Samyukta Pt 15 - Alliances ~Siya & Harsh~ - Page 3

As usual late 😭
But
Fantastic Part As Alwayz
Siya just so innocent like me 😆 How sweetly She told harshh she can't sing n cook n Repeating words of DV on him 😆
Hmmmm ab madam ko Dharam bhaisab dikhenge har jagah Lage Raho 😆
Waiting for Next 😳 😳 😃

aw this part was so splendid and magnificient! And Sia's imagination about Dharam was simply too marvellous!! I don't know why I just can't seem to get over that particular scene!! It's just awesome!😳 I love your Sia! she's such a perfect blend of innocence,naughtiness and sweetness! A big hug to her 🤗 Dharam will never find a more perfect match.I'm so happy for him! 😳😆

The meeting chamber

I love how stately every matter here took place.It hardly describes the negative shades the suitor and his family are supposed to have! And everything proceeds so royally unlike in the Sagars version where they wander like street hawkers! This Rajkumar Harsh is very sensible.I liked it how he wasn't too pressing with his demands nor did he show his slight disappointments.

And the bestest part this time was Sia remembering Dharam so much!! I told you na I just can't get enough of it.It is so nice to see her feelings develop for him!aww when will they meet again?? 😍 And why is this Harsh so eager to know about her interests? Everywhere she takes him he starts babbling about her artistic involvements! Marking his question, the distracted girl leans onto the door frame; till she feels a strange presence beside her. Casting a casual glance sideways; she discovers the stunning Dharam smiling charmingly at her, just as he did so when he was admiring their raucous concert a few days ago. aww how lovely! I'm lost in this from the day I read it! 😳

And this Harsh cldn't tolerate thier baffling act, is it? I wonder when she's going to realize that she loves Dharam and what will happen next? Will she help Dharam and Veer in knowing about the attack?Will she face Harsh about this fact single handedly? BTW has she told her papa about the misunderstanding?? don't remember reading abt that!

oh this talented prince brags too!! Hey do we get to read his poem for Sia?? please please write that too na?😳 I so want to read what this poetic prince has to say!

Aryanagar's palace

It's nice to know that this Nivritti is not always juming to protect Veer's identity.And she actually prays to the idol she gave! that was sweet and she too finds her appearance to be magnetic!! would love to see the future meetings of these ladies!

Agni and Jai even though they are a pain its lovely to see them thinking all eveil things.They make some sense! And I hope Agni's scroll reaches Siya instead as Sia always seems to have a way of coming across them!

At the Cliff

aww this was so lovely!! simply wonderful!! and you have chosen such a wonderful surrounding for their meeting! It is perfect! I loved the way Veer getting mesmerized by her unknowingly!! so cute!! and this Shera!! me having so many doubts abt her but I'll wait for next part to clear 'em!

and where's Bhalla?😭 I miss my plumpy hero.Hope he hasn't been hospitalized with an upset stomach after eating those sweets? 🤔

Originally posted by: kunataanya

oh yes... now i remember... wow!!! u'r seriously like j.k rowling... 😳

why? 😕

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

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@ moreremix

awwww thank you so much 😳 am so gladd you liked Siya.. she is a very nice girl... innocent and hopefully perfect for Dharam...

glad you liked the agni-jai scenes and that you loveddd the veer-shera scenes.. 😳

@ ishoo

awww no ishoo dun cry.. i always look forward to your comments too..

i am glad that you liked this part.. 😳

you and innocent? badmaash kahin ki.. 😆 awww yes hun siya is innocent like you.. Dharam bhai sahab? looooooooooool

hope you'd like the next part too.. 😊

@ abhy

aw this part was so splendid and magnificient! And Sia's imagination about Dharam was simply too marvellous!! I don't know why I just can't seem to get over that particular scene!! It's just awesome!😳 I love your Sia! she's such a perfect blend of innocence,naughtiness and sweetness! A big hug to her 🤗 Dharam will never find a more perfect match.I'm so happy for him! 😳😆

yayyy i am so happy for you 😳 and am i glad that you like siya so much yaar..😳

The meeting chamber

I love how stately every matter here took place.It hardly describes the negative shades the suitor and his family are supposed to have! And everything proceeds so royally unlike in the Sagars version where they wander like street hawkers!

