MaAn FF Our Little World Completed pg114 updt Jul 5 - Page 75

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kp26

samar is sweetheart, loved convo between kalpana and him🤗 I loved how she said Kalpana and not pooja's ma👏as i guess anu said, ladies do often loose their identities and only gets recognized by father, husband or son's name🤔..

Maan's convo and teasings is absolutely best dose u gave for weekend 😳


Yes❤️ Kalpana wants her identity too❤️


Thank you🤗Monday's update has a surprise for all of you❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Tia I love every part of this story❤️

Good that Anu Came to know about his fears...

I love how you write their romance❤️its beautiful

GK 💔😒

Looking forward to kalpana and Samar interactions

Apart from maan GK is my favorite

Also love aarav and mukku dynamic

Now what is vanraj up to🙄

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Peppss

Tia I love every part of this story❤️

Good that Anu Came to know about his fears...

I love how you write their romance❤️its beautiful

GK 💔😒

Looking forward to kalpana and Samar interactions

Apart from maan GK is my favorite

Also love aarav and mukku dynamic

Now what is vanraj up to🙄


Ah you will know about V's sure to flop plans❤️🤗


GK is truly❤️ The true mentor of Anuj❤️


Thank you❤️🤗


Don't miss tomorrow's update😆... Something really special❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

AK hai hi nahi iss duniya ka bas confirmed. How much love? How? Just how? Why is he fictional? Wot is this 😭😭😍😍😍😍

Absolutely loving how the story is coming all together. GK, Mukku, Aarav. You are a true story teller girl 💖💖💖💖

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for the tags tiana dear…just caught up with the story! Its a lovely spin-off and a very good sunday read 😌😌

Your MaAn are just so MaAnilicious, more MaAn than MaAn themselves….ok I will stop now 😂

Anyway, great work, keep writing ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ektag06

AK hai hi nahi iss duniya ka bas confirmed. How much love? How? Just how? Why is he fictional? Wot is this 😭😭😍😍😍😍

Absolutely loving how the story is coming all together. GK, Mukku, Aarav. You are a true story teller girl 💖💖💖💖


Anuj is ❤️


Thank you🤗❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

~43~


Two weeks later, Anu sat in their office cabin going through the files missing him. He had to go out of town for some important meeting and he couldn't take her with him as she had some other work to attend here. Seeing him the first thing in the morning had become a kind of habit that she couldn't do without and without that she had felt lost. She often found her self in his room at odds hours trying to comfort herself with his cologne. The hours of video calls didn't help. It only added to the longing. Somehow ever since the Christmas party, she had found herself often wanting to be cocooned in his arms and he had satisfied her wants every single time without her asking for it. She looked at the clock, it was only 3. She sighed and threw herself in work hoping the clock to tick faster.


The past two days had been hectic, he mused. He had missed her so badly that he had driven 4 hours straight post the meeting just to see her. He wondered if she missed him as much as he missed her. They had talked over video call but she had been very silent that he really couldn't understand what she felt. Rushing to their cabin, he softly opened the door hoping to get a peek of her before revealing himself. What he saw made him go over the moon. There she was bent over some random files, few stray hairs caressing her forehead as she chewed her pen in deep concentration looking as beautiful as ever. What really caught his attention was her attire. She was wearing her saree as usual but on top of that she had chosen his favorite coat to wear. Oblivious to his presence, she suddenly grabbed the collar of his coat and brought it to her nose sniffing in the scent. He puffed his cheek and slowly let out a breath as her deed made him realize she had missed him so much. Placing his hand on his chest, he tapped it twice as it sunk into his brain once again that the woman in front of him was truly his. He entered in and shut the door, latching it for some much needed privacy. She turned around at the click of the latch,


"You..."


"Mmm..."


"You were supposed to come tomorrow morning..."


"Couldn't stay away any longer..."


"Mm hmm..."


He moved closer to her as she let her eyes roam over his frame greedily taking him in. Bending close to her, his face inches away from her, he let his fingers trail a slow path from her temples to her chin. She shivered at his touch, her lips partly open in anticipation.


"So... you missed me too..."


"Mmm hmmm..."


"I love it..."


"What?"


"I love it when you miss me..."


"Aren't you going to do anything about it?"


He smiled at her.


"Should I do something about it, Mohatarma?"


She pushed him away.


"Bholuram..."


He resumed his earlier position and reached for her hand. Pulling her up from the chair, he hugged her tight.


"I missed you..."


Her hands around him, she rubbed her cheek against his chest.


"Missed you too..."


"Mmmmm... Anu..."


"Mmm?"


"Let's go out..."


"Out?"


"Hmmm... remember... I promised you a date long ago..."


"Mmmmm..."


"So we will go now..."


She nodded. She really needed some time alone with him.


"Where are we going?"


"It's a surprise, Mohatarma.... but before that..."


