FF - Main Toh Tere Nal Hi Rehna Ji [Chapter One updated]

Wow thanks for choosing the title I suggested. I wish to see this song played on veerat in show. Don’t know if it happens or not. I so wanted to read about veerat version in your story imperative impulses. Glad we are getting a spin off

Eagerly waiting for the update

Wow such a wonderful prologue. I have always wondered what the life would have been for three sisters in the past. We do get visions mainly from Sahiba in the show. But it’s nice to see a young Keerat’s perspective of there life. I must say keerat is much more smarter than Sahiba. This was seen in imperative impulses too. The way she persuaded Sahiba to replace the ornaments for paying off the loan showed that. So it’s nice to see she was always there for Sahiba when Sahiba went through tough financial timings. I have always felt santhu sindy’s actions have put both Sahiba and keerat equally in a tough spot. It’s true that keerat had to face all the taunts and venoms of the society because of her sisters actions. Nice to know Sahiba is having a good life and Seerat is suffering. I wonder how veer became her support when she went through this storm and how they fell in love so deeply. Hope v get to c that in coming chapters. Thanks for the update.

OOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

IT'S UP! I WAS THINKING IT MIGHT TAKE SOME DAYS!!! BUT BRO THIS WAS FAST!!!!

I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO READ! THE PROLOGUE WAS NICE! I WANNA KNOW HOW KEERAT FELL IN LOVE WITH VEER!!!!

I AM ALL IN MERI JAAN! ❤️

Awesome start

Love it

Cont soon

Wow a passionate story on Veerat! So in for it. Wonderful prologue. Do continue soon.

What a lovely start to this new FF! I’m glad that you took this up! I’m afraid too that the show will soon be slotted another time slot and soon edged on going off air! If that happens, I’ll probably be writing random pieces and posting if the forum stays alive!

Not to increase everyone's expectations, I am trying to write slightly mature spin-off but only if I am certain about the FF rules on mature content.

I definitely want something passionate for Keerat. In the show, she is introduced as such a vibrant character and given that she is the youngest, I imagine she has more freedom because of the collective ignorance towards her... She must be the black sheep especially the way she scolded Manbir and Hansraj at the Brar mansion.

I feel sad about the forum if it depends on the show's success. [I am completely unaware of the IF rules since I am still new and clueless.] I guess, I must finish it within limited time soon, I would hate to drop the two works midway.