Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 1 years ago

He wants Geet to stay. Will she?

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part 40

Their equation keeps shifting.

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Why is he using all the endearments?

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Guess she is still intending to go to Africa.

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Great story concept 

Maaneet’s bond is so sweet 

But charu is confusing hope she doesn’t create more problems 

Cont soon 

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Part B

 

Chapter 7

 

 

The way…the way…Charu looks at Maan…is not …is not like a sister would

 

Geet thinks to herself

 

Charu knows she looks like a mess, she couldn’t sleep a wink last night

 

‘Things can’t go on like this’

 

Charu thinks to herself

 

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Next day

 

The whole family was sitting for a supper, but Geet was missing

 

C-She knows the supper time

 

M- Main use bulaake laata hoon

 

Tabhi Geet appears

 

G- Ye dekho

 

She hands over a shirt to Maan

 

G- Ye main tumhare liye laayi thi aur kal di nahi, socha sabko dikhaun

 

Maan smiles

 

G- Arre sabko dikhao pehle

 

C- emm… nice. But Bro hamesha designer pehenta hai….I mean designer toh tum…branded hi de deti…I mean not that its bad….jo jaisa afford lar sakta hai….I mean sure you tried your best Geet

 

M- Shirt as a gift has a special significance for us. We started talking because my shirt got ruined and this madam game me an horrendous shirt as a joke

 

Maan Geet laugh

 

C-Oh so you are trying to re-enact that prank. Now I get it

 

Geet could feel the tone

 

G-emm…no this I got for him to wear…nahi pasand hai toh

 

M-I love it, Geet. How could you say nahi pasand hai

 

C- Of course, when was your fashion choices great….or any choice. I mean I always have to choose clothes for him

 

M-Yeah, Charu is my personal wardrobe manager

 

Geet gives a formal smile

 

Grandpa breaks the conversation

 

Gramps- Food is getting cold

 

C- Sorry, Gramps. Sit Geet. Let’s eat. The chef has prepared an exquisite meal

 

Gramps- Don’t call her by her name. Show some respect

 

C- What should I call her? ‘Bhabhi’? She is not my Bhabhi…yet. Also she is not older than me. We are of same age

 

G- Its okay, you can call me Geet

 

After the supper Maan wears the shirt that Geet gifted him

 

Geet smiles happily and gives him an approving nod

 

Charu gives a disapproving shrug

 

C- It's not matching…not suiting you, Maan…bro

 

Geet looks at Charu thinking Maan acha toh lag raha hai

 

C- Aise office jaoge, clients se milne?

  

M- Koi baat nahi. Aaj ghar par hi hain sab. Kaun dekh raha. I think it looks good

 

 But somehow soup got spilt on shirt when a servant tripped and ultimately sis said ki

 

C-Let's throw it away. It didn't look that good on you anyways

 

Geet felt hurt

 

 Maan having no fashion sense said okay

 

Abhi Geet ne bhi ladayi nahi ki kehke ki ‘it looks good’, she thought maybe it looked bad

 

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Maan takes her for a stroll around the garden of his island

 

Geet was lost in her thoughts

 

M- Hey

 

G-Hmm?

 

M- I am sorry you felt bad about the gift. I know my sis is a bit spoilt…I admit money does go to one's head eventually a little bit….

 

She sighs

 

G- Nahi…koi baat nahi…ek shirt hi to hai…it costs nothing... kharab ho gai to nayi ajayegi. Aapko kya kami hai shirt ki….

 

M- But I treasure the gifts you give me

 

G- I know. Isiliye toh you wore it and flaunted it

 

Maan knows  uska apni sis ke liye extra sensitive soft corner hai coz of her tragedy...Geet is abled naa


Maan ko hamesha laga ki sis is helping him with business and handling things well at home too

 

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Next day,

 

Maan had went to work

 

Charu enters Geet’s room

 

C-Hey

 

G-Hey. Come-Come

 

C-what’s up?

 

G-Nothing. Just unpacking

 

C-Just came to chit chat

 

G- Oh yes

 

Geet also sits

 

C- So you are liking it here?

 

G-Yeah, its wonderful.

 

Charu nods

 

C- So I heard you went for a stroll with bro last night. How was it?

 

G- Oh it was great. The island is beautiful. It was such a great experience

 

C-So, how are you feeling? I mean being with Bro after years

 

Geet smiles

 

G- I think I can’t explain in words

 

C- So what did you do? I mean did you hold hands and all…or something else…

 

Geet is uncomfortable hearing the question

 

C- We are like friends, right?

 

G- Yeah, It was nice

 

Charu is getting frustrated, so much shoveling and so little information

 

C- So glad. But I would have been anxious

 

Geet looks at the sister questioningly

 

C- You are strong. So many years….if my boyfriend would have stalled me for 5 years without even assurance of marriage or proposal I would have been anxious. I really admire your courage. You also took the first step and came here. That is also commendable. I can totally get your desperation. Years of waiting is not easy. But of course, what other option do you have

 

Charu plants a seed of doubt

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice part dear

Loved it 

Thank you for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

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 Y Charu not happy with her bro happiness she can't see how happy is he 

 Maan to think Charu did wrong so he said she get spoil with too much money

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update

Hate chaaru , what is her problem

Poor geet , hope geet get to know chaaru motive and do something

Can't wait, update soon 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 7 B


Awesome and Cunning Update 


I'm already starting to dislike Charu 

Maan on the other hand has always pleased his sister 

and now she is getting jealous that Geet is getting Maan's time 

and worst the fact that Geet gifted Maan , Charu dislikes that 

though Geet felt hurt but she let it go