He quickly went out and brought back a bag in his hand.


"I got you something to wear..."


"What is it?"


"Open it and see...."


She opened the bag and saw a pale pink salwar kameez. The material was soft and had small silver stones stuck here and there. The dupatta had a thin silver border. She smiled and said


"This is beautiful.... You know I had something similar to this when I was young."


"I know..."


"You do?"


"Of course... you wore that the day I first saw you..."


She looked at him and sighed softly.


"You still remember?"


"How can I forget anything about you? Now... will you change into this for our date?"


She nodded and started walking towards the door to go to the changing room when he stopped her.


"Uh Anu... you might need to remove that coat and keep it here if you don't want unnecessary attention."


She looked at the coat and blushed suddenly conscious of the fact that he had seen her like that. Avoiding his gaze on her, she quickly removed the coat and bolted out the door.


***


"Hi"


"What is it?"


"What?"


"Aarav, you really want me to believe that you are here at this time of the day just to say 'hi'"


"Why shouldn't I come just to say 'hi'"


"Oh you can... but I am sure you are not here now for it..."


He sighed.


"Yes... Coach called me... they found my mother's family with the help of GK. It seems her parents are no more, only her younger brother is alive. He is married and has kids all grown up. He doesn't have any picture of the man but thankfully he has his memory intact and could recall his face to the sketch artist. They have used it to create a picture of how he would look like now. Coach has sent it over. I... uh... couldn't..."


She got up from her chair and walked to him. Settling down beside him in the couch, she took his hand in hers squeezed it and looked at him comforting him with a slight nod.


"Let's open it together...."


He opened the email and downloaded the attachment his heart thumping against his ribs. The image popped up of a well built man a lot like Aarav himself except for the eyes, chin and nose and a bit more older.


"He looks like you..."


"He does... Mukku... I can't push away this nagging fear that he is a wicked man."


"But he is NOT you.... will never be you... You are you... Sweetheart Aditi's son.... and my best friend."


"Thank You...."


She nodded and got up to leave when a knock at the door stopped her. In entered the man she was trying hard to get rid off.


"Hey Mukku... I heard GK left early, shall I drop you home?"


"I will drop her home..."


"Mr. Malik... I uh didn't see you..."


"No issues, Mr. Shah... by the way, now that I am here... you don't have to worry about Mukku at all... I am very much capable of taking care of her personal needs, just as her brother is. I would highly appreciate if you would stick to work alone. Thank you."


Clamping down his rising temper, he turned around and left deciding that the new guy did need a lesson.


As soon as the door closed shut, Mukku turned to him.


"What was that?"


He simply shrugged his shoulders.


"You know me... I don't like sharing you with anyone... come, I will drop you home."


***


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Edited by ...Tiana... - 3 years ago
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~44~


"Bike?"


"Wanted to take you out since college..."


She nodded and sat behind him as he wore his helmet and turned on the key. A sudden memory flashed before her eyes.


"Anuj..."


"Hmmm...?"


"Can I hold you tight?"


He turned around to look at her face and understood her unspoken pain. He reached for her hands and grabbed them. Wrapping them around his waist, he looked into her eyes


"Mine... only Mine..."


She nodded and rested her head on his back as he started their ride.


***


"We are here..."


She got down as he stopped the bike. They were in the outskirts of the city. She looked to see green farmlands all around her. In front her was a beautiful yellow stone house nestled in a garden of flowers. As he opened the small gate to let her in, she felt she had stepped into a different planet. Orchids, lilies, roses, daffodils, dandelions, jasmine.... every flower she could ever think of was there. As her eyes took in the gorgeous sight, they spotted something at the far right corner. There were two towering trees shading a white hammock. Climbing roses had hugged the trees making them look a beautiful shade of red. The evening sun cast a golden glow on them and they looked heavenly. A little brook flowed at one end of the garden making it look even more poetic. She gave a sigh of pleasure as a whiff of fragrance from the flowers hit her nostrils.


"Anuj... this... this is beautiful..."


"You like it?"


"I love it..."


"Do you want to sit there?"


"I... uh... I..."


He smiled at her hesitation.


"This place is mine..."


"Yours?"


"Mmm hmmm..."


"But?"


"Mom loved this area a lot... we used to come here often for picnic lunches. She always said the greenery calmed her. After my parents left, I bought this little piece of land, built this house and planted this garden in their memory. After the house warming, this is the first time I am coming here though, as I was always abroad. The times I did come I spent it with Mukku back in the little flat. GK was the one who took care of it and also arranged some people to take care of the house in our absence.... Ah... here he is. Hello Vimal..."


"Welcome home Bhai and Bhabhi...."


"Thank You, Vimal... we will come in sometime... please make everything ready."


He took his hand in hers.


"Come..."


