The Truth - Part 1

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====eventhough i do not like current plot this os depicts how  i would have expected it to be=======

"Sarvshreshtha shesh naagin hun main aur jo bhi mere aur mere bacche ki gunhe gaar hai unko saza milkar hi rahega. Ye mera vada hai aapse aur aapne aap se" 

Pratha takes oath infront of shivling. Her voice echoes again and again from the cave where the temple is built. 

Scene shifts to singh mansion

RPS(Rajesh prathap singh) : Pratha are you sure tum ye karna chahthi ho? 

Pratha: sure? Main isi ke liye toh zinda hun. Aaj mujhe rishab se badhla lene se koi nahi rok saktha.. swayam bhole naath bhi. 

She leaves the mansion and gets into a car. 

RPS: pratha.  Tum bol kuch rahi ho lekin tumhare ankhen kuch aur keh rahi hai. 

Pratha storms into the gujral mansion. 

Mehak: kiara tum yaha.. what a pleasant surprise. 

She greets her with a fake smile. 

Kiara: woh hum na idhar.. idhar dekhne aye hai ki india main  family  kaise hothe hai india main.. woh kya hai na hum toh yaha ke hai nahi toh socha yahi aakhe ek bar dekhlu. 

Rishab observes her from far. 

Rishab: ye yaha kyun ayi hai ab. 

Mehak: why not chalo hum toh abhi abhi pooja karne wale hai.. tum bhi dekhlo hamare yahan pooja kaise hotha hai. 

Kiara: wow thats so nice of you. And smiles. 

Urvashi pulls mehak inside. 

Urvashi: mehak ye kya kar rahi ho tum? Janthi ho na iska koi bharosa nahi hai ye pratha bhi ho sakthi hai. 

Mehak: chill maasi.. maine aaj iske liye aisa jhaal bichaungi ki woh uss jaal se bahar hi nahi aa payegi. 

They laugh together. 

Pratha: ye sab kaha gaye kahi kuch saazish toh nahi kar rahe mere khilaf. 

She starts walking towards mehak's room and mehak comes outside. 

Mehak: Kiara chalo sorry main na kuch lene ayi thi. 

Kiara: its okay. Chaliye pir. 

Mehak: oh no.. 

Kiara: kya hua. 

Mehak: kiara tum mera ek kaam karogi. 

Kiara: haan boliye kyun nahi. 

Mehak: woh na hamare teikhane main kuch pooja ke saaman tum lekar ajaogi please. Mujhe panditji bula rahe hai. 

Kiara: haan kyu  nahi.. kaha hai tei kaana. 

Mehak: uss taraf 

she shows her the door.

Kiara leaves. 

Pratha: yaha par aisa kya hai. Mujhe toh aaj thak kuch ajeeb nahi laga. Aur ye mehak mujhe yahan kyun bhejna chahthi hai. 

She starts walking towards and mehak smirks from behind. 

Mehak: kiara kiara.. mujhe nahi patha tum pratha ho ya nahi. Lekin andar jo shakti hai woh toh tumhe pratha samajh kar tumpar hamla karega aur tumhara asliyath sabke saamne ajayegi

She smirks.. 

Pratha opens the door with the keys given by mehak. 

She slowly walks inside the room which is too dark for her to see anything. 

As soon as she walks inside the room she hears some one closing the door. 

She looks behind sees none. She thinks it could be because of air. 

Suddenly she sees a shadow inside the room she follows it. 

Pratha: yaha par kaun rehtha hai aaj thak toh maine kisi ko yaha nahi dekha.. 

She sees a staircase which is taking her to the other side of the mansion. 

Pratha: ye toh mujhe patha hi nahi tha ki iss ghar ka dusra bhag bhi hai. 

She starts walking down the stairs.. she hears the noise of easy chair going back and forth. 

Pratha: ye kaun hai.. aaj thak toh main isse nahi dekha.  

Suddenly shakti senses someone before he could turn and see pratha 

Pratha is vanished. 

