ShiVi TS: Tu hi Sabse Haseen

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey guys! This is the first time I have done something, apart from reading your lovely stories. I badly want to see this journey of ShiVi, so writing something on it. Ignore my mistakes as I haven't proofread. So, here you go😳


Beep, beep, beep. Raavi shifts a little in her sleep as the sound of alarm clock disturbs her beauty sleep. Oh, Somnath! Not today, she thought. She's not going to wake up early today, after all she was finally having a good sleep after four long days!


Just yesterday, Shiva returned from his trip to Ahmedabad and Raavi's happiness knew no boundaries. She immediately went and hugged him, taking in his presence, his scent, to her heart's content. She had missed, wait, terribly missed her Bhoothnath. How she had spent those 98 hrs 45 mins 13 secs, she herself doesn't know. Maybe she was too busy in her thoughts. Thoughts that were consumed by Shiva & Shiva only, leaving a pinkish glow on her face. Well, Mr. Chattan Pandya's case was no better. He always knew he was going to miss her, but this much. Insane. He was going to be insane & that's how he completed one week's work in four days, rushing to his Chipkali. And now that they are together, hugging each other, he closed his eyes, cherishing the moment. Her warmth calming down his anxious self. That moment truly belonged to them.


She reached out for the alarm clock, hurriedly turning it off and moved back to her place, only to be engulfed by his strong arm. He was sleeping on his stomach & sensing her move away,he put his arm around her waist, pulling her closer.
"Itni bhi kya jaldi hai tujhe, chipkali. Thodi der ruk ja na, itne dino baad itni achi neend so raha hun, mat jaa please"- he said, nuzzling her neck, eyes still closed.


"Acha ji, kal to bada bol raha tha ki mujhe bilkul miss nahi kiya aur ab itna pyaar", she said, her smile showing her happiness as she inched closer to him.


" Tu na zyada bol mat, bas mere pass reh"
"Shiva, subah ke saade saat baj gaye hai, agar abhi nahi uthe na, to sab log... "
Her words remained incomplete as Shiva kept his finger on her lips.


"Sshh.. Koi kuch nahi bolega, sabko pata hai hum itne din ek dusre se dur rahe, to.... " He said, staring intensely at her lips. Raavi, realising his intention, blushed profusely while trying to move out of his hold. But, instead, he trapped her in between his arms, and she laid beneath him, her eyes locked with his, a light smile adorning her face.


"Tujhe pyaar se kaha sone ko, Tu hi nahi maani, badle mein meri neend udayi so alag. To ab..sazaa to milni chahiye na"- he said, leaning in for a kiss. She closed her eyes, waiting for his lips to touch hers, when suddenly, she felt a certain kind of uneasiness in her stomach, that rose up to her chest and she ran out from shiva's hold towards washroom, covering her mouth by her palm.






So, this was all for today. I hope I didn't waste your time😛. Do comment on whether you liked it or not. Your comments would surely encourage me. Thank you!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oooh cuddles

cuutte ❤️

Hope you continue this ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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give me the next part rn 😭
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This is cool.

Waiting for more!

❤🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kristmas

Oooh cuddles

cuutte ❤️

Hope you continue this ❤️

Thank you❤️.Will try to update soon🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amy_march_02

give me the next part rn 😭

Haha! Glad you liked it❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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KHUSH KHABARI??? PLEASE BE KHUSH KHABRI 😳


Hehehe that was so cute!! I'm always up for Shivi being all cute and mushy 😆Morning romance hits different yk!


I found your writing style very comfortable and fun to read! I hope you continue to write because this was a very beautiful attempt!


Congrats for writing your first piece!!! 🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandira2

KHUSH KHABARI??? PLEASE BE KHUSH KHABRI 😳


Hehehe that was so cute!! I'm always up for Shivi being all cute and mushy 😆Morning romance hits different yk!


I found your writing style very comfortable and fun to read! I hope you continue to write because this was a very beautiful attempt!


Congrats for writing your first piece!!! 🥳

Thanks a lot🤗Your comment makes me so happy❤️. You know I was so hesitant to post it, I thought I had written such a boring piece. 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwww this is so cute and satisfying to read 😍😍 specially the morning cuddles i m sucker of that give me more plsss☺️😛

This role reversal of shiva being chipkali is all time favourite 😆

So raavi gonna give deliver goodnews or is it false alarm anyways i loved it

P.s pls write next one little lamba 😵

And keep writing💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awww is she pregnant, please write more 😭❤️ This is so easy to read!

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