Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 255

posting my story's first part only 4 this week on monday
bear with me cause dhire dhire it will get interesting




"How did I get into such a mess??!!",Kashish thought to herself.All her family were convinced that she would be happy after her marriage.Somehow she was not very sure of that. It all started when she out of curiosity has walked into the compound with those high gates.She was surprised to see a beautiful garden."This must be the most beautiful garden I have ever seen", she thought to herself."This place is hanuted and a mad old man lives here.Nobody can live if they walk inside.....".These were things she had heard about this house.But all that seemed false when she saw the plants there.The whole place was filled with plants with pretty flowers on them.She could smell the sweet fragrance.She walked a little further and came to crystal clear pond.The pond had lovely colourful fish in them.Her eye caught sight of a swing a little distance away and he joy knew no bounds......"A swing.....and people say this place is haunted...what rubbish...!!" she thought and ran to the swing.She pushed it slowly...."Yes.This is used often or else these hinges wouldnt be so smooth.I'm coming here whenever possible and enjoying this place" she thought. After sometime she decided to walk around and explore the place."I'll prove to everyone this place is not haunted" she thought.She was walking around when suddenly "STOP....Who's there....??You....girl in blue.Stop right there."she heard a shout. She stopped and turned around only to see an old man in white kurta and pyjama.KAshsish did not know whether to stay or run from there."I better run....what if this is the old mad man.He does not look so but what if he is....??Oh...no.I dont want to know",she thought and started running away from there. She reached home safe today."I better not tell this to mom or dad else they'llnever let me out anywhere."she thought.She was hardly able to close her eyes as the house kept coming into her eyes whenever she closed them.I'm going there tomorrow to know more she decided.

The next day she walked into the garden again.This time she was familiar with the place than yesterday.She looked around to make sure there was no mad man around.She enjoyed the swing and smell of the flowers in the cool breeze.She had closed her eyes to feel the wind in her hair when she suddenly felt a hand grip her.She opened her eyes and saw the same old man.He had held her hand and somehow the words in her mouth were stuck in her throat.She was unable to even scream.

Please leave me...I wont come here again...I promise", Kashish said to the old man."You promise to visit me everyday and I will let you go"said the old man.Kashish was shocked to hear this.The old man let go of her hand and asked her to come inside the house.Kashish and the old man walked into the house.The house had a huge sitting space.It was filled with beautiful furniture and large paintings on the walls.She kept gazing around at the decor when the old man asked her to sit."Do you remember me...???"he asked."Well!! I am sorry but no....I have been here for the first time..."the old man smiled at her"...ok ok second time but this is the first time I have come inside this house" she said.The old man asked"Dont you remember anything at all??The way we used to play around here.....I used to always sing for you....""No."she said."My dear Sneha...have you forgotten this uncle of yours??"he asked."I am not Sneha.Sneha is my sister who died many years back when I was a little kid" she said."You are not Sneha....how come you have her eyes and her beautiful smile??" he asked."I dont know....I am getting late.I will visit you again tomorrow" she said and got up to leave when the old man held her hand again."Please do come to visit me...I will think I am seeing my Sneha again..."he said. Kashish reached home and kept silent all the time.Her mother kept watching her."What is the matter?Why are you so silent today ?"she asked."Mom do I look like Sneha didi??",she asked.Her mother gasped at this and asked her not to think of such things and go to sleep."Why did Mom have to be shocked at my question??There is something she is hiding from me.I will ask Smitha didi.If she too is surprised....lets think about it when I reach that situation" she thought and went to sleep.The next day she was drying out the clothes with Smitha when she was not sure whether to ask her or not."Didi..I wanted to ask you a question..."."What is it Kashish?Dont start bothering me with anything silly else I will not help you"she said."Didi do I resemble Sneha didi...??"she asked."Who gave you such stupid thoughts??Ofcourse you dont look like her.Who told you such a thing??",she asked her.Kashish said"Nobody...I was just...thinking"."Then dont think of such things"she stopped her in between. Kashish went into the house and went into the attic to look for the old family album.she had never seen Sneha didi's photo anywhere in the house.Her father never mentioned her name and nobody was allowed to speak about Sneha in the house.Even neighbours never spoke about her.What was this mystery about Sneha didi and this old man said he used to sing to her.I think he will be the person who can tell me more about her.I'll ask him more when I meet him tomorrow she decided.

comment on the story phulease 😛 😭

richa i gonna cont 2day yaar but i ave 2 to finish my stupied maths hw i'll b bac in a hour aur han ppl ur goin gr8 dis includes sawera, kiran, harpy n all others if i lefted out ne aur haan my birfday is on 16th n believe me im expectin sum gifts 4om u ppl but tum log to bohot hi kanjoos ho 😆 😆 😆 no1 givme a present accept richa but richa i wan more as dat wasn't enuf 4 me 😆 😆 😆 so comon jaldi se shoppin karni shro kardo ppl coz sirf eik din reh gaya hai 😆

nice part harpy.................gr8 going kiran....................! said on phone not sure abt and still i will try what i said on phone not sure abt that dear

luvly stories evryone.........a love story z goin gr8...n so is kiran's tere liye....i m soo curious dat i can hardly wait 2 read more....gud job all writers... 👏

ppl me bac ok ere i continue

SIRF APP SE KARTE HEIN PYAR
recap: Farida gets made at manat. Azan had a argument wiv farida as why she being so rude wiv manat. Azan wanted to go but stays bac as manat n janat says im 2. Party finish n azan starts to leave when he founds dat tyre is puntured n he suspacts manat. Manat asks him to stay ove night(a big block of repac lol 😆 😆)

Manat:kia hum aj yahin ruk jaein she begged as ayub n janat comes in.

