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Posted: 3 years ago
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Jisko bhi yeh padke mujhe gali dena hai de dena but I was having free time aur kuch karne ka bhi nahi tha so here it is an imaginary scene created by me.

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It is Kashi’s Goadbharai day:

Scene 1:

Rao and Kashi in their room getting ready.

Rao: Kashi Mastani ke baare mein humne abhi tak aai aur chima ko nahi bataya hai. Jab unko pata chalega toh kya voh meri zimmadari ko samjhenge..?

Kashi is quite and is lost in her own thoughts. Ever since Baji has revealed his marriage with Mastani Kashi is completely heartbroken and hasn’t spoken anything to Baji and has been ignoring him..

Rao seeing Kashi lost, pulls her closer to him.

Rao: Kashi tum toh meri doobhida ko samjho.. Mastani ka haath Raja Chattrasal ne mujhe diya tha.. Mujhe uski zimmadari saupi thi toh phir main kaise unhe mana kar sakta tha?

Kashi looks at Rao with wide eyes.

Kashi: Aap ne aisa kadam uthane se pehle kabhi bhi ek baar humare baare mein nahi socha..?

Rao with guilt in his eyes: Kashi main abhi bhi tumse utna hi pyaar karta ho jitna pehle karta tha aur aise hi karta rahunga.. Yaadi hum dono maante hai ki humara bandhan patthar ki tarah atoot hai toh kisi teesre vyakti ke aane par bhi yeh bandhan kabhi toot nahi sakta.. Mera vishwas karo.. Mujhe yeh sab majhboori mein karna para tha..

Kashi first time tears filled in her eyes looks at Rao and hugs him and closes her eyes.

Kashi: Rao hum jaante hai ki aap humse bohot prem karte hai aur hum bhi aapse utna hi adheek prem karte hai.. Humein iss baat par bhi vishwas hai ki Mastani aapki kebal zimmadari hai... lekin humara dil yeh maanne ko tayyar nahi hai ki ab humare sambandh pehle jaise hi atoot rahenge. Kyun aisa lag raha hai ki Mastani ke aane se aapka pyaar humare prati kam ho jayega..

Rao keeps quiet. Kashi pulls him apart and put forward her hand.
Kashi: Bada kariye ki aap humein kabhi bhi apne aap se door nahi karenge. Bada kariye ki aap Mastani ko apne dil mein humari jagah kabhi nahi denge. Aur aap Mastani ko kabhi bhi Peshwin ka darja nahi denge..

Rao puts his hand on Kashi’s and promises her. And both hug each other.

Rao: Kashi Goadbharai ka samay ho gaya hai chalo chalte hai.. abhi humari khushiyon ka absar hai iss mein dukh ki koi jagah nahi honi chahiye.

Kashi nods and they both go to attend her Goadbharai ceremony.

In the ceremony everyone gives gifts to Kashi and blesses her and the baby. Both Kashi and Baji are happily looking at each other.

Just then a guard comes in and says: Shrimant ek aurat aayi hai.. voh keh rahi hai ki voh bhi iss absar par shamil hona chahti hai.

Rao: Kaun hai voh aurat. Kya usne apna naam bataya?

Guard: Voh keh rahi thi ko voh aapko ache se janti hai aur voh aapki pa.. pa..( in a trembling voice) patni hai.

Mastani comes in the mind of both Kashi and Baji while everyone wonders who is the woman..

Radhabai in anger: Kya mazak chal raha hai.. Baji kya tum uss aurat ko jante ho.. Batao Baji..? Kya tum uss aurat ko jante ho..?

Baji a bit concerned ask the guard to bring the woman in.

The woman comes in and everyone wonders about who she is. Baji recognizes that it is none other than Mastani while Kashi wonders if it is her.

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Fake promo for next day: Baji is questioned by Chima and Radhabai about his illegal marriage with Mastani while Kashi breaks down in her room. Baji remains quiet thinking what to say....

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My brain supported me till this much only.. Aage ki kahani aap log hi apne aap bana lena.. Becoz i have to complete my college project.. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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hahahaha🤣😂🤣🤣😂😂 u should be the story writer tbh bohot mast likha he wese u are not wrong check latest bts in riya ig acc they are currently shooting kashi godhbharai only what a coincidence and I hope ki tumne jesa likha hai wese hi story ho
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnuskaMohanty

hahahaha🤣😂🤣🤣😂😂 u should be the story writer tbh bohot mast likha he wese u are not wrong check latest bts in riya ig acc they are currently shooting kashi godhbharai only what a coincidence and I hope ki tumne jesa likha hai wese hi story ho

Thanks for the comment.. Really appreciate your praise..

