Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 7

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part👏✊👍

Well so now Geet has her doubt on man & it's obvious as ladies he enquired for are missing & it's something fishy about this case

Geet now investigate about this man & finds vital information about him but now she is trapped as she got caught

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

Amazing update

Hope geet will leave the room soon

Or else she will get caught soon

Story is getting very Interesting

Please continue

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geet is suspicious about the maan who is giving her work n her doubt getting clear when she visit his hotel room

hope she dint get caught

this is turning out to be more n more fascinating

camt wait to know what geet found out in her searching!!!! doncont soon

Nice update

Geet is guilty as girls are missing

Geet started procedure to know more about mysterious man can't wait for next update to know man's true identity

Update soon

Oh no

Is it some child kidnapper? Who sells kids

Omg

Hi Nilanjana

hope you are well

thanks for the pm and update

Part 3

Amazing update…nicely written

now he wants her to find a by named Gagan

at least she managed to realised that MSG - Meenakshi, Gagan and Shalini

great that she realised that he did not give her is real name

she is now suspicious

as expected she goes to Shalini house and the dance classes that Meenakshi attended

her tension increased as Shalini left home and Meenakshi did not attend dance classes

of cos she is worried

great that she decided to get to the truth about the man that hired her

she is clearly a good detective as she managed to get some info about

well she landed up in the hotel that he is staying in

not surprised she is searching his room

so she finds more information

what did she find that shocked her

was she caught?

update soon

Part 2

Nice update.

So Geet finally managed to find Shalini in 3days and informs the man but how did he know that Geet talked to Shalini?

Did Geet herself tell about it to MSG in the message OR the man was just testing Geet's detective skills? How could he knew that Geet talked to Shalini until Geet herself confessed to him or Shalini told him about that?

Again the job of finding another girl...it's obvious for Geet to become suspicious of him. Good that she decides to investigate about the man too.

Part 3

Intriguing update.

So the man is hiding his true identity from Geet. She felt concerned for the safety of those girls and again inquired about them and get shocking news of their disappearance from the places which further increased her doubts on the man.She started investigating the man.

Excited to know what shocking things she finds about him.

Part 4

She starts to frantically search around the room about anything and everything’

Initially she just finds some clothes & stuff

But searching minutely she starts finding information

‘Toh ye Dubai se hai’

‘Toh yahan kya kar raha hai?’

Dhundte dhundte things start becoming clearer but murkier to her

Some of the information almost pulls the rug off under her feet

She loses track of time

She hears the lock turning

She is shocked

She was here too long

She looks around to find a way to escape

The windows are sealed

The bathroom ventilator is too small

She is trapped

She has micro-seconds to think of something

She needs to come up with a plan

She is panicking

With no other way, she goes into the washroom & locks it

‘Geet, kab tak yahan chupi rahegi. Woh kabhi naa kabhi toh yahan aayega naa’

She hears heavy footprints enter the room

She hears the footprints stop

He must have stopped at his track seeing the room a messy state

He must have guessed there is an intruder

She thinks to herself

She hears the doorknob of the bathroom turn

‘Kaun hai wahan? Bahar aao!’

She hears the familiar deep voice yelling

She is trapped & cornered

She has no other way

‘Bahar aao! Warna police ko call karunga!’

Geet frowns and in reflex opens the door & comes out

G- Haan kar lijiye police ko call. Main darti nahi hoon!

He furrows his brows in surprise seeing Geet in front of in housekeeping clothes (mid-thigh length frill dress)

She grabs a rod of a lamp in defense

He looks around the mess & sighs

‘Why are you here? Maine tumse kaha tha Gagan ko dhundo’

G-Aapne mujse sab jhooth bhi kaha tha, including apna naam

‘Maine tumse koi jhooth nahi bola’

Geet rolls her eyes

G- Aapka naam Maan Singh Khurana hai. MSG nahi. Yes or No?

He nods clenching his jaw

G- Meenakshi Gagan aur Shalini aapke bhai behen hain. Aapke maa baap ki ek accident mein ek saath death ho gai aura aap sabko ek orphanage ne apne paas rakha aur aap sab bhai behen ka alag alag jagah adoption ho gaya. Yes or No?

Maan looks at Geet with surprise

He is shocked that Geet was able to dig this information

G- Pehle mujhe laga tha ki aap inn sab ke saath kuch galat kar rahe hain . But aapne toh inn sab ko kuch naa kuch deke settle kar diya hai. Shalini ki shaadi ke liye paise diye, who bhi destination wedding, Meenakshi ko padhai ke liye abroad jaane ke liye finance kiya aur Gagan ke baare mein pata karke uske medical expense uthana chahte hain

She looks at his melancholy & stoic expression, she had never noticed his dark black eyes. He had always worn sunglasses whenever he met her before

He speaks up after a while

M- You…you are good…you are a good detective

G- But aapne jhooth kyun kaha? Mujse jhooth kaha, ye sab chupaake rakhna chaha. Aur apne behen bhai ki bhi anonymously help ki hai. Kyun? Log aise kaam ka dankaa bajaate hain aura aap aise choro ki tarah logon ka bhala karte jaa rahe the. Kyun?

He looks up at her with his deep eyes drowning in emotions

M- Kyunki apno ke liye jo hum karte hain who hamara farz hota hai. Aur main nahi chahta mere aane se unki abhi ki zindagi mein koi effect ho. Bada bhai hone ke naate woh meri zimmedaari hain, maine jo kiya apni zimmedaari nibhaane ke liye kiya. Aur Geet, tum bhi unse kuch nahi kahogi, kabhi nahi. Who apni zindagi mein khush hain, main usmein dakhal nahi dena chahta

Both are silently looking at each other for a moment

She is in silent shock. What she thought about this man & what she found was completely different

He is also numb. This is the first time he had shared his deepest secret with someone.

He had always been a loner.

An orphan in a foreign country struggling to find his footing with no friends & family

Opening his heart & sharing his secret to another soul felt different

The door bangs open and bunch of hotel staff walk in

‘Sir, we got your text saying there is an intruder in your room. Are you okay?’

Maan- Yes, I….

Before Maan could complete one of the older staff member looks at Geet

‘Geet tu?’

Geet looks up at the man

G- Taayaa ji?