Teri Baan Jaungi (MaAn OS based on precap)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anu's eyes were fixed on the empty family photo frame. She missed her family but she did not want to miss the beauty of the first night of her new life. She slowly went towards Anuj and hugged him tightly. Anuj felt Anu is exhausted and needs to rest. Afterall it was a long eventful day for her.

Anuj: Anu Raat khatam hone wali Hain. Tumhe ab so Jana Chahiye.

Anu annoyingly breaks the embrace.

Anu: Mujhe abhi so ja na Chahiye? Abhi?

Anuj: Ha abhi. Tum fresh ho kar aao.

Anu angrily takes off the pallu from her head and removes her head jwellery.

Anu(talking to herself not noticing Anuj is hearing): Car mein to bade bade baatein kar raha tha wo. Itna romance karunga ki Sab ladkyian jal ke rakh ho jayegi. Yeh admi Sirf bade bade baat Karna Janta Hain, kaam ke mamle me big zero. Woh English mein kehte Hain na all tok(talk) and no work.

Seeing Anu's desperation Anuj smiles mischievously and while Anu was walking towards the stairs, he pulled his dupatta towards him from back resulting in the dupatta falling from Anu's body. The suddeness of the situation startled Anu. She turned towards Anuj. Realizing her chest is uncovered she puts her hand infront of her chest. Seeing her hesitation, Anuj feels he has crossed his limits. After all Anu always protects her chastity with her dupatta. Cursing himself for his actions he bends down and picks up the dupatta. He goes towards Anu and puts it on her right shoulder.

Anuj: I am sorry Anu. Yakeen karo mein kabhi Aisa Kuch Karne ke bade me soch bhi Nahin Sakta jisse Tumhe uncomfortable feel ho.Pata Nahin mujhe Kya Hogaya tha. Believe me aaj yeh Sab Karne Ka Mera koi iraada Nahin tha.

Anu: Apko yeh Sab Karne Ka iraada kyun Hoga, aap ko to aaj Raat bhajan karneka iraada tha.

Anu then pulls Anuj's dupatta and throws it on the ground.

Anu: Abhi hisaab barabar.

She then turns around and walks away removing her ear rings. Realizing what Anu is expecting Anuj runs towards her.

Anuj: Jwellery utarne mein madad Chahiye? May I?

Anu: Aap Mera student Hain Kya? Yeh students teacher ko har waqt puchta rahta hai, " May I drink water?" "May I go to washroom?"

Anuj( while removing her ear rings): Ha Hoon mein tumhara student. Aaj poora Raat exam doonga.

Anu blushes and covers her face with her hands. Anuj caresses her arms and slowly removes the bangles and pulls her towards him. He then takes her in to his arms and walks towards their room. He gently lays her on their beautifully decorated bed and kisses her forehead. Anu takes off Anuj's glasses and kisses his eyes. She blushes and turns around. Anuj slowly opens the chain of her blouse and kisses her back. Unable to control her emotions Anu tightly hugs Anuj.

P.S.: I am not a writer but the precap got me so excited words just poured out. Please ignore the poor writing quality.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey,

Very nicely done. Blends into the precap scene seemlessly. I wish we get to see something along these lines. Short & sweet, loved it!❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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are you a bade acche lagte hai (og) fan too?🤭...the whole thing reminded me of their consummation episode 🙈😻💖....anyway it was beautifully written, you should write more often 😁✨

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: whiskeylullaby

are you a bade acche lagte hai (og) fan too?🤭...the whole thing reminded me of their consummation episode 🙈😻💖....anyway it was beautifully written, you should write more often 😁✨


Hey hey hey BALH fan here. Of course og. Damn those days 😍😍 The whole hullabaloo about that consummation episode! Seems like it was yesterday! Ram and Sakshi were the OGs of mature romance on ITV. ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So beautifully writtenn😍😍😍

Our bholuram and bold Anu 🔥🔥🔥❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fighter03


Hey hey hey BALH fan here. Of course og. Damn those days 😍😍 The whole hullabaloo about that consummation episode! Seems like it was yesterday! Ram and Sakshi were the OGs of mature romance on ITV. ❤️❤️

hello 🤗...damn tell me about it...twitter was in shambles..itv world was shook....rashi were busy justifying themselves 🤣🤣 looking back it seems like they were so ahead of time...it's been 10 years (🤯) and no-one has ever come close to that...*that* promo ad 🔥🔥...raya will always be special 🥺💝
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: whiskeylullaby

hello 🤗...damn tell me about it...twitter was in shambles..itv world was shook....rashi were busy justifying themselves 🤣🤣 looking back it seems like they were so ahead of time...it's been 10 years (🤯) and no-one has ever come close to that...*that* promo ad 🔥🔥...raya will always be special 🥺💝


Exactlyyy! A decade and nobody has dared to show anything even close to that episode. RaShi and their iconic chemistry 😍😍🔥🔥🔥

Ekta Kapoor screwed up the show pretty badly after that, but RaYa went into television history.

MaAn come a close second I feel, no offence 😹

Its 2022 now so I hope DKP doesn’t screw up MaAn the way RaYa were screwed up.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fighter03


Exactlyyy! A decade and nobody has dared to show anything even close to that episode. RaShi and their iconic chemistry 😍😍🔥🔥🔥

Ekta Kapoor screwed up the show pretty badly after that, but RaYa went into television history.

MaAn come a close second I feel, no offence 😹

Its 2022 now so I hope DKP doesn’t screw up MaAn the way RaYa were screwed up.

na na maan definitely come close or else I wouldn't be here 😹....that women can rot in hell for all I care 😤....let's hope history repeats itself tommorow 🤞🏻🤭🔥🔥 although I've serious trust issues with dkp 🤐 but I'll stay optimistic 🤣🥰🔥💕
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thoroughly enjoyed...❤️


The hesitant Anuj and our bold Anu☺️


Now I can't wait for tomorrow's episode...


Do write more❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is soo appropriate, hot n masttt🥵🙈 u write really good!!💗 pls continue n write more ff❤🤧🤧

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