And I hope ki jaisa maine likha hai vaise hi writers bhi likhe.. The entry of Mastani shouldn't be boring but interesting according to me 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely update❤️ keep writing


Kashi only wanted to become baji ke dil ki rani , she has not interest in becoming peshwin bai.


Mastani ki entry dhamekedar hi hogi aisa lagta hai 😆 I mean jis speed se letters aa rahe hai..


What if mastani takes d complain to kashi I mean like bihu send a letter to kashi that she wants to talk to her in private & then reveal about bundelkhand kaand .


Vaise ji katar kashi ne baji ko first meeting mein di thi uska bhi kuch role hoga coz baji would had given same katar to mastani.


Anyways baji ki band baja baraat to nikle ki hi 😆but I m feeling sad 4 kashi😭

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Originally posted by: Shake_d_spear

Lovely update❤️ keep writing


Kashi only wanted to become baji ke dil ki rani , she has not interest in becoming peshwin bai.


Mastani ki entry dhamekedar hi hogi aisa lagta hai 😆 I mean jis speed se letters aa rahe hai..


What if mastani takes d complain to kashi I mean like bihu send a letter to kashi that she wants to talk to her in private & then reveal about bundelkhand kaand .


Vaise ji katar kashi ne baji ko first meeting mein di thi uska bhi kuch role hoga coz baji would had given same katar to mastani.


Anyways baji ki band baja baraat to nikle ki hi 😆but I m feeling sad 4 kashi😭

I will surely write when i don't have anything to do and plus when my brain works

Bina brain ki story bhagyas jaisi ho jayegi 🤣🤣 so i don't want that..

And yes Mastani ki achi entry hi hogi.. can't wait for upcoming episodes..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: StudyForLife

I will surely write when i don't have anything to do and plus when my brain works

Bina brain ki story bhagyas jaisi ho jayegi 🤣🤣 so i don't want that..

And yes Mastani ki achi entry hi hogi.. can't wait for upcoming episodes..

tbh kbb should hire as u writer instead of vikram sir and shinde mam u are writing amazing story kya dimag lagaya hai kash yhi dimag mata ekta ke paas hota 🤣😂😂🤣
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Originally posted by: AnuskaMohanty

tbh kbb should hire as u writer instead of vikram sir and shinde mam u are writing amazing story kya dimag lagaya hai kash yhi dimag mata ekta ke paas hota 🤣😂😂🤣

Hahaha.. thats a huge compliment..

I am thinking to write another imaginary one..

And i assure you aapko mazaa ayega 😊

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I had a question 12 may ka episode nahi release hua hai na..? Coz my zee5 ain't showing it so confirm karne ke liye puchha tha..😃

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Here is a continuation part of Goadbharai scene.. I finally got free time after doing some stuffs.. So I hope whoever reads it enjoys it.. Bohot mehnat se likha hai and haan don't believe it becoz it is imaginary created in my mind just for fun.. 😉

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The woman is none other than Mastani and as she enters the Wada, people starts murmuring with each other. Kashi looks at Rao and sees him concerned.

Kashi: Rao kya voh aurat Masta..

But before Kashi completes her question, Radhabai interrupts in between and there is silence..

Radhabai: Tum vahi ruk jao. (Mastani looks at her and stops as she could see Radhabai’s eyes fuming with anger). Radhabai comes near Mastani and in a fit of anger throws her thali of gifts on the floor.. Everyone stands shocked..

Radhabai: Tumhari himmat kaise hui, bhari sabah mein Baji ki patni kehne ki.. Kya Rishta hai tumhara Baji ke saath..? Kaun ho tum..? Chup kyun khari ho.. Batao kaun ho tum?

Mastani: Hum Raja Chattrasal ki beti, Mastani hai. Yudh mein Muhammad Bangash ko harane ke enaam par humara aur rao ka vivah hua tha.. Hum Bajirao ki dusri patni hai aur unke pehli patni ke goadbharai mein unke aane wale bacche ko ashirvad dene aaye hai..