omg abhy you are so witty i loved your comments above 😆 thank you for stating points out like this.. 😳

This Rajkumar Harsh is very sensible.I liked it how he wasn't too pressing with his demands nor did he show his slight disappointments. And why is this Harsh so eager to know about her interests? Everywhere she takes him he starts babbling about her artistic involvements!

awwwww yes RH is a normal dude.. a normal prince.. 😊 he is a talented guy.. lus he doesnt know what other conversation to make with a girl who doesnt seem even vaguely interested in him.. 😆

It is so nice to see her feelings develop for him!aww when will they meet again?? 😍 Marking his question, the distracted girl leans onto the door frame; till she feels a strange presence beside her. Casting a casual glance sideways; she discovers the stunning Dharam smiling charmingly at her, just as he did so when he was admiring their raucous concert a few days ago. aww how lovely! I'm lost in this from the day I read it! 😳

still lost? 😛

And this Harsh cldn't tolerate thier baffling act, is it? I wonder when she's going to realize that she loves Dharam and what will happen next? Will she help Dharam and Veer in knowing about the attack?Will she face Harsh about this fact single handedly? BTW has she told her papa about the misunderstanding?? don't remember reading abt that!

she hasnt told her papa about the MU yet.. he is still under the impression that D and V mistreated her.. 😊 kahaan.....immediately D V jaane ke baad, this guy has come na.. and as for the poem.. 😭 me not as talented as RH abhy....

thank you for all your comments on the Ag-Jai and Ni scenes.. but why this statement? -> I hope Agni's scroll reaches Siya instead as Sia always seems to have a way of coming across them!

thank you for your comments on Veer -Shera... 😳 yes... some mystry unfolds coming Saturday...

hee hee he has not been hospitalized.. he would probably come back after an episode or two.. 😊

thank you so much hun for your comments *big huggggggg*

aww... lashy... i am just lost in a dreamland... i was a bit held up in my work... so cldn't read ur stories... but today.. i read all the last 5 parts... n its just mesmerising...
ur characters have a life in then... the moments described by you are worthy to be treassured..

Dharam : This is the dharam i want in the serial.. he is sensible.. wants to protect his kingdom.. n he just doesn't blindly follow the rules... And the other romantic side of him was so sweet... he is what i call .. a charming prince... a sapno ka rajkumar... the way he talked to sia when she was laughing at him in the market...
Dharam stops him, all the while smiling at Siya with imposing majesty "She knows Bhalla… she knows who we are… however… since she is the princess of this kingdom… we will respect her in front of her subjects…whatever she does to us…" the way he didn't loose his temper much when she accused him of creating problems for her country..
the way he talked to her when he came to know abt her misunderstanding..
I am sorry we used the selfish pretext of a trip to Niphaud to investigate… but that was only because some people from our very own palace are involved in this too…" he pauses "However, we never wanted to misuse the life or feelings of anyone to do this…you have misunderstood us…this trip was never to meet you...in fact, the day I met you at the garden was the first very first time, I ever saw you!"
. n the way he assured her that she will still have her moments with her prince...
Realizing her torment, Dharam conceals his feelings for her; and assures her positively "Rajkumari…trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…"
the way he didn't tease her when she describes an earthquake to be a goddess dance...
aawww... its so lovely of him... n i loved the final sentence of him about sia "thats why i like her... she is so imperfectly perfect" 😳 😳

Sia: exactly as dharam said "she is imperfectly perfect.".. awww such a cute girl... n the way u have described her.. i can imagine everything that is going thru her heart... i too felt like crying with her when she comes to know that dharam is using her for his political motives.. i just loved this part
suppressing her tears, she turns to Dharam unhappily "You used my parent's hospitality…my mother's trust…you used Niphaud...you used an innocent girl's feelings…why be so selfish?" dharam pls never do this to her again....
And her feelings when she comes to know that dharam is not the prince her mother was talking abt
Not wanting to face the shame of her blunders or her wrecked image in front of the young men, Siya hopes the earth would swallow her, as she drops paralyzed onto the flat rock.I am sure her heart must be crying like anything at that time... all her dreams abt dharam shattered. and thats exactly what she tells later
she wipes her tears "every girl fantasizes about her first meeting with her prince charming… the conversations…my moments…everything has been shattered…"
and her concern for then when she comes to know that they might go on a war... her taking them to the temple... so lovely.
also.. i like her being an obidient daughter.. not embarasing her mother in front of guests... n her innocent nature beautifully brought out by these two sentences
"The last time I tried to prepare something, I was advised never again to subject anyone else to the tortures of my culinary skills…"
"Rajkumar Harsh…if I start singing, even the Lord himself would come down personally to stop the torture…"
and i just loved her hallucination of dharan... true "a girl can never forget her first love"

