SKR FF 5:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 137 - Page 109

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Posted: 2 years ago

I liked how you incorporated modern day dilemma of Ram which made Siya to leave. It is same as the Ramayana yet a modern take. Sisters understood Siya better than anyone. Dashrath's anger was right, after all he is the patriarch of the family, not only that, he led the industry for years; his experience matters. But also, that is the dilemma of real life, sometimes we take decision hiding things in behalf of others to protect them. Alas, it never comes out good. It was a sad update, that being said, you penned it beautifully.

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Posted: 2 years ago

The conversation between Ram and Urmila.was.really nice. She has never been scared to voice her disappointment towards him . Their relationship is more then a jiju -salli or devrani and Jeth. I remembered their conversation during suvarnas incident.

Siya's letter was really emotional but also hopeful that she would return.Dashraths anger was expected after all he is still the patriach of the family and he has the responsibility over all 8 of them. Maybe if the boys would have told dashrath abt Berlin these things wouldn't have happened.

And lastly my Lakshmila heart got broken seeing urmila disappointed on lakshman. I also feel bad for him since the three most impo. People in his life have either left him or are disappointed.but Urmila's reaction was jayas since she have been warning him.

Nice chapter in all full with emotions. Can't wait for the kids to come now😁😁.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Yeh toh hona hi tha...🤧🤧aisha kuch expect imagine hi kar rahithi🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧bichara Lakshu Sab ka blame lega jyaada guilt main rahega and most important persons of his life are blaming him is jyaada bura kiya ho sakta Ram Urmila dono pe toh Laksh ka jaan basta maa jaisi bhabi chali gayi Laksh tha fir bhi kuch na kar paya last time bhi khud ko blame Kiya tha par ushme galti ushki nahin thi but this time janr anjane main boys se galti huyi wha protective ban ne ke chakkar main girls'pov ka sochna bhul gaye girls ne warn kiya for bhi wha soche nahin the baat itni serious hogi lagta Hain Manrat Shughan jald hi short out karidenge lekin Sira Lakshmila unka waqt lagegaa 😭😭😭Sira toh physically alag huye Lakshmila pass hoke dur honge 😭😭😭 girls ur family boys Especially Ram se disappoint hain kisine socha na tha ki Siya ko pata hoga Siya itni hurt hogi... Urmila ka silent hoke rehena jab sab question lar rahe tan se Toofan ka bhanak aara tha aagaya hamesha Laksh bolti thi gusaa hone pe bhi Lakshman kam hi boli hain is baar bahut jyaada hurt huyi hain isliye Laksh bhi boli na hi touch karne di distance maintain ki😭😭


6 years leap finally aagaya khusiyan hi khusiyan hoga Pooro family hogi ur bache bhi leap ke CS lagta tha sab ek sath the ab yeh samjhna baaki hain sab ek sath honge kaise leap le andar ke interval main ya leap ke baad..Sab kuch flashback details main dalna jaroorat pade toh ek ek episode ek ek event ek incident ek ek couples kardena😭hamko dekhna hain 6saal main kiya huya inke bich sab solve kaise huya especially Lakshmila and Siya kaise mili CS toh Panvel lag raha Rajrishis kaise react kiye Siya ki delivery struggles family se milne ki pehele ki baki tino issues short out kaise kiye inki baby planning (Manrat toh kar rahe the baki dono jinme hamesha Laksh ur Satruuu new generation ke liye excited rehete the)un tino ki pregnency kaise apne wives pamper khayal rakhte and all ur in tino ki delivery bhi...fir charo couples ki parenting kitna kuch hain😭😭😭😭😭😭 mujhe aage sabka reaction dekhna tha...aap flashback bacho ko story telling format main bole ya past ko yaad karna type bole par sab kuch dalna plzz plzz 🥺🥺🥺

Jald update karna just hope new thread aayega toh khushiyon se bhara hoga🤧

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Posted: 2 years ago

and wo Deen aa he Gaya 😞 jab sabko siya me decision ke bare me pata chalega 🥺 and now sab Tut chuke hai and specially ram and mere LakshMila 🥺. Urmila ram ka conversation 🥺 sisters jo ram pe proud feel karti thi wo Aaj ye sab keh rahi hai lekin kisi ki bhi galti nahi hai isme 🥺 . Her koi siya se pyar karta hai and Aaj uske liye ek dusre se lad rahe hai 😞 .

