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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: VNuts

I loved the whole thing. ❤️

This is such a realistic, everyday situation, isn't it?! So many people are diagnosed with cancer, and you're lucky if it gets diagnosed early on.

I love the way Raavi oscillated between fear and strength. And thoughts of if she dies, then the things she wants. The discussion about whether or not to visit the fertility centre. And the way Shiva supported her throughout, without giving up hope, just the sheer will that she would make it through was just amazing.

All the reactions, the emotions were so natural and humane. ❤️

Thank you for this.

Looking forward to the epilogue.


It is indeed a very realistic situation. I think the most of us lost at least one person to cancer.


I wanted to show the different emotions Raavi is going through but with Shiva by her side, her rock, she would fight this.


Thank you so much 💜💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: mandira2

Mere aakhon se Ganga jaumna baha diya yaar 😭😭😭 this is the first time I’ve cried while reading a Shivi FF! This story was so beautiful ❤️ Dealing with death is so difficult and seeing our Shivi deal with the idea of death was heartbreaking. Our Raavi is so sweet and fragile that the thought of something happening to her even in a fictional story makes me so upset. What really broke me was when Shiva and Raavi talk about how they want to be the one who God calls first because a single day without the other is hell. This part made me cry because imagining either of them alone in this world without the other feels so wrong… it really crushed my heart.


thank you for writing this painful BUT extremely beautiful story ❤️


Awhhh thank you so much 💜🤍


I wrote another story Always & Forever you can read that one if you haven’t but maybe not today, don’t want to make you cry twice today. 💜💜


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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I can't describe what i felt reading this🥺🥺

I am a crying like hell❣️❣️

Will love to read the epilogue 😘😘


Awh don't cry 💜

I will post the epilogue soon 🤍🤍


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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Kfof

It was so beautiful❤️


Thank you darling 💜


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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

This was so beautiful! I was so scared it was going to end in heartbreak, but the fact that Raavi made it out healthy had me whooping!


And Shiva, her chattan, right there for her the whole time, taking care of her and himself, oof!


That conversation they had, about life being short, I think my heart broke a little at the emotional impact, but it is so beautifully written I'd definitely read this again!


Please have a happy epilogue, please please!


Thank you so much darling 💜


No heartbreak this time. I wanted a happy ending for them, they went to hell and back during those months.

Shiva was the one that gave her strength to fight, a shoulder to cry on when she felt the fear, her everything.


I promise this epilogue will be happy 💜


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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

While reading the whole OS my heart was scared if it is not going to be a happy ending. I'm literally sobbing after reading this.

Also how beautiful it is to have someone like Shiva all along with you to support you and assure you that everything will be okay

It's very heart touching❤️

Waiting for the epilogue

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Omgg how can you do this to me ? 😭

I'm literally crying like a hell from the starting of the OS.


This SHIVA and RAAVI literally are everything. Shiva being the strongest, caring, her chattan pandya and Raavi being dari, sehmi hui si bacchi. No matters what happened his chattan pandya is always there for her. Everytime when she needs him.

Also that who goes first made me cry so much 😭

This is literally so beautiful that I can't describe in words. This is one of my most fav. You penned down your thoughts so beautifully. So are damn talented man. 😭 This is so painfully beautiful 😭❤️❤️

Looking forward for more. 👀😌

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

While reading the whole OS my heart was scared if it is not going to be a happy ending. I'm literally sobbing after reading this.

Also how beautiful it is to have someone like Shiva all along with you to support you and assure you that everything will be okay

It's very heart touching❤️

Waiting for the epilogue


Everyone deserves a partner like Shiva in their lives❤️

I hope the epilogue is going to make you happy ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Heer_0905

Omgg how can you do this to me ? 😭

I'm literally crying like a hell from the starting of the OS.


This SHIVA and RAAVI literally are everything. Shiva being the strongest, caring, her chattan pandya and Raavi being dari, sehmi hui si bacchi. No matters what happened his chattan pandya is always there for her. Everytime when she needs him.

Also that who goes first made me cry so much 😭

This is literally so beautiful that I can't describe in words. This is one of my most fav. You penned down your thoughts so beautifully. So are damn talented man. 😭 This is so painfully beautiful 😭❤️❤️

Looking forward for more. 👀😌


Awhhh thank you so much for you sweet words, it means a lot ❤️❤️❤️

Shiva was her rock, he gave her strength, he gave her a shoulder to cry on, he gave her a reason to fight.

I will post a little epilogue tomorrow ❤️


I posted a story called Always & Forever a little while ago it falls in the same category, emotional.


hihi writing the next story now 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

I currently work in oncology, so I can relate to this, this was so beautiful!

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