SS: Case Files - Chapter 5: Symbol of love (updated last part) - Page 7

Thanks for your kind words. Yes you will get some glimpses of Savi and how she was conceived, not the process but the circumstances. I will write a short epilogue☺️

I loved it 😊

lovely lovely story I just wanted to see Virat suffer more lol

Awesome read. Took my time and delayed this because I was too upset to accept V yesterday. I still am. 😉

But without clouding my opinion of him, it is excellently written. Though personally I wouldn't have wanted him to be forgiven that easily, but that is Sai. Her endurance and patience. The highlight for me was and is actually Sairat Convo. What we see now is 2 people arguing, clash of contrasting opinions with V not receptive to any arguments. He is like this solid wall which does not allow any words to seep in. Bull headed.

While your convo had him at the same stage, Sai even in her anger broke down sequences and asked him the right questions. While out of habit he tried to defend, but he faltered and fell short, not just to Sai but to himself. And then he was able to put back the same sequence together to see what Sai had always claimed to be true. I reread this part again and it has been so well paced and put together in a precise order.

I hope you get P the punishment she deserves. She needs it.

Looking forward to a Savi-filled epilogue ❤️

Originally posted by: Sherry24

Awesome read. Took my time and delayed this because I was too upset to accept V yesterday. I still am. 😉

But without clouding my opinion of him, it is excellently written. Though personally I wouldn't have wanted him to be forgiven that easily, but that is Sai. Her endurance and patience. The highlight for me was and is actually Sairat Convo. What we see now is 2 people arguing, clash of contrasting opinions with V not receptive to any arguments. He is like this solid wall which does not allow any words to seep in. Bull headed.

While your convo had him at the same stage, Sai even in her anger broke down sequences and asked him the right questions. While out of habit he tried to defend, but he faltered and fell short, not just to Sai but to himself. And then he was able to put back the same sequence together to see what Sai had always claimed to be true. I reread this part again and it has been so well paced and put together in a precise order.

I hope you get P the punishment she deserves. She needs it.

Looking forward to a Savi-filled epilogue ❤️

Thanks yaar for your detailed review.

See SaiRat convo comes out nice because we know how they read each other. NeilSha has established their behavior towards each other very nicely. Pakhi also we understand well to write her intentions more clearly.

But the problem comes how to capture Virat's sympathies for her. To be in his shoes and evaluate Pakh's intentions, given his judgements on Sai, his personal encounters with Pakhi, his love for his brother, and his brother's love for Pakhi needs a lot of reasoning. He cannot see her, unless she herself makes it clear. Everytime she made it clear, he has been very stern with her. And everytime she made him believe that she has moved on.

Sai has different understanding of her as a woman. She feels the need Pakhi might be having for a partner, for a companion. Also, Sai reads Pakhi's behavoir with Samrat more clearly because she herself is a wife. I dont want to bring the gender here to justify Virat's ignorance but Sai has different perspective while observing Pakhi as a woman than Virat. It gives her little edge. And with Sai, Pakhi doesnt get into emotional blackmail. She kind of challenges her, which makes Sai see through her.

So the last chapter, where VIrat connects the dots and figures out that she might still be craving for him is difficult to bring out. Even if he has proofs against her, he can only establish that she committed crime. How will he establish she had the intentions to come close to him? I tried to bring the angle that she hid the fact of her troubled pregnancy, but that too doesnt establish solidly that she is after him. The only way other than Pakhi directly making a move on him would be that, he has to trust Sai's words and read Pakhi through her pespective.

Now, if Virat himself has prejudice that Sai is immature when it comes to Pakhi or Sai is jealous of Pakhi due to their past, how will he trust Sai words. You see the chicken and egg problem? This is where Pakhi is taking advantage. She uses his sympathy on her and his distrust on Sai(only in this matter) and weaves a narrative that will not make him see her clearly.

Leave Virat, no one in the family will suspect her of this cheap act except for Sonali who has a cheap mindset as Pakhi.

That is why the chapter has to be rewritten multiple times. I showed that virat gathered proofs to implicate her of the crime, but he could not establish the motive. Then he says that Geetha broke down when she saw the report but Pakhi has hidden it. Why? I tried to question her motive through this even though it is not a solid way. So finally, I made him trust Sai's words. Because the previous night she used rather harsh words that he might have had inclination to make Pakhi the surrogate from the beginning and he wantedly made her the surrogate. Any loving husband, after such an accusation would be shaken and try to clear his intentions, by trusting his wife and be in her good books. It is only natural. Once he trusts her and decides to see things from her perspective, there is a possibility of perceiving Pakhi and her behavior with him in a new light.