And laksh ke aane me bad 🥺 boom blast ho gaya and jitne time mila shant thina i know laksh definitely hurt hone wala hai jab mila kuch bolegi 🥺💔 . And wo letter 😭 siya kyu Kiya esa 😭 ram khud ko sambhal bhi nahi paega 😭💔 . And wo don't touch me mila me Jo tuta tha wo bhi Dil Tod diya 😭😭😭 lakshu pehle he guilt me hai and ab jab uski mila uski life use esa bol rahi hai to laksh to puri tarah se Tut jaega 😭🥺 pehle he siya ka bhi dukh hai 🥺 .

And last 🥺 Ram ke liye bahot bura lag raha hai 🥺 use pata bhi nahi hai uski siya kaha hai and uske baby bhi 🥺🥺🥺 . and ab leap aane wala hai ye sunke bahot accha laga jab bacche honge Ghar pe to thoda dukh Kam hoga siya ka and family ka bhi 🥺❤️ .

Update soon ❤️ .

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Posted: 2 years ago

Wonderful update Saumya 👍

Just loved it🤗

🤔ᴴᴹᴹ I don't blame Ram but he needs to understand that in process of saving her he had hurt her the most as it was question on her dignity & character 👍 & as a woman Siya decision was logical & apt 👍 but now things had gone beyond repair as when Ram realized this by Urmila words it was too late & Siya had left the RP

For other's it came out as a shock Dashrath Kranti & Sumitra all were disappointed & angry & all the 4 boys were having no idea about how to find Siya now as it was too late to act

Siya letter to Ram was really emotional & to the point her confrontation her agony was described nicely & well penned & hopefully Siyas decision does not bring Ram into something grave as after this he is broken completely

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

I am speechless. I don't know what to say. I agree with Shanoka that you have beautiful penned this part with a twist of modern day Ramayan. What else should I say, this scene was just perfect.

Now eagerly waiting for the leap, wanted to know about how things are at Raghuvanshi Palace??

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Apukar

I liked how you incorporated modern day dilemma of Ram which made Siya to leave. It is same as the Ramayana yet a modern take. Sisters understood Siya better than anyone. Dashrath's anger was right, after all he is the patriarch of the family, not only that, he led the industry for years; his experience matters. But also, that is the dilemma of real life, sometimes we take decision hiding things in behalf of others to protect them. Alas, it never comes out good. It was a sad update, that being said, you penned it beautifully.

It was necessary, to put a modern touch in this part of the story. Dashrath's anger is all justified, but then when situation comes each one of them tends to behave in their own way.!!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: panditsania

The conversation between Ram and Urmila.was.really nice. She has never been scared to voice her disappointment towards him . Their relationship is more then a jiju -salli or devrani and Jeth. I remembered their conversation during suvarnas incident.

Siya's letter was really emotional but also hopeful that she would return.Dashraths anger was expected after all he is still the patriach of the family and he has the responsibility over all 8 of them. Maybe if the boys would have told dashrath abt Berlin these things wouldn't have happened.

And lastly my Lakshmila heart got broken seeing urmila disappointed on lakshman. I also feel bad for him since the three most impo. People in his life have either left him or are disappointed.but Urmila's reaction was jayas since she have been warning him.

Nice chapter in all full with emotions. Can't wait for the kids to come now😁😁.

Yes, we feels happy for Ram and Urmila's relationship too. They are friends and each other's supporters. Elsewhere Dashrath is all true with his words, being the eldest of the family he had that right to know about everything. LakshMila will overcome this situation and hopefully soon.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpita00001

