====eventhough i do not like current plot this os depicts how i would have expected it to be=======
"Sarvshreshtha shesh naagin hun main aur jo bhi mere aur mere bacche ki gunhe gaar hai unko saza milkar hi rahega. Ye mera vada hai aapse aur aapne aap se"
Pratha takes oath infront of shivling. Her voice echoes again and again from the cave where the temple is built.
Scene shifts to singh mansion
RPS(Rajesh prathap singh) : Pratha are you sure tum ye karna chahthi ho?
Pratha: sure? Main isi ke liye toh zinda hun. Aaj mujhe rishab se badhla lene se koi nahi rok saktha.. swayam bhole naath bhi.
She leaves the mansion and gets into a car.
RPS: pratha. Tum bol kuch rahi ho lekin tumhare ankhen kuch aur keh rahi hai.
Pratha storms into the gujral mansion.
Mehak: kiara tum yaha.. what a pleasant surprise.
She greets her with a fake smile.
Kiara: woh hum na idhar.. idhar dekhne aye hai ki india main family kaise hothe hai india main.. woh kya hai na hum toh yaha ke hai nahi toh socha yahi aakhe ek bar dekhlu.
Rishab observes her from far.
Rishab: ye yaha kyun ayi hai ab.
Mehak: why not chalo hum toh abhi abhi pooja karne wale hai.. tum bhi dekhlo hamare yahan pooja kaise hotha hai.
Kiara: wow thats so nice of you. And smiles.
Urvashi pulls mehak inside.
Urvashi: mehak ye kya kar rahi ho tum? Janthi ho na iska koi bharosa nahi hai ye pratha bhi ho sakthi hai.
Mehak: chill maasi.. maine aaj iske liye aisa jhaal bichaungi ki woh uss jaal se bahar hi nahi aa payegi.
They laugh together.
Pratha: ye sab kaha gaye kahi kuch saazish toh nahi kar rahe mere khilaf.
She starts walking towards mehak's room and mehak comes outside.
Mehak: Kiara chalo sorry main na kuch lene ayi thi.
Kiara: its okay. Chaliye pir.
Mehak: oh no..
Kiara: kya hua.
Mehak: kiara tum mera ek kaam karogi.
Kiara: haan boliye kyun nahi.
Mehak: woh na hamare teikhane main kuch pooja ke saaman tum lekar ajaogi please. Mujhe panditji bula rahe hai.
Kiara: haan kyu nahi.. kaha hai tei kaana.
Mehak: uss taraf
she shows her the door.
Kiara leaves.
Pratha: yaha par aisa kya hai. Mujhe toh aaj thak kuch ajeeb nahi laga. Aur ye mehak mujhe yahan kyun bhejna chahthi hai.
She starts walking towards and mehak smirks from behind.
Mehak: kiara kiara.. mujhe nahi patha tum pratha ho ya nahi. Lekin andar jo shakti hai woh toh tumhe pratha samajh kar tumpar hamla karega aur tumhara asliyath sabke saamne ajayegi
She smirks..
Pratha opens the door with the keys given by mehak.
She slowly walks inside the room which is too dark for her to see anything.
As soon as she walks inside the room she hears some one closing the door.
She looks behind sees none. She thinks it could be because of air.
Suddenly she sees a shadow inside the room she follows it.
Pratha: yaha par kaun rehtha hai aaj thak toh maine kisi ko yaha nahi dekha..
She sees a staircase which is taking her to the other side of the mansion.
Pratha: ye toh mujhe patha hi nahi tha ki iss ghar ka dusra bhag bhi hai.
She starts walking down the stairs.. she hears the noise of easy chair going back and forth.
Pratha: ye kaun hai.. aaj thak toh main isse nahi dekha.
Suddenly shakti senses someone before he could turn and see pratha
Pratha is vanished.
Shakti: mujhe aisa kyun laga jaise koi mere peeche khada tha..
Pratha tries to escape from the unknown man who is keeping his hands on her mouth and dragging her to a secret room in the same side of the mansion where shakti is kept hostage.
Pratha pushes him.
Pratha: kaun ho tum.. chodo mujhe.
She pushes him and the force makes him lean on the windows which throws some light on his and her face.
Pratha: rishab.. tum.
Rishab: haan main.. tum main akal nahi hai kya. Mehak ne bol diya ki andar jao aur chali ayi. Ye bhi nahi socha ki andar kya ho saktha hai.
Kiara: toh mere ko kaise patha hoga ki andar kuch aur hoga ghar toh aapka hai na .
Rishab: pratha main jaantha hun tum pratha ho
Pratha was shocked to hear that.
Rishab: tum mujhe marne ayi ho na. Toh maardo.
Pratha: tumhe kaise patha ki main tumhe marne ayi hoon.
Her face expression shows that she was shocked more than confused.
Rishab: usse kya fark padtha hai pratha.Mardo mujhe.
Pratha looks at him. He starts moving towards her she starts walking behind and hits a wall.
Rishab tucks her to the wall.
Rishab: maardo pratha ab mujhse aur jiya nahi jaatha.
She looks at him. Suddenly they hear some noise from the downstairs. Rishab moves towards the window. Pratha follows.
Shakti screams : pratha pratha.. kaafi pyar kartha hai na rishab tumse main usse tumhe cheen liya.. he starts laughing. His laugh was echoing.
Rishab is shocked to see his face
Pratha: rishab ye kaun
Rishab : looks at her..
Rishab: mera judwa bhai hai shakti.
Pratha: toh uss din mere saath jo bhi hua.
Before she could continue rishab nods his head in affirmation.
Pratha's eyes are filled with tears.
Pratha: toh aapne mujhe dokha nahi diya?
Her face beams with happiness.
Rishab: diya hai.
His face has some sorrowness.
Rishab: maine mehak se shadi karke tumhe dokha diya hai. I am sorry pratha..
His voice had some genuine reason pratha knew that rishab can not do this to her. She never believed he did something to her. Her happiness had no boundries.
Rishab was crying with the guilt for marrying mehak.
Pratha hugges him tightly before he could express his guilt.
Rishab smiles with the tears on his eyes. He hugs her tightly and caresses her hair pratha smiles while wiping her tears.
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To be continued.
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