* Tum hi dekho naa *

Prologue : Raavi was on the verge of breaking down. She just can't take any more. What has her life become? She wanted to scream and then cry and then gather the broken pisces of her heart. So she decided to do just that.

Part 1

Shiva looked at the papers in his hand. The tears in his eyes blurring his vision and making it more difficult to read. A few drops even escaped the corners of his eyes and fell on right where her signature was done. He finally decided to accept his reality. If she thought so then so be it. Waise bhi he had been trying to free her from the gilded cage of this forced marriage and let her have all the happiness she deserved. Deep down somewhere in his heart he knew that she was not responsible for whatever happened with his beloved Dhara bhabi in thr hospital. And eventually when the pain from the incident would not have been so raw he might have talked out with her too. But these accusations against him were the final straw. It felt as if the Gods above were sending some signal that times has come to give up his haq on her and so he let go. And so he let go of her hand as she fell down in the middle of the road. She fell down as she no longer had her Shiva to anchor her.

Part 2

Raavi always thought that on her wedding day she would be the Somnath ke sabse khubsurat dulhan. People would keep talking about how radiant she looked even months after her wedding. But fate had saved something disastrous for her. On her last wedding not only did she lose her childhood love but she was forced to marry her childhood enemy too. And here she is again decked up as a bride looking glommy and sad. Her masima had given her kasam and made her promise to give love a second chance. Aryan was not bad at all. He was good looking, gentleman and very respectful of her. But he was not her Shiva. So even though she was sitting in front of the mirror, ready to be Aryan's wife she decided to fight one last fight for her love. And so she escaoed through the window.

Part 3

Shiva couldn’t bear looking at Raavi. She looked too powerful and lovely and he knew he wouldn’t be able to look away even he even dared to look at her once. So he tightly shut his eyes and clenched his fist trying hard to control his heart thumping loudly. He saw her lips moving and her trying to tell her something but he was too out of it to understand. But once he focused with great difficulty he felt as if an earthquake had hit him. She was getting married? But she came here to tell him that she loved him and was asking him to run away with her. As he closed his eyes a thousand memories clashed on his heart like a river lashing out on the walls of a dam. He remembered her performing all the marriage rituals with him while yearningly looking at his elder brother. He remembers feeling the smallest on the day which was supposed to be the happiest of his life. He felt like a piece of furniture, just to be used as per convenience. He knew that she had definitely moved on from Dev. But what he didin't know if his heart was willing to take the risk again. He had been singed one too many times to take a leap any more. He didn’t have any more courage left in him. And when his mother uttered vile words to hurt someone as pure hearted as Raavi, he kept mum with his head bowed down with thousands of emotions . He was just too tired.

Awesome. Please update the next part soon.

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Awesome. Please update the next part soon.

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: Kfof

Interesting ❤❤

Hope you enjoy coming parts too

Part 5

Disha was getting ready for school. Rishita was busy tying her five year old's hair into a high ponytail. In the angan a Dhara was running behind her very naughty seven year old son who stubbornly refused to eat more than a few bites of his breakfast. Neither Disha nor Rishab wanted to go to school since it was weekend and their favourite chachu was going to come back home. Krish got chnce in Ahmedabad university for PhD and on weekends when he came home he used to brings lots of toys and sweets for the kids. So no wonder he was popular among the kids . Also the fact that he was always laughing and funloving unlike Shiva chahu who was busy working or just sitting staring off aimlessly. He was either busy handling the new branch of Pandya Store or just brooding. The Pandya family was now a lot more financially stable and the angan was always filled with laughter of kids and voices of family members. The only change was that Suman passed away due to a heart attack and Shiva went silent after that. All day he would be busy handling the store, carrying heavy loads or just sit silently. Dhara was worried sick about Shiva. He told he was going to Surat for business meeting two days back but he left his phone at home. He didn’t even call from anyone’s cell to inform if he reached safely. Suddenly a car stopped in front of their house and a few people got down from it.

Part 6

Raavi was very happy today. Her four year old daughter, Aishi was finally going to school. Aishi was not just pretty but quite intelligent for her age too. So Raavi didn’t leave a stone unturned to make her ready and give her the best start to a long journey ahead. She decided that nothing should put a damper on this day. So when she saw a police van stopping in front of Pandya Niwas and lowering a body covered by white cloth she turned away with giving a care. She definitely won't let her past affect her daughter's life.

Part 5 is actually part 4 and 6 is 5

Sorry for the mistake

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