Saiya OS : Sahaarein, updt P. 1, P. 2 , P. 6 - Page 8

I read this already 👍🏼 the first chapter paper boats n rain...my comment on page 2 already😆

Loved your visual imagery. It's brilliant writing. Ch2 on page 6. Will read n come with more.

Beautiful 😍 🤩

The way you describe every little thing...it paints the picture of the surroundings. I could feel the opening of the door because of creaking...the old swing. Will retriate....your thing with visual imagery and today sound of swing audio too. Just amazing 👏 😍

Satya saved Sai👍🏼

Last few lines of part 2 are marvelous ✨️ connect to rains washing away the dust of the past....new beginning...update awaited.

Originally posted by: Nirip

I read this already 👍🏼 the first chapter paper boats n rain...my comment on page 2 already😆

Loved your visual imagery. It's brilliant writing. Ch2 on page 6. Will read n come with more.

I thought so..

Main bhul gayi thi 😂