Radhabai is shocked hearing all this while Chima looks at Baji and questions him.

Chima: Bhau kya Mastani jo bol rahi hai kya voh sach hai..?

Baji with downcast eyes: Aai aur chima mujhe aap dono se akele mein baat karni hai.. Kashi tum bhi humare kamre mein chali jao main tumse baadmein milunga.. Suryaji aap Mastani ke rehen ka intezaam kijiye..

Suryaji nods and goes to prepare for the same..

So Goadbharai ceremony ends with a chaos and Mastani goes to stay in the guest room while everyone leaves discussing with each other about Mastani..

In Radhabai’s room:

Radhabai: Baji bolo kya bolna hai.. Kyun aisa kiya.. Kyun uss musalmani se shaadi ki..?

Baji: Aai main majboor tha.. Rajaji ki tabhiyat bohot kharab ho gayi thi.. Lag raha tha maut unke ghar ke darwaze par dastak de rahi hai.. aise mein unhone apni beti mastani ka haath mujhe diya jisse unke mrityu ke baad main Mastani ka sahara ban sakon..

Chima: Lekin Bhau.. Kashi vahini ka kya..? Unka sahara kaun Banega..?Kya aap ne kabhi yeh socha..?

Baji: Mastani kebal meri zimmadari hai.. Hum dono ke beech koi Rishta nahi hai.. Aur baat jab Kashi ki hai usse pata hai Mastani ke baare mein..Lekin aaj.. maine nahi socha tha ki Mastani aise bhari sabah mein sabke samne aajayegi.. Main toh soch raha tha ki usse baad mein iss wa..

Radhabai interrupts him and in disgust: Tum uss aurat ko iss pavitr mandir mein lana chahte the.. Kya tumhe thori si bhi sharam nahi hai.. Baji aaj tumne Peshwa Balaji Vishwanath ke naam par daag laga diya hai.. Iss Parivar ke maan samman ko dooba diya hai..

Chima: Bhau main toh aap aur Kashi vahini ki jodi ko Ram aur Sita ki jodi manta tha.. Aap dono ka Rishta kitna sundar aur pavitr tha.. Lekin aaj lagta hai vahi Rishta kisi kaale saya ki jakar main aa gaya hai..

Baji remains silent as he listens to them..

Scene 3:

Kashi enters her room and remembers Baji’s saat bachhan, his love for her and his promise of not giving his Andheri raat to any other woman..She cries feeling helpless for the first time..

Kashi to herself: Hai Ganpati bappa.. Aaj pehli baar humein apni sautan se aakh se aakh milakar dekhna pada .. Bappa aapne ne humare jivan ke har sankat par apna aashirvad aur saath diya hai.. Parantu aaj pehli baar humein laga ki aapne humara saath nahi diya.. Aap Rao ke prati humara prem jante hai.. Toh kyun aaj humare jivan ki sabse Khushi ke pal par humein aisa din dekhne ko diya.. Kyun…?

And Kashi cries as her heart breaks remembering the encounter of Mastani..

At night Baji comes to his room completely feeling guilty of his actions and thinking how to speak to Kashi. As he enters the room he finds her sleeping near the corner of the bed.. Kashi felt asleep after having an outburst of tears.

Baji goes near her. He picks her up in his arms and lays her down on the bed(Flute version of Prem Piyasi Naina plays in the BG) He looks at her.

Baji: Kashi mujhe maaf kardo.. aaj humari khushiyon ke absar par maine tumhe bohot dukh diya hai.. Pata nahi main tumhe kaise samjhaon ki mere jivan mein sirf tum hi ho aur humesha ke liye tum hi rahogi.. Kaise tumhe dilasa dilaon ki Mastani humare beech kabhi nahi aa sakti hai.. Aaj main tumhare dukh ka gunegar hoon.. Kya tum mujhe maaf kar paogi..?

Baji caress Kashi's face while she is sleeping. He holds her hand and gently strokes it while thinking how Mastani has created a ruckus in his life.. He thinks to himself to somehow solve the chaos which has been created and win back Kashi's love once and for all.. At last Baji lays down beside her and falls asleep holding Kashi’s hand..

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This is it... Episode finished.. First time I felt scriptwriting is really a difficult job to do.. Really appreciate all the script writers for their dedication towards their work. 😊

Edited by StudyForLife - 3 years ago

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