy. For a second, he felt like he had touched the heavens. What was this place, it was like someone had dropped him in a Wizard of Oz or Alice in Wonderland's plot. He drowned his tea and waited some more, but then, he got bored, so he walked into a room.


The room had so many beautiful sketches of women, children, and men. People intertwined in hugs and kisses, people working, people at war, it was like the room was a storybook. Karan started observing each sketch when something caught his eye.


The beautiful brown almond, almost divinely eyes, capable of hypnotizing anyone, stared back at him from a sketch of a woman holding a crushed stopwatch.

Edited by oh_nakhrewaali - 2 years ago

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