ViDev SS - She fell first but He fell hardest- last part, pg#12 - Page 14

Originally posted by: prs_725

Awww that was soo sweet!! Why I can I imagine dev actually cutting cake in perfect shape just to avoid Vidhi in reality too hahahah use jab kuch kuch feel hota hain toh aise hi karta hain 😂😂🙈🙈 you did such a great job! Please cont w more FFs 💕

thank you so so much for such kind words🥰🥰🥰

i know Dev is such a shy cutie pie... he needed something to keep his mind away from Vidhi nahi to laptop band karke Vidhi ka dhyan hatane ke liye Vidhi kenhi baare me sochta to isliye ek kaa diya ke at least cake pieces to ache se kaate... dekhne me sundar lagenge 🤭🤭🤭 aur Sir ka dhyan bhi bhatka rahega

thanks again.. sure ill try to write short ones. currently working on one idea if it concludes well ill surely write on it.

Read this so many times now but every time I can imagine Dev and Vidhi in front of my eyes while reading this, it's so beautifully written. Your read on Dev's charecter is so accurate. "Showering his kind of love", I can totally imagine Dev thinking this. I really hope they show something like this before the first step towards physical proximity. It would be treat to watch. He is so nervous around Vidhi even now (like how badly he explained the gift concept today, I was laughing the whole time), I just imagine how he would be around her after confession. And Dev being Dev, it's totally imaginable given he is so protective of Vidhi, he would want to protect her from even himself. Dev is typical truly.

I laughed so much imagining Dev cutting the cake into perfect sized pieces just to keep him my off Vidhi. He is totally capable of doing this. Also in that umbrella dialogue, my goodness. Dev hi 2 umbrella rakh sakta hai just to avoid proximity with her. I laughed so much seriously.

Also you captured Vidhi so well, her confusion, her dialogues everything. It's so beautifully written, I am out of words. And I sincerely hope to see something of this sort on screen.

Originally posted by: Anupreeya

Read this so many times now but every time I can imagine Dev and Vidhi in front of my eyes while reading this, it's so beautifully written. Your read on Dev's charecter is so accurate. "Showering his kind of love", I can totally imagine Dev thinking this. I really hope they show something like this before the first step towards physical proximity. It would be treat to watch. He is so nervous around Vidhi even now (like how badly he explained the gift concept today, I was laughing the whole time), I just imagine how he would be around her after confession. And Dev being Dev, it's totally imaginable given he is so protective of Vidhi, he would want to protect her from even himself. Dev is typical truly.

I laughed so much imagining Dev cutting the cake into perfect sized pieces just to keep him my off Vidhi. He is totally capable of doing this. Also in that umbrella dialogue, my goodness. Dev hi 2 umbrella rakh sakta hai just to avoid proximity with her. I laughed so much seriously.

Also you captured Vidhi so well, her confusion, her dialogues everything. It's so beautifully written, I am out of words. And I sincerely hope to see something of this sort on screen.

sorry for late reply.. main to bhul hi gayi thi iske baare me...

thank you... thank you.. thank you... so so much kind words.

i love Dev for who he is... his love his contemplation his worries are so real and palpable for me on screen that i can feel and write abt him just like a real human being...

and writing such so real character is really a sukoon bhara experience.. glad you liked it.

wo cake cutting is my fav part too... him being engrossed to avoid his wandering thought is so entertaining..

thanks again...

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

Hello my pagli filmo ki toli...

Welcome to this last and longest installment of this crazy ride of ViDev's journey of realizing what they want from this relationship that too after 8 months of being together.

And this is my longest single part of any FF/OS/SS i hav ever wrote and i really hope ill be able to do the justice with these 2 most beautiful characters of recent times. I might have taken too much creative liberty to end the story the way i wanted (thats my most fav part of one of my most fav show but never had characters to rewrite it).....

And if by any chance you feel it lack the intensity or impact or authenticity .. please forgive me i am no pro just a an obsessed fan who wants to retell stories of my beloved character.

And yes its gonna be a long ride.. so wanna get some coffee, tea, hot chocolate or popcorn.. get them now.. beech me shayad jane ka man na kare.

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tag 2

Aaj main upar, aasmaan neeche

Tere iss OS se, hum chale aage, serial hai peechhe!

Believe me, as mentioned in earlier post, I actually felt meh..... energy level negative......after the serial ka 100th episode and then came your other funny OS jiss mein main bhi pet pakad ke hasi...... hubby wondering like kya itna has rahi hai?😆

And then thanks to Revutty , this piece I read........ Yaar, saari kasar bhar dee!

