Well the separation is finally here. I can't believe I let a ITV show break my heart this way. I had given up on the show when the Baccha track was introduced and was only keeping up with WU and Twitter updates in hopes that the writers would start making sense sooner or later. I knew the separation was needed and I was anticipating it as well hoping that it will be the soft reboot that this show needed to revive the Arylie charm. Never did I expect that this separation reason will be the nail in the coffin for me to finally stop caring about this show. Anyways, this os most likely my last post on this forum about the plot. From now on, will only be present in the Forum to read the wonderful FFs, SSs, OSs, TSs that our Forum members write wishing one of them could be hired in the team of Imlie writers so we can see something beautiful amd logical on screen as well.
Before my final goodbye, I had some thoughts that I wanted to share about Arylie, baby, this separation and the DRAMA. Let's tackle this one by one.
1. Imlie: Despite her immature and sometimes even caricaturish self which annoyed me at times, I still sympathised with Imlie sometimes. However, for the past couple of weeks she became unbearable as a character to even read about let alone watch on screen. I just do not understand writer's obsession with not showing amy growth in Imlie as a character despite all that she has gone through at such a tender age.
2. Aryan: I know a lot of people have understood and some have wven justified Aryan's AKT taunt to Imlie but for me, that is an absolute dealbreaker. Here's why. Had imlie not confessed to Aryan open heartedly that what she thought was love with AKT was not love because Aryan's love taught her what love is actually like, I might have justified Aryan's comment. Had aryan not gone on and on about how he is not insecure about AKT and Imlie by proclaiming 'I trust my wife', I would have maybe forgiven that taunt. But after seeing Imlie breaking down and saying 'I am tainted, I am not worthy of you' because of his mother's taunts about akt and previous marriage, he still went there and that is not Ok with me. Also, I know Aryan is also a human and is not without faults but he has always been shown as an antithesis to AKT and to see him saying Imlie cared about Gudiya more than cheeku because she still has feelings for AKT reminded me of AKT saying to Imlie that obviously you don't want to listen to me anymore because you love Aryan now.
3. Separation: I absolutely agree with everyone saying that a separation was needed to give a soft reboot to the track. However, it could have been done a lot more tastefully with even more impact. Instead of taking this baby, miscarriage and blame game track forward the way that they did. Here's what I think they could have done to make me sypathise with Imlie more.
4. How I would have done it
Knowing we need to drive the plot towards a separation by using miscarriage as a reason, I would have added and removed some things from show. The first thing I sould have done it keep the confession as it is so Arylie and audience both know that they love each other. However, I would have slightly changed the Dhruv Tara/pole star confession scene a little. Rather making it a confession, I would have shot it as Imlie observing and sleeping aryan and saying all those things to herself. That way the audience would know just how deeply she loves Aryan and that she understands what she felt for AKT was not love. However, Aryan is unaware of the depth of her love for him. It could have been like how we saw Aryan in the past with confessing to her payal, treasuring her salary. We would have connected more with Imlie.
The miscarriage could have happened exactly how it did and Aryan could have felt that maybe she still had lingering feelings for AKT and hence was attached to Gudiya more than cheeku. This way you could have empathized with Imlie more because Audience would know about her feelings that Aryan never got to hear. It would also satisfy Aryan's dialogue 'Misunderstandings can separate us but not a third person'
THE OTHER WAY
If not the above scenario, they could have just made Aryan blame Imlie saying that she didn't care about cheeku enough without bringing up AKT. Blaming a mother for losing the kid is just as horrible, they was no need to bring AKT into it at all. Both oarents blaming each other for losing the baby even though no one is actually responsible is pretty realisitc.
However, the way makers chose to do it made me sympathize with neither Imlie nor Aryan to be honest.
Do share what you guys think