Shakti: mujhe aisa kyun laga jaise koi mere peeche khada tha.. 

Pratha tries to escape from the unknown man who is keeping his hands on her mouth and dragging her to a secret room in the same side of the mansion where shakti is kept hostage. 

Pratha pushes him. 

Pratha: kaun ho tum.. chodo mujhe. 

She pushes him and the force makes him lean on the windows which throws some light on his and her face. 

Pratha: rishab.. tum. 

Rishab: haan main..  tum main akal nahi hai kya. Mehak ne bol diya ki andar jao aur chali ayi. Ye bhi nahi socha ki andar kya ho saktha hai. 

Kiara: toh mere ko kaise patha hoga ki andar kuch aur hoga ghar toh aapka hai na . 

Rishab: pratha main jaantha hun tum pratha ho 

Pratha was shocked to hear that. 

Rishab: tum mujhe marne ayi ho na. Toh maardo. 

Pratha: tumhe kaise patha ki main tumhe marne ayi hoon. 

Her face expression shows that she was shocked more than confused. 

Rishab: usse kya fark padtha hai pratha.Mardo mujhe. 

Pratha looks at him. He starts moving towards her she starts walking behind and hits a wall. 

Rishab tucks her to the wall. 

Rishab: maardo pratha ab mujhse aur jiya nahi jaatha. 

She looks at him. Suddenly they hear some noise from the downstairs. Rishab moves towards the window. Pratha follows. 

Shakti screams : pratha pratha.. kaafi pyar kartha hai na rishab tumse main usse tumhe cheen liya.. he starts laughing. His laugh was echoing. 

Rishab is shocked to see his face 

Pratha: rishab ye kaun

Rishab : looks at her.. 

Rishab: mera judwa bhai hai shakti. 

Pratha: toh uss din mere saath jo bhi hua. 

Before she could continue rishab nods his head in affirmation. 

Pratha's eyes are filled with tears. 

Pratha: toh aapne mujhe dokha nahi diya? 

Her face beams with happiness.

Rishab: diya hai. 

His face has some sorrowness. 

Rishab: maine mehak se shadi karke tumhe dokha diya hai. I am sorry pratha.. 

His voice had some genuine reason pratha knew that rishab can not do this to her. She never believed he did something to her. Her happiness had no boundries. 

Rishab was crying with the guilt for marrying mehak. 

Pratha hugges him tightly before he could express his guilt. 

Rishab smiles with the tears on his eyes. He hugs her tightly and caresses her hair pratha smiles while wiping her tears.

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To be continued. 

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I enjoyed reading your story, Diya. 😊 Continue the story. I want to know what Shakti will do.

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Woww yaar😍😍u should be the story writer😇

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Wonderful awesome os Diya.👏👍🏼 Loved every bit of it. 🤗❤️The dialogues are just superb. Thanks a ton for sharing this os. Do continue😎⭐️

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Wow this is really good thank you for posting it 

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Thank you all here is the final part 😊


Rishab: i am sorry pratha mujhe ye sab karna padha tumhare liye. 

Pratha: main kuch samjhi nahi. 

She breaks the hug. And cups his face which was filled with sorrowness. 

Rishab: Maine jab tumhe jab inspector vijay ke sath dekha thab mujhe yakeen nahi hua. Mujhe patha tum woh ho hi nahi sakthi. Na tum waise kapde pehanti thi na tum mere peet peeche kuch kar sakthi ho. 

Pratha: rishabji kya bol rahe hai aap maine kya kia inspector vijay ke sath. 

Rishab tells her what happend that day. 

Rishab: mujhe ye nahi patha pratha ye kaise hua na ye patha hai uss ladki ka chehra tumse kaise miltha hai lekin mujhe ye zaroor patha tha woh tum nahi thi. 

Pratha mutters to herself: toh mehak ne mera roop lekar rishab ke mann main ye galath fehmi dalne ki koshish ki. 

