| ShiVi TS : Taming The Enchanter || Part 2 : Page 18||Completed| - Page 18

Originally posted by: Prizi

The confession is magical

Girl you are a great writer

Keep up with your work

Thank you so mucccccchhhhh ❤️

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Thank you for the tag Ritu .. I just read the 2nd part and it's amazing . 👏

I love stories which delve deep into the emotions and yours was absolutely perfect that way.

Finally the doba and dobi broke their mental barriers and took the plunge. 😆

The part I must appreciate is that you have kept the relationship between Sidharth and Raavi as friends , platonic.

Most "writers" ( **show wale **) , can't let friendships between a guy and girl remain just that . They have to ghusaofy some sort of nautanki ..

It's perfectly fine that the 3rd guy is a gentleman to show the hero as a hero , you know.no need to make the 3rd guy a creep / stalker..but yeh BAAT show ke writers ko Kaun bataye.

I will look forward to read more from you . I had read another story of yours recently as well ..saavan I think .. sorry I couldn't comment back then .. was in a personal mess. The FFs here were my break from the chaos. So thank you for that 😊

Please do tag me when you write more.

P.S: we haven't interacted before properly . I am Vani 😊

Thank you so much for the kind words.❤️🤗

I just don't understand the aversion with Male-female friendships lol. The only thing I feel though is a problem there is guys not being respectful towards the girls they call their friends and casual stuff they pass off that infuriates you. If this isn't there then you're fine. 😆

Awww the love Saawan has been getting is overwhelming it was legit unplanned maxxxx. But the comments have been so so so wonderful.

Definitely will tag you !

Will be creating an index soon...so I plan to put all the members I need to tag in a list there. 😳

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Okay i read this now and it's so good!

I mean, I usually never feel any buildup of an argument or hurt while reading, but the way you did, I could feel the tension, the emotions, the hurting, everything!

The argument, her breakdown, their confrontation, and finally them being in each other's arms!

I love how it was build up, and yes you went to town with the descriptions but that's something I wish to do, I can't describe for the life of me!

Well done, Ritu <3

Awwww kagazzzz

Thank you so muchhhh. Imma build up queen lol. I hate it sometimes...it keeps going on and on gets boring. I CAN'T KEEP SHORT FOR THE LIFE OF ME!! 🤡🤣

Originally posted by: Yahvi

Wow👏👏 what a beauty!! I'm in love with how you tell the story, so gripping &emotions are so powerful that you just feel them &stay in that moment with those characters.. It's like I'm in pensieve & you are reliving a memory & I can feel it like I'm witnessing this in front of my eyes

Thank you so muchhhh for reading! 🤗

You gonna make me blushhhh 😳

Originally posted by: Amy_march_02

I love you ❤❤❤😭😭😭

Lol thanks you're the first 🤣🤣❤️

Originally posted by: Radhi12

It was awesome

Love it

Thanks a lot! 😳

Originally posted by: Caroline_Forbes

I had fic bookmarked in my browser in hopes of reading both the chapters together when it comes out and finally, I read both the chapters and I have to say that I freaking loved it. The emotions and the hurt that both Shiva and Raavi had of losing someone precious to them was portrayed to perfection. Shiva being the dumbass and assuming that Raavi like Dev was totally on point with his character. I can not stop gushing about the fact of how much I adore this story. You're a fabulous writer ❤️😍

Awwww....Thank you so much.

You're kind. ❤️

Originally posted by: Seja1

Ritu 🤗

Thank you for tagging me. Like I said previously, I don't go past 1st page on this forum. Now I think I will explore and find more fan fictions as, this is way more interesting than the actual show.

I read the second part and boy it was so emotional yet beautiful realisation of Shiva in love with Raavi.

Loved the bonfire part where the angst was brewing up between Shivi and how Siddharth consoled Raavi to check on her well being as a friend she needed at that time whilst she was going through a whole range of emotions.

The love confession was beautiful and heart touching, I cried 😭.

I can't depict in so many words but wanted to say, I thoroughly enjoyed it and now wanting more. I know this is the last chapter but would love if you could move their story forward along with Dev and Rishita.

Thank God bonfire was okayyyy...I was scared I've ruined all the expectations of romance there. Hehe...which I kinda did...lol

Ohhh I haven't thought of moving it forward yet maybe someday as a bonus chapter?

Their wedding?

Maybeeeeeeeeeeeee. 😉

Thank you for reading ❤️

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Loved this ❣️❣️❣️

Great confrontation it poured all there emotions😘😘

Thanks a lot! 😃

Originally posted by: Foxii

Uff so many Emotions.

Shiva pinning for Raavi, being jealous… it was great.

His desperation to get answers from Raavi, described so well.

Wish there was more, but loved it nevertheless

Do write something new soon

Thank you so much!

Glad you liked it. ❤️

More?? LMAO...I was practically close to comaaa by the end of it. lol 🤣

I AM SO HAPPY ITS OVER 🤣