Marriage or Scam! ~PraRish ~ Short Story~ 7th Part Updated~page 7~ - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
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MisHaan in PraRish story. What a cross over❤️😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Omg this is a great update, Rishab is so cute he thinks Pratha is cute and only he can talk to her that was so sweet. I really hope we get the next update soon I want to read what happens next, hope we get a great part with Rishab and Pratha


Thank you. Yes Rishabh is cute while he gets drunk. I just wanted to write something cute so yeh result hai😆 I kept imagine Simba and teju face while writing Rishabh and mishti scene😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

MisHaan in PraRish story. What a cross over❤️😆


First I thought to write a scene about a random girl to whom Rishabh keep talking about Pratha making just tired than I thought why not add mishaan here. I was kinda missing them too😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ILoveNature


Thank you. Yes Rishabh is cute while he gets drunk. I just wanted to write something cute so yeh result hai😆 I kept imagine Simba and teju face while writing Rishabh and mishti scene😆

omg they both would be hilarious, please post the next part soon I can’t wait to read what happens next
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 4

loved how you wrote about rishabh thinking and about reem and pratha to how she looks hurt when reem is present with rishabh

lolz rishabh doesn't trust his drunken state but is its trustworthy when he is not drunk?

rishabh drink full glass of milk in one to avoid alcohol but lost his conscious your pratha is smart

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Posted: 3 years ago
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part 5

great update

here reem is very understanding and loved her little revenge hugging rishabh when pratha came. we loved jealous pratha just like rishabh do its suits her and more when she claim him as her. ohh why reem leaving areh fir yeh dono ka jealousy game bhi khatam ho jayega😔

liked your rishabh not thinking of leaving pratha and giving time to their relationship but then how aghast factor will come in prarish.

good that rishabh ne hungry ke aage breakfast bol diya nahi toh pratha kuchh aur samajhati😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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part 6

great update

loved how prarish cared about each other though jealous not trusting fully about each other.

thanks for showing rishabh doing his army duty or in show he is just around pratha or his mom and with one of his senior. colleagues and friends shown at time of marriage are disappeared. you made good use of them here. akash is impulsive whereas samar is steady and firm. will love to see them helping rishabh. liked how you written rishabh state of mind about knowing about pratha from mohan he is in complicated state but now must have relieved knowing her innocent.

mehek turned herself doctor to know about mohan?

waiting for prarish date and mehek and pratha's next step even of rishabh as you are making him work😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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part7

wonderful part

so pratha sent mahek to tell mohan not to disclose pratha and mahek. poor girl wanted to spend happy married life of normal human but now had to fulfill her duties towards SSSN. And for that if she had to kill anyone she is ready.

ohh rishabh in guilt that he spoiled life of pratha by marrying her and getting drunk and pratha worrying about him lolz that lines where she doesn't have his no. and her worrying about him not returning as he was always around her crack me up😆bechara uske suspicious clear karne k liye pratha k aaspas hi rehta tha aur ab pratha ko uski aadat pad gayi awe poor baby use to get to sleep cuddling in her rishabhji's arm and she is missing worrying about him and at the door of seemaji for his no.

aweee drunk rishabh is so cute and he thinks pratha is cutest in the world and only he will talk to him. i thought pratha will reach there and we will get to read jealous pratha and being ruhaan reach there so jealous rishabh too😔 and also i thought we will get some drunk rishabh pratha cute/irritating talk when he will reach home but you made him sleep so early😔love last they slip cuddling each other(i can imagine their first morning after SR scene here)😳


your ff is better than show👍🏼

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