How lucky can one be if on 100th Episode day, one gets to read a beautifully written episode actually happening in my brain...... Through all 3 parts, I could see Dev...... feel his emotions much better..... I could actually experience Vidhi..... how cute she looked in that baby pink saree!

Believe me, you warned to get whatever we wanted before starting to read, but I forgot to refill my drinking water ......and now, all my thirst is quenched with your beautiful Devidhi Love Life though physically I am parched!!!

So ab main tere Dev se thoda style churati hoon

"I love your writing, Telly🤗Thanks for writing such beautiful trilogy ....thanks for being part of this forum making it come alive with all your posts"

Originally posted by: Loving2Missing2

Aaj main upar, aasmaan neeche

Tere iss OS se, hum chale aage, serial hai peechhe!

Believe me, as mentioned in earlier post, I actually felt meh..... energy level negative......after the serial ka 100th episode and then came your other funny OS jiss mein main bhi pet pakad ke hasi...... hubby wondering like kya itna has rahi hai?😆

And then thanks to Revutty , this piece I read........ Yaar, saari kasar bhar dee!

How lucky can one be if on 100th Episode day, one gets to read a beautifully written episode actually happening in my brain...... Through all 3 parts, I could see Dev...... feel his emotions much better..... I could actually experience Vidhi..... how cute she looked in that baby pink saree!

Believe me, you warned to get whatever we wanted before starting to read, but I forgot to refill my drinking water ......and now, all my thirst is quenched with your beautiful Devidhi Love Life though physically I am parched!!!

So ab main tere Dev se thoda style churati hoon

"I love your writing, Telly🤗Thanks for writing such beautiful trilogy ....thanks for being part of this forum making it come alive with all your posts"

OMG i am floored and its so humbling to read your kind words...

am really speechless kya bolu.. thank you ke alawa.... and so grateful to have such lovely people on this forum....so welcming and appreciative...

sach me i love this one as my most fav write ups yet cause i really felt what Dev n Vidhi in the OS and so so glad that you felt exactly like that.. just so happy all my hard work feels worth reading your beautiful praises...

thank you..thank you..thank you..

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

OMG i am floored and its so humbling to read your kind words...

am really speechless kya bolu.. thank you ke alawa.... and so grateful to have such lovely people on this forum....so welcming and appreciative...

sach me i love this one as my most fav write ups yet cause i really felt what Dev n Vidhi in the OS and so so glad that you felt exactly like that.. just so happy all my hard work feels worth reading your beautiful praises...

thank you..thank you..thank you..

Last night, after you went off, I also went to bed and kept thinking of your OS.... Felt very strongly ki aisi hi kuchh situation I have felt before..... The woman angry, the man trying to manao.... but that's pretty common theme.... Then it struck me, the getting wet in rains, the man holding umbrella over his woman.... and touch kare ki na kare😆...... I had written a scene somewhat similar like yours.

Apne Iss show ka nahi, mere pehalewali serial ke FF ka hai.... Check it out, if interested..... uss ke baad shaayad Ande hi fekogi, kyunki maha episode tha, kaafi lamba chala... so aaram se padhana; koi jaldi nahi.

Click on the image which is the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/7610

All tagged girls, you are also invited.😳

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

sorry for late reply.. main to bhul hi gayi thi iske baare me...

thank you... thank you.. thank you... so so much kind words.

i love Dev for who he is... his love his contemplation his worries are so real and palpable for me on screen that i can feel and write abt him just like a real human being...

and writing such so real character is really a sukoon bhara experience.. glad you liked it.

wo cake cutting is my fav part too... him being engrossed to avoid his wandering thought is so entertaining..

thanks again...

Hey no need of sorry. I have missed many posts to be sure though I try not to. 😂

@BOLD

Same pinch. It's the same for me really. He has his flaws (so closed off from the world, overprotective of those he loves to the point of incapacitating them, too good for his own good) and that's what makes him so relatable, despite what Ms. Vidhi might think. For her, he is Mr. Perfect of course.

Amazing story

Love it

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Amazing story

Love it

thank you very much❤️

Aaj ke episode ke baad this FF became even more closer to my heart. Dev can totally totally be like this. 8 months zyada laga thha mujhe jab pehli baar padha thha toh, ab lagta hai yeh 8 saal bhi aise hi rehta taaki "Vidhi ko baat mein regret na ho"...... Isse zyada gehra pyaar bhala Kahan hoga duniyan mein........ Ufff I am out of words.......