Rishab: ye mujhe nahi patha ki heena ne ye sab kaise kiya lekin mujhe ye zaroor patha tha ki kuch bura zaroor hone wala hai. Aur uss din jab main uss garden main aya toh maine dekha ki heena aur shakti milkar tum par hamla kar rahe the. Maine socha main tumhe bacha loon lekin tabhi maine police jeep dekha toh mujhe laga tumhara police ke sath jaana hi behathar hai. 

Pratha: aapne mere khilaf bayan kyun diya. 

Rishab: uss din jab tumhara hearing tha thab... 

Fb starts

Urvashi: agar pratha bach gayi aur rishab uske khilaf gawai nahi dega toh kya karenge hum.

Heena: agar rishab aisa karega toh main pratha ko khud mardalungi. Aur mujhe ye karne se koi nahi rokh saktha na pratha na rishab.. 

Fb ends. 

Rishab: main dar gaya tha pratha main jaantha hun main ek army office hun lekin mujhe ye nahi patha tha heena ke pass aisi kaunsi shaktiyan hai jisse main tumhe kho doon toh mujhe yahi sahi laga ki tum jail main logon ke beech raho. Isiliye maine apne dil par patthar rakh kar woh gawayi di. 

Pratha: aap toh mujhse jail main bhi milne nahi aye rishab. 

Rishab: toh kya kartha pratha heena aur urvashi ke contacts main kaafi log the. Agar main ek bhi galti kartha toh sab ko patha chal jatha ki main tumse ab bhi pyar kartha hun. 

Pratha: kahi aapi hi ne toh mujhe uss phasi se nahi bachaya. 

Rishab smiles and nods. 

Rishab : uss din maine jakar inspector vijay se sab kuch keh diya ye bhi ke maine heena se isiliye shadi ki thaki uski chaal ke bare main mujhe khabar rahe. Inspector Vijay ne mere bathon par yakeen kiya kyu ki woh janthe the ki tum kabhi waisa nahi kar sakthi isiliye unhone tumhe bachane main meri madath ki jwala ki madath se unhone tumhe bacha liya. 

Pratha starts sobbing a bit

Pratha : aur rishab ji mera baccha. 

Rishab: hamara baccha sahi salamath hai. 

Pratha: main kuch samjhi nahi. 

Rishab: uss din heena aur urvashi tumhare bacche ko marne ki saazish rach rahe the toh maine hospital jaake tumhare bacche ko ek anath mare hue bacche se badhal diya. Doctor uss bacche ko marne se pehle hi woh mar chuka tha. 

Pratha: kaha hai mera baccha rishab ji. 

Rishab: maine aur heena ne usse godh le liya. Maine heena se hamare reputation badhane ke bahane apne hi bacche ko adopt kar liya. Woh hamare hi ghar main hai. 

Pratha hugs him tightly.. 

Rishab: pratha tumhe kya laga main tumhe ya hamare bacche ko kuch hone doonga.. he caresses her hair. 

Pratha: kya Rajesh Singh aapke dost hai? 

Rishab : nods woh mera bachpan ka dost hai aur woh jaantha hai shakti kaisa hai and smiles. 

Pratha hugs him tightly as finally she found her solace. Rishab hugs her back as he found his life back. 

Suddenly they hear the noise of some one climbing upstairs. 

Rishab : pratha please tum chup jao ye shakti ho saktha hai.. 

Pratha: mujhe chupne ki koi zaroorath nahi hai and suddenly the door opens and they see shakti infront of them.

Rishab stands in between pratha and shakti to protect pratha. 

Shakti: dekhun toh aaj yaha kaun aya hai.. rishab.. tu aur yahan.. 

He tilts his head to see who he protecting and sees pratha staring at him. 

Shakti: pratha pratha.. tum zinda ho.. par kaise.. tumhe toh marna tha na.. koi nahi thab nahi toh ab sahi.. 

He tries to drag her arms and rishab holds his hand inorder to stop him. 

Shakti: hatt ja mere raste se. 

Rishab: kabhi nahi.

