Originally posted by: LizzieBennet
Jaane do yaar! 😒 Clearly I’m not good at reading comprehension. 😏I think the Royal family drama and the plot of Gehraiyaan was too firmly entrenched in my head! 😅🥴Signing off from here- y’all got this! 🙌
Don't sign off just yet! I posted my segment, padh to lo 🥺
Too late, I already wrote my segment and posted it 🤣
I didn't make her Samarth's anything 🤣 but maybe Simi can change that 🤪
Shweta is that Amazon parcel that's being passed around🤣
Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali
Bee, such a beautiful update. Veronica has my heart😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Thank you ❤️ she has my heart too 🥺
Pass the Shweta 🤣🤣
Ish I feel bad for the girl now 🙈
pls make her someone nice and lovable! 🤣
Beautifully written, Bee! Your writing is 🤌🏽🤌🏽! I’m gonna refrain from any further comments lest I get things wrong again. 😅 Your move, Simi! ❤️
Please stay here Sup Di to keep us on track. Yours & Madhuri's detailed feedbacks on the segments are very valuable, and that will encourage us to move forward.Originally posted by: LizzieBennet
Beautifully written, Bee! Your writing is 🤌🏽🤌🏽! I’m gonna refrain from any further comments lest I get things wrong again. 😅 Your move, Simi! ❤️
An absolutely amazing segment, Bhree. ❤️🤗Love it to the core. Hearless Abhay 💔💔. Btw you didn't make Shweta part of anything yet!!🤣😆 Chalo lemme try.😆😆
Originally posted by: Viswasruti
In the second segment, the plot was developed, and the tone was set.
Veronica adored Abhay and married him, expecting an exciting life in her heart. Instead, a mirage-like marriage caused her anguish.
Simi, your narrative is fantastic. I'm looking forward to the next segment.
Thanks for the commentary and helping to make things clearer in my head🤗
Now I need to catch up on the rest
Originally posted by: LizzieBennet
Beautifully written, Bee! Your writing is 🤌🏽🤌🏽! I’m gonna refrain from any further comments lest I get things wrong again. 😅 Your move, Simi! ❤️
@bold: Noooo!! Please keep commenting, I love reading your little updates and analyses 🥺❤️
You didn't get anything wrong, this is a chain fic and iirc the rules said the story is owned by all of us
You just interpreted it your way, that's all! And obviously there was potential in that line of thinking, which is why when I reread the segments I got convinced too 😆
Now all someone needs to do is to make Shweta's role clearer! MCs se zyada meko ab uske baare mein curiosity hai 🤣
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