. : A Second Chance At Love : . SahAn + VeeRat FF [Ch 2 - Page 6]

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. : Prologue : .


Sahiba could feel the eyes of every family member on her, some cold, some angry, and a few worried, as she entered the hall of the Brar Mansion. From the corner of her eyes, she could also see Angad sporting a superior expression in his face, as if she were indebted to him for saving her life.


"Sahiba, meri baat suno... jaane do uss dukhaan ko. Waise bhi ab uska kuch nahi ho sakta. Humein tumhari madat karne do. Hum loan chuka dete hai." she heard Angad's voice from beside her, gentle and patronizing, as if he were talking to a stubborn child. Not trusting herself to speak at the moment, she ignored him, walking towards Daarji and Bebe to touch their feet.


"Yeh ladki kitni ehsaan faramosh hai? Angad ne apni jaan ko khatre mein daal kar iski jaan bachayi hai, aur yeh ussi ki baat nahi sunn rahi hai!" she heard Prabjyot's snarky comment, ever ready to create a scene, just for the fun of it.


"Haan Sahiba... Angad ne tumhari jaan bachayi hai. Tumhe uski baat maanni chahiye." said Daarji, jumping at the chance to put his point forward.


"Sahiba. Ab dukhaan bhi barbaad ho chuka hai. Ab zidd karke kya fayda? Iss ghar ki bahuein hai hum. Aur iss ghar ke jo bhi parampara hai, humein uska maan rakhna hoga." Seerat chimed in, looking around hopefully to see if she had made an impression.


"Duniya dekhi hai maine. Lekin iss Sahiba jaise ziddi ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi. Yakeen nahi hota ki iss ghar ki dono bahuein ek hi ghar se hai. Dekhiye, meri bahu kitni samajdaar hai, aur Sahiba kitni ziddi." Jasleen simply couldn't miss out on this opportunity to throw Manbir's family under the bus.


"Bhas!" Sahiba's fierce voice resonated across the mansion, making everyone flinch. She hadn't yelled. But her voice was calm, yet commanding, that shut everyone up.


"Haan... Angad ne meri jaan bachayi hai. Aur Angad ne hi meri jaan ko khatre mein daala tha. Mere dukhaan ke saath, mere saath, aur Angad ke saath jo bhi hua hai na, uska zimmedaar sirf aur sirf Angad hai." said Sahiba, while everyone else stared at her in horror.


"Yeh kya bol rahe ho tum Sahiba puttar? Angad ne kya kiya?" asked Bebe, voicing everybody's question.


"Mere dukhaan mein jo broker aaya tha, usko Angad ne bhijwaya. Angad ne broker ko yeh kaha tha ki tab tak mat chodna Sahiba ko, jab tak woh Maan na jaaye. Aur baaki ke dukhaan wale gussa hogaye, kyunki unko laga ki agar sab nahi maanenge, toh paisa nahi milega. Congratulations Angad Singh Brar, tumhari wish poori hogayi. Ab mera dukhaan barbaad ho chuka hai. Aur mera saara artwork bhi." said Sahiba, as Angad held his head in shame.


"Angad, hospital mein jab tumne mujhe saara sach batake mujhse maafi manga, maine tumhe ussi waqt maaf kar diya. Woh iss liye nahi, kyunki tum hospital mein the ya tumne meri jaan bachayi. Maine tumhe iss liye maaf kiya, kyunki tumpe gussa karke ya tumhe blame karke kuch hoga nahi. Mera dukhaan, ya mere saare artwork wapas toh nahi milega na mujhe." said Sahiba, calmly.


Angad could feel dread creeping up his heart. There was something about the way Sahiba spoke that unsettled him. He could handle her sarcasm, her extreme anger, even her sharp rise in tone when she completely lost it, but not this calm and rational Sahiba.


"Toh issi liye maine ek faisla liya hai." said Sahiba, an air of finality in her voice.


"Mujhe divorce chahiye. Main Angad Singh Brar ko divorce karna chahti hoon."



A/N:

Hey guys! I'm Niya, and this is my first TMD FF, and it is based on the current track. Though I've not been openly active on the forum for a long time, I have been a silent reader. And like many of you, I completely agree that SahAn has been butchered even before it started properly. Right now, I feel like only a fresh start between the two can push their story forward, because their current relationship is abusive, toxic, and highly unpleasant to watch🤬. So, this is me giving them a fresh start, where Sahiba moves out of the Brar mansion and divorces Angad for good. It is my opinion that a separation is definitely required to give them that needed realization, not of love, but of the mistakes they made. First, they must understand how much they have hurt each other and repent for it, only then love can blossom between them.

Also, as I have mentioned in the title, this is a SahAn and VeeRat FF. So, both the couples will have equal space in this FF. The prologue was centered around Sahiba just to introduce the divorce.

Let me know if you guys like the idea. Based on the reviews and all your opinions, I will decide if I have to continue this FF. So, constructive feedback on my writing is more than welcome! Also, I don't know Punjabi, so I'll stick to Hindi and English for the story😳

Let me know what you think of the prologue and the plot guys!


Love ❤️

Niya




INDEX

Prologue: Page 1

Chapter 1: Page 3

Chapter 2: Page 6



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Very good start. Please continue

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Loving the ff plz continue and finish the work

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Nice start

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Go on! The only sensible and reasonable writers seem to be on this forum!!!! Thank you for keeping Sahiba’s character intact!

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You know l am still on the forum for these fanfics and oneshots which actually makes me realise that producers pata nahi kinko hire karte hai writers to yaha itne acche hai ek ki bhi story TV pe aai to show hit hai boss

Awesome prologue continue to update aur ho sake to Puri story complete karna and do tag me on ur updates

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Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Very good start. Please continue


Thank you so much for the comment!🤗

Will update soon!

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Heyyy! Thank you so much for the encouragement babe!🤗

Your comment literally made my day!


I agree. They need to break away from each other, stay far away to realize their own faults and love should not be even on the list for a very long time. I am rooting for Sahiba to just leave even if Angad refuses to divorce her, which I can see happening. There needs to be loads of character growth for all of them before the process of being friends is even introduced. And after everything that has already happened in the show --- even friendship is far away for the characters!

^This! I totally agree! Even friendship seems to be an impossibility with Angad and Sahiba's current scenario! There's too much distrust between the two of them, and none of their previous issues have been completely resolved!


I really want the Brar's and the Monga's to realize her worth because....she has done so much for them and after everything she doesn't deserve it. Although she has her own faults to look into, her list of faults is still less than the Brar's and the Monga's.

^Exactly! Sahiba is just losing the essence of her character by putting up with these people! It is true that Sahiba has also willingly deceived the Brars at one point and completely absolved her family of everything they have done, especially Seerat. But what that girl has endured in the Brar mansion is just horrible.


I loved your rant because I agree with every word you've just said! I guess the only way we can rectify this story and their characters is through our FFs.







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Originally posted by: Fistix

Loving the ff plz continue and finish the work

Waiting for your chapters


Thank you so much babe🤗

Will update soon!

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