Habs: Feroze Khan*Ushna Shah (ARY drama) DT#3 "Chahat ki Nazron" - Page 71

Originally posted by: cappacuino5

Hi guys! So I really wanted to write on topic number 2 as well but since Twerps called dibs on it, I wanted to wait for her to post her piece before I posted mine. I would confess that it was half written till yesterday however, reading the lovely piece written by Twerps and my general weepy mood inspired me to write another Ayet one shot on Ayesha dealing with cramps.

So the mood in this is a little different. I’m contemplating a scenario where the misunderstandings have been cleared out and both Ayesha and Basit are trying to work on their relationship.

This is the first ever piece I have written, so would love to know your views on the same. I’m nervous but posting this…

Hi Cappa,
I am wondering, did you adjust your story or is there an unfinished part of topic nr 2?

If so, finish and post that too 😃

Cappa, this was such a sweet oneshot with Ayet at their adorable best! Given their history, it was so pleasant to see them openly communicating. And I loved the fact that Ayesha realised how crucial communication was to their relationship and learnt from the recent disaster. As to Basit, glad that he reached out seeing Ayesha in need to help. And how considerate is this mister to offer his wife a massage! I recall that Twerps, Rishu and I were discussing this same thing last week when you'd put out the list of topics. Back pains can be as killing as cramps during this phase and it was nice to see Basit thinking about the difficulty and pain it brought to Ayesha and the fact that he was curious to know since when she was going through this. Loved how wholesome this was and the cuteness of it all! 💖

Originally posted by: cappacuino5

Basit whispered “lie on your stomach”. “What?!” she almost exclaimed. “Shh… do as I say”, he nudged her.

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Big hug and love for you Capp!!

I can understand your feelings of being nervous, excited, maybe a bit insecure for posting a write up here on Forum.. To share your own creation with the Forum World is very special, and very scary.

I applaud you for taking this step, for being courageous and I hope you will do it more often. And perhaps, others will feel inspired to do the same thing as well.

So, stay forever courageous and keep on motivating others as well!

I really liked your Ayet story, which could be a day/evening out of their life.. why not? guys these days are very understanding. Us ladies, are often taught not to speak about our "lady problems" but.. why?
Anyways.. Basit and his magic hands.. Modern boy.. and so loving.. such a problem solver..

He can come solve my problems for me too 😆

Like Twerps said, why stop there? I am already wondering how would the day look like when both would wake up? what comes next?

The highlight, which awakens my imagination more is in the quote.. Need I say more? 😆

Okay, it's up!

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/32429

Originally posted by: Sarcy

Okay, it's up!

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/32429

Sarce!!

The less I write is perhaps more in this case.. I did leave comments in the FanFiction section ❤️

I know you have not seen the show.. But still, you went ahead and wrote this little cute piece for us.

For the ones who know and love the series like we do, this is a very welcome gift for sure. I could really see this happening, and more.. The power of Imagination right?

Only now I realize it.. It is October!!! 😃
We have been saying in October for a long time and here we are.. And how.... ❤️

Thank you for allowing us to pester you.. Just don't think for a second this is over! 😆

Originally posted by: cappacuino5

This is the first ever piece I have written, so would love to know your views on the same. I’m nervous but posting this…

Woo hoo cappa you have done it 🤗🤗

Same situation and two different shots ... must say hats off to you and twerps ❤️❤️

What a beautiful shot it is... the tenderness, them learning from their misunderstanding and being more vocal, I just loved it...

Loved it how basit was there for her, he wanted to comfort her and his 1st experience at knowing how women deal with periods every month. And of course ayesha too let go off her hesitation nd allowed him to comfort her... just loved every bit of this shot... I want to read more now... why you ended it😳😆

Do write more girl, and you did a fab job 👏🤗

Originally posted by: twerping

@cappacuino5

Cappa! Why would you stop there? What a brilliant piece you have written on Ayet! Had butterflies in my stomach myself while reading it. The fact that their proximity itself opens them up to each other once again was brought out so beautifully in your story. I am so glad inspiration took you and you finished the story and posted it for us!

Please write more! Till then let me imagine Basit leaning against Ayeshas ears, whispering to her, holding the heat pad against her back, massaging her and finally the growing intimacy! Oh my goodness! I am totally floating away to cloud number nine now.

I am so glad you thought of this story challenge. This gave us all the opportunity to discover that you are quite the gifted writer yourself! This was seriously such a beautiful balance between sweet and sizzling! I want more from you!

Oh and also the fact that Basit with his general ignorance about women to have his eyes opened in this manner and for him to embrace what he is learning thus gave such a positive vibe.

Twerps! Thank you for such a wonderful response ❤️ I am so happy that you enjoyed the story 🥰

Yes, I believe that the night time provides an intimate setting and helps Ayet open up more with each other. I love when Basit talks softly with Ayesha, so wanted to incorporate that as well 🤩

I would love to write more but just wondering on what to write next. Let me know if you have any ideas for me?

Also I would love to read more of your writings on Ayet!

Originally posted by: Sarcy

Cappa, this was such a sweet oneshot with Ayet at their adorable best! Given their history, it was so pleasant to see them openly communicating. And I loved the fact that Ayesha realised how crucial communication was to their relationship and learnt from the recent disaster. As to Basit, glad that he reached out seeing Ayesha in need to help. And how considerate is this mister to offer his wife a massage! I recall that Twerps, Rishu and I were discussing this same thing last week when you'd put out the list of topics. Back pains can be as killing as cramps during this phase and it was nice to see Basit thinking about the difficulty and pain it brought to Ayesha and the fact that he was curious to know since when she was going through this. Loved how wholesome this was and the cuteness of it all! 💖

Thank you so much Sarce 🥰 This means a lot coming from you! 💕

Yes, I wanted both Ayesha and Basit to realise that open communication is the key to sustain a relationship. Also Basit is generally considerate but especially so with Ayesha.

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Hi Cappa,
I am wondering, did you adjust your story or is there an unfinished part of topic nr 2?

If so, finish and post that too 😃

Hi Rishu, so I believe that the story ends here for now. I envisaged a night setting with something intimate and soothing. Meanwhile Twerps’ piece pretty much covered the day scenario.

I believe that it is now time to write on other topics!

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

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Big hug and love for you Capp!!

I can understand your feelings of being nervous, excited, maybe a bit insecure for posting a write up here on Forum.. To share your own creation with the Forum World is very special, and very scary.

I applaud you for taking this step, for being courageous and I hope you will do it more often. And perhaps, others will feel inspired to do the same thing as well.

So, stay forever courageous and keep on motivating others as well!

I really liked your Ayet story, which could be a day/evening out of their life.. why not? guys these days are very understanding. Us ladies, are often taught not to speak about our "lady problems" but.. why?
Anyways.. Basit and his magic hands.. Modern boy.. and so loving.. such a problem solver..

He can come solve my problems for me too 😆

Like Twerps said, why stop there? I am already wondering how would the day look like when both would wake up? what comes next?

The highlight, which awakens my imagination more is in the quote.. Need I say more? 😆

Thank you Rishu for your support and encouragement! 🥰 I am so glad that you enjoyed the piece ❤️ A big hug to you too🤗 I agree that I was a bit nervous but seeing how guys appreciated this, I am inspired to write more!

I honestly believe that we women should share our problems with our partners and in this case considering Ayesha’s background and the lack of a male presence in her life, I wanted to write about this even more.

Yes, Basit is a problem solver. That’s pretty much all he’s been trying to do. I would love a Basit as well 🤩

I may write more on this but for now, this is complete.

Perhaps you could write something for us now, especially around the quote that you mentioned? ☺️