Porcelain Doll (TereBin OS) - Page 2

wow .. I really liked theos ... you showed the vulnerability of Meerab so perfectly which makers won't be able to show .. please continue with the story if possible ... ❤️

Originally posted by: Aashna5

I want more... i want murtasim to realize what he did was wrong.. i want him to grovel !

this is an OS hun. Can’t afford to start another story but I have been trying to find a story where he is groveling too.

Originally posted by: Sofna

You took the word's from my tongue

The thoughts from my head

The pain from my heart

The feelings from my body

And ✍ a masterpiece.... 👏👏👏

This was too beautiful, poignant to put into word's.😭

Exceptional!

🤗

(PS now you need to write on Murtasim setting all his land and fields on fire 🔥 with Meerub choosing PsychoRhail as a friend)

Awww!! You are very kind with your words… I wish I could write that but no time. Would love to see him running away from burning fields though in true hero style 😂😂

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

felt like I was watching it unfold, loved it! you are an awesome writer!

thank you hun❤️

Originally posted by: rachs

Woww wat description..u have a way with words…plzz write more

Thank you ❤️

It’s really well written but a little too sad