Ayub:Beta abhi tak gaye nahi.

Azan:ab ap pretend mat kare hamara tyre puntered ho gaya hai. koi baat nahi hum taxi mein chalein jaein gay kyun jaan? he asked er.

Manat:acha per aaj to taxi or bus ki haral hai(ppl i dun no much bout hartal n even duno no if hartal still goes on in nite so sowwie 4 any mistake)

Azan:kia per dupher tak to aisa kuch nahi tha

Manat:Azan mujhhe pata haina meri dost aaj hospital pedal ayi thi bus or taxi ki hartal ki wajha se or tum to car mein jate ho tumhe kaise pata chale ga hartal hai

Azan:Aisa karte hein hum bhi pedal chalte hein.

Manat:kia 2 ghante ke liye mein pedal chaloon or aaj subha to mere per mein chot bhi lagi thi

Azan:Sowwie jaan min tumhare chot ke bare mein to bilkul bhool gaya aisa karte hein tumhe utha ke chalte hein. Manat luks at ayub janat n azan n shys.

Manat:pjir tumhe hospital mein admitt karna pare ga. evy1 laughs. 'Acha baba rok jate hein'. Manat n da rest gets appy. Dey all went inside. Farida waz sittin on da sofa wen all came in. She surprised n gets appy as azan is bac. Azan left 4 is room without sayin a word.

ppl i gonna post ma story in small pices as my pc goin off itself n can't tak a risk to rite down hole story n lose it coz of my pc. You won't min na i ope u won't

ayub:manat jao tum bhi oper ja ke rest karlo thak gai ho gi.

manat:jee papa. She also leaves.ayub walks ove 2 farida

ayub:farida, azan bohot mushkil se roka hai ab koi problem nahi karna plz. Ayub n janat also leaves 4 their rooms. Farida is all alone dere

farida:itne dino ke bad mera beta roka hai kaise problem karon gi.
'or ap ke bahu ke rokneki koi hkushi nahi hai. A sound comes 4om behind farida. She turns bac n founds manat dere.

farida:chali jo yahan se manat.

manat:nahi mama mein nahi jaon gi mein janti hoon ke app khush hein ke 'hum dono' yahan rukh rahe hein i can feel it mama.

Farida:yeh jhoot hai.

manat:acha yeh jhoot hai, meri ankhon mein ankh dal ke kahey. Keh dijye ke yeh jhoot hai ke jab papa or janat ne hame roka tha to aap khush thi.

farida:mujhe neend arahi hai. Mein ja rahi hoon. farida starts 2 leave wen manat speaks up.

manat:chali jana per sirf ek sawal pochne chati hoon ke meri kia galti thi.

Farida:tum nahi janti

Manat:woh meri galti nahi meri kismat thi. Aap apne ap ko meri jaga pe rakh kar soche. Manat leaves as she finish n leavin confused farida behind

Farida:kia manat theek keh rahi thi kia maine uske saath nainsafi ki hai.

Ayub:haan tumne uske saath nainsafi ki hai. Abhi bhi waqt hai unhe rok lo warna azan to aaj hi chala jata. Woh to manat ki wajha se ruk gaya. Ek manat hai jo azan or tumhe ek karna chati ho or ek tum ho jo ke apne bete ko hi khud se dor kar rahi ho. Manat tumhari abhi bhi izat karti hai tumse pyar akrti hai itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi per tum.................. he leves ivout finishin is sentence. Farida cries

cut 2 manat n azan

Manat enters wiv tears in er eyes. Azan saw 'em.

Azan:kia hua meri jaan ko. Manat hugs im n cries mor louder. Azan drinks er tears(in sujal style). Den he kisses er forehead den eyes, now cheeks ab niche barte barte lips pe. Now dey r in bed and share a very romantic moment. bas ab ise age nahi as i also ave sum limits. Mornin now a new day 4 azan n manat. Manat wakes up first she shys coz she feels azan so close to er. Sum1 knocks on the door n distrub em. Manat opens the door n finds janat dere.

Janat:manat (janat calls manat by er name instead of bhabhi as they r best frnds) uth gaye. Aaj bohot der ho gai kia late soi thi per mere samne to kamre mein jaldi chali gai thi. Manat understands wat shes sayin n feel embarced.

Manat:nahi woh bohot tha gaye he hum isliye.

janat:haan jaise ke sara ka sara kaam apne hi kia tha na hum to aram kar rahe the.

Manat:nahi aisi bat nahi hai. janat saw manat's bangels had broken

Janat:arye arye yeh chori kaise tot gai. Manat undersatand wat she means.

Manat:janat tum bohot badmash ho gai ho. She said as she was blushin. Janat runs 4om dere. Manat closes da door n goin 2wards da bafroom wen deres a knock on da door again. Manat opened the door n shouts

Manat:janat tum phi agai tumhe to mei............ aap!

ok ppl me goin now im sleepy acha i'll try 2 cont ma story soon but i dun fink i'll be able 2 as ma pc need a doc i mean needs to b check. I need lots of comments n yes bifday present also, dun u dare gimme a present by postin a part of ya story coz i'll b mad at u as richa done juz post a part as my birfday present.

please post rameena's story and natz's stroy qiucly
i cant wait any longer

and hats off to everyone
they did a fab job

Pooja 😛

ghuma kar rakh diya re tune marium ur really great

Nice story harpy conitnue soon 👏👏👏

Maira....lovely parts yaar...jaldi likha karoo... 😊 👏

Richa tum dosroo say kehtii rahii k continue soon wen will u conitnue DKR.... 😡 😭