RaYa TS - When the universe conspired to bring us together (Part 2) - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: averma1

Just wow. Keep writing you have a great storyteller in you and you are able to hold the readers interest with your detailed descriptive writing while maintaining a tight narrative. Absolutely loved it. ❤️


Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed reading 😊.

Reading comments like yours makes me want to work harder and bring something better each time ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Doodle

Just read part1. It's wonderful. Tiramisu, huh? You had me there. I am yet to read part 2. Lovely beginning. ❤️


Ok, just finished the second part. Such understanding! This is how mature people behave. You write so well. Please keep writing and share your work with us. ❤️


Aww..Thank you! My inspiration to continue writing comes from all of you who read my humble attempts at storytelling and send your love my way ❤️

When I wrote this, I was looking forward to seeing how the moment plays out on the show, but it doesn't look like it will happen. S1 had a similar scene, and the recall (only a 2 minute scene) happened so beautifully and Ram & Sakshi just killed it with their performance. NM & DP could have done the same, if only they had the chance!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Dazzlingji, this is so well written..I feel terrible for having missed reading this earlier despite the tag. I tend not to go out of the EDT much: Apologies and my loss really!

How I miss those dil ki dhadkan moments of her coming down the stairs ❤️

This is the way it should have been about the epi 3 encounter..alas it was not to be.

Some lovely memories are ours though. And having gotten to know some like minded sistas 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: purplenpink

Dazzlingji, this is so well written..I feel terrible for having missed reading this earlier despite the tag. I tend not to go out of the EDT much: Apologies and my loss really!

How I miss those dil ki dhadkan moments of her coming down the stairs ❤️

This is the way it should have been about the epi 3 encounter..alas it was not to be.

Some lovely memories are ours though. And having gotten to know some like minded sistas 🤗


Aww..thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading ❤️ It's easy to get lost in tags re..😆

When I wrote this, I was hoping and thinking about how it will be shown onscreen.

Now I'm glad I wrote this because show main aisa kuch hone se raha 😆

This show will remain very dear to me because of all of you, it's what brought me here after all! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

I finished both the parts today & trust me - This TS was a balm to my soul 👏


It's literally bewitching - the way the whole scene flowed - something akin to what was conversed in EDT multiple times that we wanted them to know who was on the other side of that Bathroom door.


The whole setup of the Chef thanking Ram & Priya's monologues with Ram's thoughts & their moments in the Bedroom were done up really well.


So take a Bow 🕴️ !

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: SONIA441

I finished both the parts today & trust me - This TS was a balm to my soul 👏


It's literally bewitching - the way the whole scene flowed - something akin to what was conversed in EDT multiple times that we wanted them to know who was on the other side of that Bathroom door.


The whole setup of the Chef thanking Ram & Priya's monologues with Ram's thoughts & their moments in the Bedroom were done up really well.


So take a Bow 🕴️ !


Thank you! ❤️ This is high praise indeed..I'm so pleased that you enjoyed reading! 😊

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