Painful Love (OS) ☑️ - Page 5

Originally posted by: Musketeer_95

Absolutely awesome 😁

Loads of thank you ❤️❤️❤️❤️. Such relief.🌸🏵️😌 .

Hope the writers copy you .

Whenever you want to write next part, please make Anuj drunk again and lash out at her. This time insult should be more brutal showing her mirror.

Getting greedy to read more🥰

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Excellent. ❤️🤗

Acutally, you can keep going.... after she hears him give an earful, she starts crying. She is now blinded by tears and cannot see the road while driving and collides with a huge truck or tree. Next, they both meet in heaven/hell......🤣

Also while u r at it, can he also confess how unhygienic she is forcing her pallu on everyone's face? She used it on Kavya's face today🤢

Originally posted by: strancho

I will keep it at this. 🤣I am not Star Plus you know

Originally posted by: CheekuKaBeej

Pompy, such a wonderful story👏How smart of you to make Anuj drunk and let him sunao khari khari to Anupamaa😉

I've a request. I know I'm being greedy 🫣 but can you please make Anupamaa realise her mistakes in the story. I know she will never understand in the show. And it might look unbelievable even in the story because it's the great Anupamaa I'm talking about🤣

But please. I think you'll be able to do it and make it look believable.

Originally posted by: Koms9

I do have a very soft and comfortable corner for Anuj!😃

Mine is softest.😉

Brilliant! You have such a talent for writing hard-hitting conversations and the ending was just apt for the kind of atmosphere painted. Also, your empathy towards the OG Anuj really shows.

Now that this is your first attempt, what are you feeling about your own writing ? (if you feel like answering that)

Originally posted by: Koms9

Pompy, can we also have Maa slap herself in anger..like why am I a hypocrite. Why am I a doormat? bla bla

Originally posted by: Koms9

I want a third part where Maa gets a panic attack..fake as usual. and she starts wiping her nose and eating chocolates in front of Anuj and he confesses how everytime she had these panic attacks only after coming home and how she used these to avoid doing "cheeka cheeka boom boom" with Anuj after coming back from SH and made Anuj do the chores around the house.

Also while u r at it, can he also confess how unhygienic she is forcing her pallu on everyone's face? She used it on Kavya's face today🤢

Bold : 🤣 what's that ??

Red: Aaj bandi ne kavya se saare badle liye...

Originally posted by: SoulSpiller

Brilliant! You have such a talent for writing hard-hitting conversations and the ending was just apt for the kind of atmosphere painted. Also, your empathy towards the OG Anuj really shows.

Now that this is your first attempt, what are you feeling about your own writing ? (if you feel like answering that)

I feel that I can write confrontational scenes well but should add some nuances about their facial expressions

Originally posted by: CheekuKaBeej

Pompy, such a wonderful story👏How smart of you to make Anuj drunk and let him sunao khari khari to Anupamaa😉

I've a request. I know I'm being greedy 🫣 but can you please make Anupamaa realise her mistakes in the story. I know she will never understand in the show. And it might look unbelievable even in the story because it's the great Anupamaa I'm talking about🤣

But please. I think you'll be able to do it and make it look believable.

I have an idea but again there is no way I can save MaAn. MaAn is over for me, even in my OS. 🤪

They should have never happened in the first place. This relationship was bound to doom, and both are at fault. I would say Anuj is at more fault than Anupama.