Pratha: rishab ji hatiye iske raste se. 

Rishab: lekin pratha.. 

Pratha: apko mujhpar bharosa hai na. 

Rishab nods a. And he removes his hands and start walking towards her left. 

Shakti: toh tu dar gaya... and laughs.. 

He starts pulling pratha towards him but unable to do so .. 

He turns towards pratha and sees a golden light which is preventing him from looking at her. 

Rishab was amused and stunned at this light as he is unable to understand whats going on. 

Suddenly pratha in her golden naagin roop stands infront of them in half naagin and half human form. 

Shakti jumps two steps back inorder to stay away from her. 

Rishab is still in shock he never imagined that pratha can be a naagin. He rubs his eyes to confirm. 

He remembers few things that makes complete sense to him now. 

Pratha's fiancee seeing heena as a naagin. 

Pratha saving him from poison. 

Pratha: tumhe kya laga tum mujhe mardoge? .. 

Shakti mutters : nahin.. 

Pratha: main naagino ki naagin shesh naagin hun. Mera kaata paani bhi nahi mangtha aur tum mujhe maroge. 

Shakti shivers a bit as he is seeing his kaal standing infront of him. 

Pratha: aaj tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha saktha.. she takes her 5 headed serpent look and was about to kill him. 

Rishab: ruko pratha.. agar isse mardiya toh unhe hum par shak ho saktha hai. 

Pratha looks at him. 

Rishab: aise kaafi sare raaz hai jo hum sirf unke saath rehkar patha laga sakthe hai  isse marne se unhe tum par shak hoga. 

Pratha understood what he meant. 

Pratha uses 1 of the power to erase shakti's memory and he faints in the room.

Pratha and rishab escapes from the teikhaana and comes out. 

Rishab: pratha toh tum naagin ho. 

Pratha: sirf naagin nahi naagino ki naagin shesh naagin hun and smiles. 

Rishab: kya heena bhi. 

Pratha nods. 

Rishab: kya tum roop badhal sakthe ho? 

Pratha nods 

Rishab understood what was all those things which he saw that day. He hugs pratha as if he would have misunderstood her that day he would have lost her completely. 

Pratha hugs him back. And smiles with a satisfaction on her face that the trust she had for him never faded even though she came to kill him today but she internally knows she can never be able to kill him. 

Rishab pulls her to a room where pratha meets with her daughter and hugs and plants alot of kisses on her face. 

Rishab and pratha side hugs each other and holds the kid. 

Rishab : waise shesh naagin ne mujhse shadi kyun ki

Pratha: desh ko asuron ko bachane ke liye and smiles. 

Rishab: toh woh tum thi jisne deshdrohiyin ko.. 

Pratha smiles and nods. 

Pratha: woh main hi thi 

Rishab is so proud of her wife as she proved to be deshbhakt like him. He hugs her tightly and closes his eyes to feel how heaven would look. 

Pratha: aage ka kya plan hai.?

Rishab: aage ka kya saath milkar deshdrohiyon ka mukabla karenge aur kya. 

Pratha smiles and joins hands with rishab. They decide to work together to expose clowns. 

/=========the end ==============/



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This was really good, I really enjoyed it, I hope we get to read more stories from you 

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This was really good, I really enjoyed it, I hope we get to read more stories from you 

🤗

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Wow I loved the os final part. Rishab ke hote hue woh pratha aur unke bachche ko kaise kuch hone de sakta hai. 😳❤️Too good diya. 🤗It was very intresting to read. 👍🏼I hoped ke N6 me bhi Rishab ka character aisa hi hota toh achcha hota. Anyways well written diya😃

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Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Wow I loved the os final part. Rishab ke hote hue woh pratha aur unke bachche ko kaise kuch hone de sakta hai. 😳❤️Too good diya. 🤗It was very intresting to read. 👍🏼I hoped ke N6 me bhi Rishab ka character aisa hi hota toh achcha hota. Anyways well written diya😃

thank you 🤗