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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okie to start off with I haven't written a fan fiction in quite awhile, however for this summer i would like to write this fan fiction. Some of this story would be from my own experience and the rest would be from my imagination :D


Fatale Heart <3


--> That was a bit of what the story revolves around, the changes in life, finding yourself and growing up moreover love.

Leave Comments <33---Should I continue or not?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its sounds great 👏 👏 plz continue 😊
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nice concept plz continue 😊
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Prologue

"Yea ok sure mom" I said as I walked out of the house. As usual mom had work late so I had to pick up my brother and sister.

I walked towards the bus stop, as ordinary I missed the first bus and now I had to wait for the second bus. For a few minutes I stood there and thanking god for bringing Ishrat into my life, I loved him so much plus he was just everything to me. I'm actually a really shy girl when it comes around to things like boys and relationship but Ishrat never questioned against it moreover he himself loved me dearly. Taking out my cell I called my best friend Nisha.

"Oh-my-gosh" Nisha shrieked

"What happen?" I asked wondering what her o-m-g was for.

"You know like on the bus I saw this extremely cute guy, and I mean cute cute"

"Really" I said while giggling on the other line

This how I and Nisha were, our conversations would contain a million likes and o-m-g moreover giggles. I've known her since the sixth grade at first we didn't get along at all but eventually we became inseparable. Were in the same class every year however this year she's in 8-1 where as I'm in 8-2, which really sucks. On the plus side we have gym together, also in the halls we would always get to see each other and we would skip lunch go to one of the teachers and hang in their rooms.

I got off the bus, while still talk to Nisha.

"Where are you?" I asked not finding her in sight

"Look to your left dummy" she said while giggling

"Oh I see you now" I said as I laughed at myself

We walked into school together climbing the stairs, talking about random things here and there. Coming in front of her room, we both let out an "aww". I walked towards my homeroom greeting a few people and taking my seat waiting for the bell to ring. As the bell rang for first period class I went near Nisha's homeroom, when I went near Nisha's classroom I saw Ishrat walk out. I gave a smile, since I just couldn't say anything I just lose my words when I see him come around moreover the sensation of butterflies in my stomach just leaves me hushed.



Okie will that was the prologue, as you see Angad isn't in it yet but will be soon I'll try bringing him in very soon. <33 Leave comments
Edited by candyprincess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome story!!...it's very realistic! i like tht, this is gonna b a great fanfic! continue soon with the next part! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice start 😊
can't wait for angad's entry though!
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey

Great Update and Nice Storyline.
Glad to know Ishrat and Kripa broke up.
When will Angad come in?
CONTINUE SOON!!!

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