Raya SHORT STORY: Tvam, Mama Jevana Hetuna(NOW ON WATTPAD, note Pg.20) - Page 9

SB..this is too good! I love the pace at which the story is progressing, giving time to unpack all the emotions of R & P in this new joyride they are setting out on 😊

Love how Shubhu made an entry, perfect sibling vibes! Manraj deserved more screen space, and he would have pulled off the sibling bond with NM beautifully given the chance ❤️

Waiting for the next part now..😊

Finally u r here author , let me tell u never ever hv I been so impatient for a ff to be updated.. You have driven me crazy , refreshing IF every day to check if you have updated 😂

It was all wait the worth , coz it's so heartwarming and beautiful ..

Sick and vulnerable Priya is not a good sight but the way Ram is extra sensitive to her health as well as her pride to not let anyone know of her state has my entire heart ..❤️

Leaving aside all the romance and passion which u capture so vividly , it is these small involuntary gestures that makes this story so heart warming ..

My fav part .. 😭🥰

Ram must have understood from her facial expressions the thoughts running in her head, for he held out his hand to help her get up from the couch and taking her bag from her hands

Also the way you describe Priya as a queen thorugh Shubham , gosh the bond we deserved to see...

He called his bhabhi “Queen”… because she literally was the queen of his brother’s life, of his life and of Kapoor Mansion and Kapoor Empire. She was the guiding light they searched for all their life and finally got it the day she entered Kapoor Mansion

What an opportunity wasted by the makers..

From Shubham calling Ram sautela to understanding the depth of Priya's words when she said " Mujhe naam lekar batao Shubham is ghar me Mr.Kapoor se zyada kaun apna hai tumhara "

Sigh !! Sigh !! Sigh !! They could have explored so much with Shubhu Shivi redemption and especially Shubham bonding with Pri ..

Keep writing GadaDhari Bheem , your pen is surely mightier than your gada..

In love with your writing ❤️

Already eager for the next part..

Seems you have shifted to eat or not eat precap to the next part..

(insert: Dekho, Dekho woh Aa Gaya meme )

I was waiting for this update so eagerly & how well you have maintained the flow here even if you might be writing after exam stress - 👏

I so loved how caring Ram is for our Priya & reading about all the times Priya has wanted to be with Ram in these times☺️

Shubham's character growth - Kamse kam yahan toh naseeb hogaya - I loved how you mentioned the specifics of how Shubham covered Ram's shirt's stains - those're difficult scenes to write in terms of directions but you did it well.

Hope your exams went fine? How're you doing now?❤️

Awesome update you made my day such a beautiful story can't wait to see raya reaction when they will finally come to know that they are becoming parents can't wait for it already loved how shubham become positive and his bond with his ram bhai and loved raya continue soon

Priya is pregnant but unaware?

I thought staying away from BALH would make me less sentimental whilst reading FFs but I was so wrong. I've awwed and giggled like a teenager reading this.

LOVED the chauffer and shauher dialogue.. So apt.

Their romance in the office raised the temperature in the room and it's about 33° C in here! They're so cute🧿

This Shubhu is just how I always wanted the character to be and loved how you bhagaoed Nandini and going to do the same with Mami.

Ram is such a duffer that hearing the word baby doesn't ring a bell and connect his wife's symptoms to that.. Really eager for the next part ❤️

SB darling, god! Now this is the perfect distraction from my stupid exams!!! Ahh, how much I loved this cannot be expressed. But damnnnn, it was too good. And Yaasss!!! Shubhu teasing Ram about Priya is the best thing ever, it had me laughing so bad. There are so many things in this part that got me, in short it was incredible....

Yaar, aaj he paatha chala ki part 3 aaya hai, u didnt tag me, sad :(. But it's fine, this amazing chapter made it up.

Can't wait for the next <3

Originally posted by: Anonymmus

SB darling, god! Now this is the perfect distraction from my stupid exams!!! Ahh, how much I loved this cannot be expressed. But damnnnn, it was too good. And Yaasss!!! Shubhu teasing Ram about Priya is the best thing ever, it had me laughing so bad. There are so many things in this part that got me, in short it was incredible....

Yaar, aaj he paatha chala ki part 3 aaya hai, u didnt tag me, sad :(. But it's fine, this amazing chapter made it up.

Can't wait for the next <3

I am eagerly waiting for the next part.

Please update asap.

I love Shubham in this story.

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

Man!! Too good this is. Maza aa gya padh ke. ❤️❤️❤️❤️🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