FF - Main Toh Tere Nal Hi Rehna Ji [Chapter One updated] - Page 7

Amazing update

Love it

Cont soon.

Such a wonderful update! Leer has become wiser tha her years demanded of her. At least she’s practical and calls a spade a spade regardless of whether the person is related to her or not. I’m so glad she found the secret stash of jewelry! But she’s not 18 yet and Jassi’s audacity! Veer, giving much attention to Keerat Pehelwaan!

Hi dear

First of all take care of yourself get ample of rest don’t stress at least not for this story sake. I really suggest to let it go through the flow you never know once when you start to write automatically the passionate romance might come naturally which you were planning initially. I would really love to c the real keerat in upcoming parts. The much sassy bolder one. Veer has his own intentions I hope nothing bad. I would like to c his thought process too. Now that there is no love at first sight or attraction angle between them I am really looking forward to see what actually happened between them that they ended falling g for each other so deeply & passionately. Eagerly waiting for next parts.
take care dear!

Go with whatever you want too. I would read anything at this point because you are such a good writer. I can read stories that are inter connected. The more i am able to connect the better and to be keerat being a Rabel is in her nature. Don't worry and keep going!

Lovely update and I really enjoyed Keerat’s pov.👏👏 Take care of yourself ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Wow what an update

Keerat is fierce intelligent and smart. I really liked the way she managed to convince sahiba to pay back loan with sirat’s jewelry. She has that street smartness in her. So it’s like hatred to love for Keerat? ATM she dislikes everything about veer. I would like to see how she falls for him & they end up in a passionate relationship.

Eagerly waiting for next part!
Thanks for the pm

Hi all.

Cross posting the link to update schedule and announcement.