The Honey and the moon- prarish ( one shot) - Page 2

Originally posted by: rbb1

of course he does lol, hope we get another story from you soon

If i get the time, i will stretch this one

How he reacted in the morning when he saw pratha.

These writers ruined the honeymoon for seventh asur which was lame. They should have given sat and sun full episodes only on honeymoon.

Lot's of activities written for the track

The asur one can show next week onwards

The audience not running elsewhere

They have ample of time to stretch the story.

People are watching coz of the leads

Why villain has to be female.

Yash is hot and in naag roop he is even hotter.

Why not make him the villain and give more ss

Btw , One loop hole i found in the story.

It was rishab's father threatening the mother before he was attacked by nagin.

How come now tables turned???

That his mother is threatening the father even slapping him.

And earlier he was choking her instead in previous episodes.

Who controlled who, i still wonder( eyes rolling).

Or writers have amnesia issues??

They forgot what they wrote earlier 🤣🤣🤣

I know the honeymoon should have been really good it should have been romantic/hot but as you’ve said they ruined it

Originally posted by: Aniash

Hi nicita,

The idea came when i was watching Saturday episode.

Well, he's an army guy. A little exercise won't harm🤣🤣🤣

Good Idea

Enjoyed Reading It.

superb os

poor rishabh have to bear for pratha's bet with reem

but its good that reem and ritesh got proof of prarish love

hope now ritesh will not support reem

and want to know what is reaction of rishabh when he will come to know about this

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

superb os

poor rishabh have to bear for pratha's bet with reem

but its good that reem and ritesh got proof of prarish love

hope now ritesh will not support reem

and want to know what is reaction of rishabh when he will come to know about this

Tq dear

I am not regular on IF tvese days as am busy

Will not be able to continue the story.

Also hearing news. It's gonna go off air. A member told me

Hey dear nice os Aniash. 👍🏼Oh God! Pratha ne toh sach me dara diya Rishab ko. Poor guy was tired searching for her. It was scary. First i thought Is Pratha drunk or something🤪😆Being a PraRish lover myself i was scared like what has happened to her. Loved Ritesh who was a cupid trying to unite PraRish. 😳This Reem doesn't leave Rishab😡anyways.So this was a part of a challenge. I was on the edge of my seat reading this os

Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Hey dear nice os Aniash. 👍🏼Oh God! Pratha ne toh sach me dara diya Rishab ko. Poor guy was tired searching for her. It was scary. First i thought Is Pratha drunk or something🤪😆Being a PraRish lover myself i was scared like what has happened to her. Loved Ritesh who was a cupid trying to unite PraRish. 😳This Reem doesn't leave Rishab😡anyways.So this was a part of a challenge. I was on the edge of my seat reading this os

Tq dear.

That was how they could have conducted the honeymoon track. Suspense, humor and romance. Rishab's desperation for pratha. Fans would have enjoyed.

Unfortunately , they scrap it off with some lame aasur drama which is a woman.

Who wants to see women face off

Nagging and lectures

More blunders are on the way

Next week they are gonna get separated

I even like that guy yash.

He is also missing in action.

Lame saas bahu drama since two weeks.

Originally posted by: Aniash

Tq dear

I am not regular on IF tvese days as am busy

Will not be able to continue the story.

Also hearing news. It's gonna go off air. A member told me

its ok dear

no problem whenever you get time

but i think it will not end this soon as show started now.

Ani....i didnt know you wrote other series stories too..loooks like i missed lots of interesting stories

i started watching naagin suddenly on whim since yesterday and was scrolling the forum today when i saw the story

good one as always

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Ani....i didnt know you wrote other series stories too..loooks like i missed lots of interesting stories

i started watching naagin suddenly on whim since yesterday and was scrolling the forum today when i saw the story

good one as always

Hi ash, gd to see u here

I ran away from this forum month back.

Still watch the show though

These days only active at kundali forum

Or just chat through dm.

Am eagerly waiting for kvg show to start next week.

For nagin 6 i only wrote two stories.

And for kundali only one.

Majority i wrote was for udariyaan which i have read

Yrkkh also i wrote two somewhere beginning of the year. I ran away from that show and forum five months ago

Only followed a while coz of harshad . But couldn't connect to the FL. Too much family drama and dragging. The show ran for more than a decade. Amazed with audience loyalty.