Yeh toh hona hi tha...🤧🤧aisha kuch expect imagine hi kar rahithi🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧bichara Lakshu Sab ka blame lega jyaada guilt main rahega and most important persons of his life are blaming him is jyaada bura kiya ho sakta Ram Urmila dono pe toh Laksh ka jaan basta maa jaisi bhabi chali gayi Laksh tha fir bhi kuch na kar paya last time bhi khud ko blame Kiya tha par ushme galti ushki nahin thi but this time janr anjane main boys se galti huyi wha protective ban ne ke chakkar main girls'pov ka sochna bhul gaye girls ne warn kiya for bhi wha soche nahin the baat itni serious hogi lagta Hain Manrat Shughan jald hi short out karidenge lekin Sira Lakshmila unka waqt lagegaa 😭😭😭Sira toh physically alag huye Lakshmila pass hoke dur honge 😭😭😭 girls ur family boys Especially Ram se disappoint hain kisine socha na tha ki Siya ko pata hoga Siya itni hurt hogi... Urmila ka silent hoke rehena jab sab question lar rahe tan se Toofan ka bhanak aara tha aagaya hamesha Laksh bolti thi gusaa hone pe bhi Lakshman kam hi boli hain is baar bahut jyaada hurt huyi hain isliye Laksh bhi boli na hi touch karne di distance maintain ki😭😭


6 years leap finally aagaya khusiyan hi khusiyan hoga Pooro family hogi ur bache bhi leap ke CS lagta tha sab ek sath the ab yeh samjhna baaki hain sab ek sath honge kaise leap le andar ke interval main ya leap ke baad..Sab kuch flashback details main dalna jaroorat pade toh ek ek episode ek ek event ek incident ek ek couples kardena😭hamko dekhna hain 6saal main kiya huya inke bich sab solve kaise huya especially Lakshmila and Siya kaise mili CS toh Panvel lag raha Rajrishis kaise react kiye Siya ki delivery struggles family se milne ki pehele ki baki tino issues short out kaise kiye inki baby planning (Manrat toh kar rahe the baki dono jinme hamesha Laksh ur Satruuu new generation ke liye excited rehete the)un tino ki pregnency kaise apne wives pamper khayal rakhte and all ur in tino ki delivery bhi...fir charo couples ki parenting kitna kuch hain😭😭😭😭😭😭 mujhe aage sabka reaction dekhna tha...aap flashback bacho ko story telling format main bole ya past ko yaad karna type bole par sab kuch dalna plzz plzz 🥺🥺🥺

Jald update karna just hope new thread aayega toh khushiyon se bhara hoga🤧

Lakshman is feeling the most guilty at present. His three important people in his life is dissapointed with him, and he is feeling dissapointed for that. Each and everyone in the family is dissapointed with the boys, especially Ram for this decision. Chahe girls ho ya parents, they are right on their place. So let's see how this kids brings happiness for them.

Surely the story will unfold with a proper explaination of everything...

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Vishukonde

and wo Deen aa he Gaya 😞 jab sabko siya me decision ke bare me pata chalega 🥺 and now sab Tut chuke hai and specially ram and mere LakshMila 🥺. Urmila ram ka conversation 🥺 sisters jo ram pe proud feel karti thi wo Aaj ye sab keh rahi hai lekin kisi ki bhi galti nahi hai isme 🥺 . Her koi siya se pyar karta hai and Aaj uske liye ek dusre se lad rahe hai 😞 .

And laksh ke aane me bad 🥺 boom blast ho gaya and jitne time mila shant thina i know laksh definitely hurt hone wala hai jab mila kuch bolegi 🥺💔 . And wo letter 😭 siya kyu Kiya esa 😭 ram khud ko sambhal bhi nahi paega 😭💔 . And wo don't touch me mila me Jo tuta tha wo bhi Dil Tod diya 😭😭😭 lakshu pehle he guilt me hai and ab jab uski mila uski life use esa bol rahi hai to laksh to puri tarah se Tut jaega 😭🥺 pehle he siya ka bhi dukh hai 🥺 .

And last 🥺 Ram ke liye bahot bura lag raha hai 🥺 use pata bhi nahi hai uski siya kaha hai and uske baby bhi 🥺🥺🥺 . and ab leap aane wala hai ye sunke bahot accha laga jab bacche honge Ghar pe to thoda dukh Kam hoga siya ka and family ka bhi 🥺❤️ .

Update soon ❤️ .

Thr most dissapointed day of Raghuvanshi family. All are feeling dissapointed with what Siya has done to herself. Galati kisi ki nahi still galat sabne kiya ek dusre ke saath. This is the life which teaches us many things. Now this leap Woll bring some positivity in their life in form of their kids.

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