Painful Love (OS) ☑️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Anupama was arranging the files at Anuj's office and suddenly a piece of paper caught her eye. Tears poured down her cheeks, and she did not believe her eyes. It was time for Anuj to return from his meeting, so she quickly hid the piece of paper between his files and wiped her tears.

Anuj: Let's go, Anu.

Anupama: Yeah, how did your meeting go?

Anuj: It went well, but why do you look so dull?

Anupama: (Putting on a fake smile) I am fine.


There was an eerie silence between them in the car as they drove home.

Anuj: Anu, Anu, Anu..

Anupama: Yeah, yeah tell me, what happened?

Anuj: We reached home. Is everything okay? Are you okay? Where are you lost?

Anupama: No where. I am just tired.

Anupama got out of the car and went inside. Anuj looked uneasy and wondered if she had seen that.


After dinner, as usual, Anuj was busy at work. Anupama called Kinjal to ask how Toshu was doing. It has been two months since that incident. Toshu can carry on with his life but is confined to a wheelchair. His lower body is completely crippled. It was almost 2 am when Anuj wrapped up his work. As he entered his bedroom, he saw that the lights are ON.

Anuj: You did not sleep yet?

Anupama: I was not getting sleep and I wanted to talk to you.

Anuj: You saw that? Right?

Anupama: (Nodding her head) I did not know that you were considering divorce.

Anuj: After I lost Choti, getting on with life was extremely difficult for me. If I did not consider divorce I don't think I could have remained sane. You have your kids and you moved on easily but I don't have anyone.

Anupama: Don't you have me?

Anuj: You tell me, do I? Since we lost the custody case, you have been busy with your family and I feel like an outsider. It feels as if I came in between you and your kids and family. I thought that after marriage you can move on. But I was wrong. People don't change easily. Even after your Baa abused you, you consider her your mother. I know I have said that I won't ask you to change and I will keep my promise. I don't expect anything from you anymore and you also shouldn't expect anything from me. The most I can do for you is wait until you say you don't need me. That's my way of taking responsibility for choosing you as my wife. However, I won't go beyond that.

Anupama: What was my fault that we lost choti's custody? What did I do?

Anuj: That's the point, that you did not do anything. You did not do anything that a mother should do for choti.

Anupama: Anuj, give me a chance, I will do better. We can start over.

Anuj: Start over? Is there anything left between us to start over? Just know that you are free to do whatever you want. You don't have to do anything for me or this house, just let me know when you dont need me anymore. We can end this formality.


Anuj's Voiceover:

Kaisa ye waqt hai..

Beete na sard hai..

Kaha naa maine kabhi..

Par kishto mein chubhte hai ye khaare raste..


PS: Suggestions/criticism are welcome. Bas chappal mat maarna koi.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I loved reading a scenario wherein Choti is away from these people for good and Anuj seems to be gaining some sense. ❤️

Just one tiny point. It's hard to imagine Anupamaa doing any sort of work in Kapadia Dharamshala leave alone arranging files considering she does not bother to stay there 😛

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShahH8er

I loved reading a scenario wherein Choti is away from these people for good and Anuj seems to be gaining some sense. ❤️

Just one tiny point. It's hard to imagine Anupamaa doing any sort of work in Kapadia Dharamshala leave alone arranging files considering she does not bother to stay there 😛

LOL that is true. 🤣 Glad that you liked it.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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No this is what I would love to see.

Thank you.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Heart-wrenching Pompy Ji. Suddenly I realized divorce is the only thing left between them.


P.S.: Anuj is waiting for Anu to tell him that she does not need him anymore. Well, unless he transfers all of his property to Vanraj, he has to keep waiting.😆


It was beautiful.❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Devi g will do penick attack drama. 😆

Anuj pleej mere kutte banke rahiye. Apna patta mat chudaiye.

Pleej apna pyaar Kam mat kijiye .

Meanwhile Anuj : Sorry bit*h. Im already over you.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Bro aur khari khoti suna na anupama ko..ruk kyu gai 🤣🤣

Do one thing..write a part 2 where anuj after divorcing anupama goes to Maya and she asks him to fu*k off as she deserves better


Anupama anuj k yaad me mar jaaye and anuj maaya k 🤡

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I hope the show's writers copy it. ❤️

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Sarcastic Chatterbox

Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriz

Bro aur khari khoti suna na anupama ko..ruk kyu gai 🤣🤣

Do one thing..write a part 2 where anuj after divorcing anupama goes to Maya and she asks him to fu*k off as she deserves better


Anupama anuj k yaad me mar jaaye and anuj maaya k 🤡

Bro this is the Anuj I admired. September - October wala. Wo Anuj waise khari khoti nahi sunayega 🤣

Divorce to hoga nahi bro because Anupama won't leave him. 🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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A very mature and subtle read ! Something that is missing from the drama. I absolutely adore how you have written this OS. This is how 45 year Olds behave ! They aren't dancing around trees and pouring leaves over each other or shouting on top of their lungs to get their point across .


Also, love love love that these two are divorcing!!

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