You understand what I mean? Virat knowing Pakhi's intentions is possible only in two ways. The fool proof way is to see himself or hear from horse's mouth. Otherwise, he has to trust Sai without his judgements on her. Exposing the crime she has done will not say anything about her intentions towards him. She will say she wanted to help the family desperately and find a meaning. I mean the reason is dumb enough to question her. But it is hard to bring out in a plot.

That is one more reason, I think Pakhi will go scott free even if her sending the goons is exposed. Sai knows it clearly, but she cant do anything. She will understand her motive, but can not prove.

Nice update Sadhika ❤️👍🏼

This chapter was everything we dream of ....

Could almost imagine it as an actual episode ...would have been riveting stuff..but remains a fantasy to be explored in such writings

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Thanks yaar for your detailed review.

See SaiRat convo comes out nice because we know how they read each other. NeilSha has established their behavior towards each other very nicely. Pakhi also we understand well to write her intentions more clearly.

But the problem comes how to capture Virat's sympathies for her. To be in his shoes and evaluate Pakh's intentions, given his judgements on Sai, his personal encounters with Pakhi, his love for his brother, and his brother's love for Pakhi needs a lot of reasoning. He cannot see her, unless she herself makes it clear. Everytime she made it clear, he has been very stern with her. And everytime she made him believe that she has moved on.

Sai has different understanding of her as a woman. She feels the need Pakhi might be having for a partner, for a companion. Also, Sai reads Pakhi's behavoir with Samrat more clearly because she herself is a wife. I dont want to bring the gender here to justify Virat's ignorance but Sai has different perspective while observing Pakhi as a woman than Virat. It gives her little edge. And with Sai, Pakhi doesnt get into emotional blackmail. She kind of challenges her, which makes Sai see through her.

So the last chapter, where VIrat connects the dots and figures out that she might still be craving for him is difficult to bring out. Even if he has proofs against her, he can only establish that she committed crime. How will he establish she had the intentions to come close to him? I tried to bring the angle that she hid the fact of her troubled pregnancy, but that too doesnt establish solidly that she is after him. The only way other than Pakhi directly making a move on him would be that, he has to trust Sai's words and read Pakhi through her pespective.

Now, if Virat himself has prejudice that Sai is immature when it comes to Pakhi or Sai is jealous of Pakhi due to their past, how will he trust Sai words. You see the chicken and egg problem? This is where Pakhi is taking advantage. She uses his sympathy on her and his distrust on Sai(only in this matter) and weaves a narrative that will not make him see her clearly.

Leave Virat, no one in the family will suspect her of this cheap act except for Sonali who has a cheap mindset as Pakhi.

That is why the chapter has to be rewritten multiple times. I showed that virat gathered proofs to implicate her of the crime, but he could not establish the motive. Then he says that Geetha broke down when she saw the report but Pakhi has hidden it. Why? I tried to question her motive through this even though it is not a solid way. So finally, I made him trust Sai's words. Because the previous night she used rather harsh words that he might have had inclination to make Pakhi the surrogate from the beginning and he wantedly made her the surrogate. Any loving husband, after such an accusation would be shaken and try to clear his intentions, by trusting his wife and be in her good books. It is only natural. Once he trusts her and decides to see things from her perspective, there is a possibility of perceiving Pakhi and her behavior with him in a new light.

You understand what I mean? Virat knowing Pakhi's intentions is possible only in two ways. The fool proof way is to see himself or hear from horse's mouth. Otherwise, he has to trust Sai without his judgements on her. Exposing the crime she has done will not say anything about her intentions towards him. She will say she wanted to help the family desperately and find a meaning. I mean the reason is dumb enough to question her. But it is hard to bring out in a plot.

That is one more reason, I think Pakhi will go scott free even if her sending the goons is exposed. Sai knows it clearly, but she cant do anything. She will understand her motive, but can not prove.

I completely understand the point you are making. The difference in exposing P's actions vs her intentions. And this is precisely the reason why I had written in one of the review sometime back that Sai should not stop V. And let V see P's true colours for himself.

P should have him completely at her disposal. She is delusional and it will be easy for her to misread V's care for her as his love for her. She is already picking her signs. And she won't be able to hold back and will make a move. If V is not more dumb than we are predicting him to be, he will witness it for himself and clearly see the intentions.

However, Sai's actions are being misread at this point. The reason being, for onlookers she is the one who is initiating an "action", and P is only "reacting" to it. Unaware that it is actually a reaction to P's mind games that none are able/willing to see or understand. Hence, everything is going against Sai and in favour of P. If Sai doesn’t change her tactics, it is a downhill trip. Unfortunately she is left to her devices...alone. Hence, it is only her who can and is expected to play smarter.

For the rest I will PM you ;-)