Veer : a perfect younger brother... witty.. impatient.. n just a cutie pie.. much much better than the veer shown in the serial... where he has already started opposing the rules n regulations...
n his concern for his briother... the way he shouts at sia when she hurts dharam
"Stop it! Enough! How dare you hurt my brother? He has treated you with so much respect all through. We have been so patient with you all through our stay… your food…tantrums…music…meddling…insults…now you are blaming us of political moves…cheating…" poor boy doesn't realise that he has hurt sia with these words more than the hurt dharam got from her.
i loved this scene the most :
To lighten the situation, he then slowly sits next to Siya to try and amuse her "I think it is better you go home now. Imagine what will happen if maharani finds out you are missing!" he then whispers to the stunned girl "Yes…yes...I know you are ashamed of what you did…we know you had problems…you see we had our problems too!" he acts like he is pondering deeply to himself, aware that she was watching him curiously and then addresses Siya "you understood us, we understand you…you trusted us, we trust you" Veer then asks aloud to Dharam, sadly "does that mean we can't fight with her anymore?"
they make such a cute devar-bhabhi
And he understands the feeling dharam has for sia too.. though dhram has never said it to him
"Can't you even search properly…" he coughs "she is watching from her window..." he coughs "upstairs…look…now"
and also him teasing dharam... just like a younger brother
Dharam… she is adorable no doubt... but…she is childish…she can't sing... can't cook... instead of her taking care of you, it will be the other way around. We are warning you, well ahead!
n when there plans have been poured down the drain by dharam telling everyone abt the war.. n everyone dismissing them cos they don't have any evidence... he rightfully gets angry on dharam
"Ashamed?…you deserved it - I told you not to do this, but you didn't listen...what did you want me to say? I knew all this was going to happen…not one of them believed us!"
and the way he just melts hearing dharam's reply "Did I deserve all this Veer?
n poor boy.. not as galiant as his brother when it comes to girls .. the way he he asked ananya at the cliff to get lost n not disturb him was so funny.. 😆 😆

ananya : a perfect girl for veer.. she knows how to gain his attention.. i like the way she is troubling veer with her giggles n girlish charms... though she is as talented in fighting as veer is..
n lashy... is ur ananya too a negative character.. cos though she has made into the good books of dharam n veer, i have some doubts about her.. she gives opposite advices to dharam n veer
to dharam she says " Rajkumar Dharam… I fully support you in this matter…whatever you said was right…you seem very level-headed….time and tide wait for none…if an urgent situation is coming up, any moment is the right moment to speak up…why wait to think...investigate…
and to veer
Rajkumar Dharam might not agree…but…pertaining to your dilemma yesterday, I support you… speech is silver but silence is golden … never speak, always act…you are right…always wait for the right moment to speak…make sure you have the evidence…
daal mein jaroor kuch kaala hai.. but if she is a negative character.. for whom is she working... jai n agni never mentioned her
i loved her playful ways with veer
The fascinating girl then steps forward gracefully, flashes a naughty glance at him and points to another large stone, as she asks him "What about this rock…is it yours too?" smart girl 👏
and she is so witty
Veer becomes amused and laughs in disbelief "How convenient! You steal only when the need arises! Do you even realize that you're talking to a Rajkumar of Aryanagar?"She replies playfully "Isn't that why I've been calling you Rajkumar all this while…"
but somehow i am not able to sympatise with her her
she reveals a small glimpse of her life "Ma is no more...before she died, her only advise to me used to be that I should face any trouble silently and strongly" she sighs with an amused grin "I think she could see the future... because I've only been facing and battling troubles ever since!" i mean i am not able to believe that what she is tellling is the truth.. might be just another plan to get into the good books of DV

