RaPi SS : Pihu's Adventure with her Papa ( Shot 15 on Pg 37) - Page 8

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Posted: 1 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Rani16

Hope Pihu's wish comes true! Looking forward to the next part!


Thanks for writing ❤️


Thank you ❤️🥰. Glad you liked it

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Posted: 1 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

I read this when I took a break from work and this brought a smile on my face. Aww Thanks Mandy ❤️. I am glad it made you smile .


 It was like I could imagine this playing out in my head - Ram going down on his knees to give the flower bouquet to Pihu and Pihu thinking of wanting to make Ram her step dad. Poor thing, I wonder how she will react when she gets to know he is her biological dad 🤣 It was super cute nonetheless. I know right, we need more RaPi moments showing their bond and I really want a shopping scene between this two as well 


Man I wish you could write the script for the show. Such scenes would have been absolute joy to watch. But thanks for writing them 🤗 You make up for the show's shoddy story telling with your wonderful one shots ❤️. Thanks Mandy. I am glad you liked them ❤️. Honestly even I don't know the future track of this one. I am just trying based on my mood. 😆


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Posted: 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#74

Check it out if you are interested smiley31. If anyone else wanted to be tagged when I post something new let me know smiley20 or you can bookmark my writing index for this show. Where I will update the index each time , I write something new . 


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Posted: 1 years ago
#75

I loved this Nita! Especially the date night part. How I wish Akki was a part of the show and he was the one who brought out the truth of Shivi’s death? I liked how you have depicted Ram and Priya’s feelings here - his awkwardness couple with indignation of being cheated in the past and his questions. I liked how u let Ram conclude Krish was just a one night stand for Priya coz why else will Priya not marry him all this time especially when she claimed to have his child? I like how u make Ram think coz in the show he does everything but that 😆 will this have a continuation where Pihu gets to know Ram is her dad? Looking forward to read that 😃 thanks for writing this dear ❤️ coz of u I get to imagine moments I would have actually loved to see in the show.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#76

It was so good to see Akki back. Very emotional OS 🥺 Loved how you explored all the four of them: Ram, Priya, Pihu and Akki ❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#77

This is interesting. Akki is back. Where is he. Waiting to know how this comes out in story

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Posted: 1 years ago
#78

Noice! Good to see Akki back and being sensible enough to realize that Pri can't kill someone but at the same time that Priya is an idiot! 

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Tagging those who commented on the earlier chapters ❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Akki is back...❤

I loved this...👏👏