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Writing a chapter I'm actually satisfied with, so I'll be back and read fursat se before I lose inspo!

The confession is magical

Girl you are a great writer

Keep up with your work

Thank you for the tag Ritu .. I just read the 2nd part and it's amazing . 👏

I love stories which delve deep into the emotions and yours was absolutely perfect that way.

Finally the doba and dobi broke their mental barriers and took the plunge. 😆

The part I must appreciate is that you have kept the relationship between Sidharth and Raavi as friends , platonic.

Most "writers" ( **show wale **) , can't let friendships between a guy and girl remain just that . They have to ghusaofy some sort of nautanki ..

It's perfectly fine that the 3rd guy is a gentleman to show the hero as a hero , you know.no need to make the 3rd guy a creep / stalker..but yeh BAAT show ke writers ko Kaun bataye.

I will look forward to read more from you . I had read another story of yours recently as well ..saavan I think .. sorry I couldn't comment back then .. was in a personal mess. The FFs here were my break from the chaos. So thank you for that 😊

Please do tag me when you write more.

P.S: we haven't interacted before properly . I am Vani 😊

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Writing a chapter I'm actually satisfied with, so I'll be back and read fursat se before I lose inspo!

you giving me another update so soon ?????? ❤️❤️

Jaaoooo bhagoooo....and write acha acha.

Okay i read this now and it's so good!

I mean, I usually never feel any buildup of an argument or hurt while reading, but the way you did, I could feel the tension, the emotions, the hurting, everything!

The argument, her breakdown, their confrontation, and finally them being in each other's arms!

I love how it was build up, and yes you went to town with the descriptions but that's something I wish to do, I can't describe for the life of me!

Well done, Ritu <3

Wow👏👏 what a beauty!! I'm in love with how you tell the story, so gripping &emotions are so powerful that you just feel them &stay in that moment with those characters.. It's like I'm in pensieve & you are reliving a memory & I can feel it like I'm witnessing this in front of my eyes

I'm thinking if you read the update I made yesterday or so? I have the next chapter ready but I'll post tomorrow 🤭

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I'm thinking if you read the update I made yesterday or so? I have the next chapter ready but I'll post tomorrow 🤭

I haven't yet girl. I was up till 3 am yesterday writing then editing half of it lol. Now we tired. LMAO.

But Imma read it soon...❤️

Maybe I can give you a longer comment for both the chapters entwined 😉

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Main gussa hoon ab. 💔

Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!! Kyuuuuuunnnnnn?????!!!!!!! Maaf kar do na? Pweaseeeee?????!!!!!! Galti ho gayi humse! Maan rahe hain hum! Par aise thodi na karte hain?

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

PS Tagging Akka and Choti because we need people to help us lagao morcha.

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!! Kyuuuuuunnnnnn?????!!!!!!! Maaf kar do na? Pweaseeeee?????!!!!!! Galti ho gayi humse! Maan rahe hain hum! Par aise thodi na karte hain?

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

PS Tagging Akka and Choti because we need people to help us lagao morcha.