Harsh : i loved that u didn't make harsh come to Niphaud n marry sia just for her money... he seems to genuinly love her... the way he made the wonderful painting of sia n presented it to her n poem that he wrote abt her... so sweet of him
n he is so good in talking with her..
the way he starts a conversation with her
"Rajkumari Siya, the first time I saw a painting of you, I was taken aback...but you look even more beautiful in person. "
and also
"W...W...What are your hobbies? What interests you? Are you adept at anything in particular?"
the way he tries to remove her awkwardness by asking her cooking skills
"Oh! So you are interested in supervising different delicacies and cuisines…"
i am sure.. sia would have fallen for him.. if she had not met dharam.. 😊

after the drab episode today 😕 ... i know its a bit late now but for those of you who have had the chance or are interested, i've posted the preview.. 😆

chowli i'm late.....each and every part is beautiful as usual... 😳 i'm lovin everythin......and i hope sia helps dv in future by smehow coming to know agni's plans through harsh 😉 ....
and awwww she remembers dharam each tme......so sweet 😳

yeah kya itna suspense wala preview post kya hai 😆 😆 😆

Lemme Waste No time! Ahem! Onto Reading with my Imaginary Goggoles!!!..

– Formal meeting chamber
wow! Wat a Formal Meeting.I was glad that u didnt make Harsh sound like any idot! He seems to me a right competor for Rajkumar Dharam (jaagoo Dharam,if u get late,this Rajkumar might hit a six and take Rajkumari Sia as a goal,Then even Veer wont be able to help)hehe!

A painter! Tat makes me get a very serious image of Harsh(cant help with the real Harsh's image..hehe).

How can i miss to mention about his relation to Dharam n Veer.Wow,which way can be better than this.A friend of Agniwardan.hehe! Now i guess i am seeing sort of Real image of Rajkumar Harsh(doubtin wethr paintings are fake or real..hehe)I am impressed,Agni did have one friend after all.hehe!

oops,seems myy mind is gettin weaker day by day! Donno wat all i miss out!Once i strt to talk about Harsh,only he seems to float all over the room.My Sia.......yaaye! wow,wat dialogues DV left to her.i cant blame Daksha for laughin.Even i am in her state.hehe! Lashy di,u are doin a marvellous work in bringin real flashbakks! Amazing!

Bak to Harsh...oops..Gosh...This Harsh is not anywayy myy type..he rites poems??..gosh! This guy seemz to be different frm other Rajkumars i hv seen!Most of RK's doesnt even get time to stay still...this fellow lavishly spends time in writing poems and painitin!..MM....Interestin...but i am njoying this Typical solid frnd of Agniwardan(i cant help laughin weneva i see Agniwardan written instead of Agni..hehe)

- Nivritti's chamber
Niv wants to meet Pari..??Erm...Shrmik connection this wayy!!...MM......Niv knows her son's very well,wow! atleast one Samajdaar person in all Arya Palace.hehe!

- Agni's guarded private chamber

Lolz! So this Agni has loads of friends.Wonder how his frnds would look like (only Karan's face n attitude comes to mind..hehe)

So dad and son has plans of Junior Alexander! MM...not bad.Lets see howw myy Veer n Dharam lets them succeed!..haha! oooh...so a letter is to be send to Harsh..MM..tat means Sia will read..she will understnd the evil plan....run in search of Dahram....wow! Again..ahem ahem....Nice one...So Dharam Sia reunion on Way!Yippee..

Aryanagar – Atop a cliff, a short distance from the palace grounds

haha! Shera is got better aim than Veer.Wow! i love this girl.She iss Strong and Determined.Witty yet Sweet.Lubb her looaaddzzz!!!

Veer's got a Right match! haha! only to fall in love eventually.hehe!

I knw Veer will cnsider her words and go ahead! Way to go girl.U are doin a great job!Keep visitin Veer wen hezz alone.

Preview to Part 16

haha! so Dharam cant afford to think of Sia..hehe! so sad the boy is in love!

Yet again Veer in action.Gosh..never mind Veer will no wonder come with a ready solution!!!!

Awww!!!! last but not the leastt!!!....

*Hugzzzz to myy Dearestt Sweetestt Cutesttt Siss Lashyy diii!!..For givin me a Veryy delicious soup webevaa i come on weekendss to surf!!!!....

Hugzzz!!!! Kissezzzz!!!!

Lubbbbbb uuu looaaaddzzz

Minzyy!!!