He helped her sit in the hammock and sat beside her. She looped her hand in his and leant against his shoulder. Together they watched the sun set and the moon rise. As he saw the rays of the moon caressing her face, he fell in love with her all over again. Feeling the lovestruck teenager alive in him once more, he whispered


"The sun and the stars

The moon and the flowers

The breeze of the night

The babbling brook to the right

Have been in a fight

Through the night

To know who

Would be the first to

On them get my gaze

And maybe put a smile on my face

Oh how foolish they are

Not knowing what they so long for

Belongs as a whole, not in part

To the Queen of my heart

My Anu... My very own Anu...

I love you... I love you..."


Every word of him had made her heart race. She looked up at him to see his pupils dilated and his face looking awestruck. She felt a wave of pleasure sweep her body at his devoted gaze. She squeezed his arms tight and snuggled closer.


"I love you too..."


As a cold breeze blew, she shivered a little. He took her hand in his and stood up.


"Shall we go in...?"


She nodded and they entered in the threshold together. He took her around the house. The house had a single kitchen, a bedroom, a guestroom, a dining room and a living room. The interiors were gorgeous all made of stone to match the rustic theme and there was even an artificial fire place in the living room. The door to the backyard was through the kitchen and there was a small patch of vegetable garden over there.


"It's too dark to see now..."


"Hmmmm.... that's OK..."


Vimal came in.


"Bhai, everything is ready...."


"Thank You.... Anu... come, I have something for you..."


She followed him to the terrace. She stopped at the door stunned at the sight before her. The entire terrace was decorated with orchids, roses and warm fairy lights. The terrace had a roof with hanging pots. Each pot had a little tealight set on them to light up the space and give a view of the plants. In the middle of the terrace was a beautifully set table. As Anu took the sight of beauty in front of her, she realized thay it looked straight off the fairytale book she had read to Pakhi as a child. She shivered a little overwhelmed. He placed his hand on her shoulder.


"Its just me... and you... only us... Come... let us eat..."


He always knew how to make her feel better, she thought as she walked towards the table. He pulled the chair for her and she sat down, a little nervous. He sat opposite to her and served the food. Seeing her looking at the plate and not eating, he said


"What is it?"


She looked up.


"I... uh... I.. this is my first date..."


"Of course this is our first date..."


"No no... I mean this is my first ever date..."


He took in a deep breath and took some food in his spoon and offered her.


"Then let's make it the best one..."


After a fulfilling dinner, she gave a contented sigh.


"Anuj... thank you... all this... all this looks straight out of a dream..."


He bent down and took a deep breath.


"Dream.... A dream..."


"Anuj?"


He stood up and walked towards her and knelt in front of her. Taking her hand in his, he said


"Anu... I had a dream long long ago... when I felt I lost it, I stopped dreaming at all... but for the past few days, I have started dreaming again... and dreams have been very beautiful... there is a dream that I persist to dream everyday though I do not know if it would come true... would you want to know my dream, Mohatarma?"


She nodded not trusting her lips enough to speak.


"In my dream, I see myself older living in this house with you by my side.... tending to these gardens when the sun rises.... cooking lunch and playing with our pet dog when the sun is high.... cuddling a little kitten.... sitting in the hammock and watching the sun go down while our kids and family visit... as the moon rises, falling in love all over again while teasing and playing with each other's senses.... having quiet conversations under the stars.... and when the stillness of night settles in.... going to bed and cuddling together dreaming of a new day in each other's arms.... this has been my dream everyday from the time we kissed under the mistletoe... will you... Anu, will you become my wife and fulfill this dream of mine?"


Her breath hitched and she felt tears flow down her cheeks. He quickly wiped them off, a little unsure if they were of fear or happiness.


"Anu... you don't have to answer... I mean... you can... It's ok... I will understand... if you... uh... say... no..."


"No?"


"Mmm hmmm.."


"Bholuram..."


The sound of the silly name from her lips made his heart soar. He wrapped his hand around her neck and pulled her towards him. Placing his lips on hers, he kissed her with all the joy he had at that moment. When they broke apart for air, she playfully pushed him.


"You really are a Bholuram..."


He trailed his fingers on her face, rubbing her lips with his thumb.


"Mohatarma... you have not yet answered me... will you share my dream? Will you be my wife and make this little house a home?"


"Yes... yes... and yes... a thousand times yes..."


He hit his forehead with hers as happy tears streamed. She wiped them and placed kisses on his cheeks.


"But... Anuj..."


"I know... I know... right now is not the right time.... let's keep this a secret..."


She smiled.


"I love you..."


"Love you too... love you too..."


He stood up and walked towards the table. He took his mobile and switched on the music. Walking back to her, he held out his hand


"Care for a dance, Biwi-to-be...?"


She took his hand and smiled


"Always a pleasure, Pati-to-be..."


He pulled her towards him and they waltzed slowly getting more and more lost in each other as the soft music notes filled the air creating a little world for them alone to live in for the night.


***

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